The author completely disappointed me when he allowed the main character to being forced to marry a women of a royal family. If this was anything else he would fight back and not allow himself to be pushed around but since it involves a beautiful women he just accepts such treatment. His excuse is that since the women he likes is pushing for this (its his girlfriends friend, and that friend has a powerful family that can protect him) he will just go through with it but that reason is a load of bs. Then their is a trial land and in it is are steps the out pressure on the soul body. However the author once again decides to bs it and have his former fiance gets to the 25th step. This wouldn't be a problem if her Cultivation wasn't a major realm lower (main character is a Martial emperor and she is martial king) and the fact the main character at the 25 step bones are creaking. How could a non body cultivator with a lower cultivation reach a step someone who's body has reached stage 7 in a god level technique bones creaking? Even then the main character can only reach step 30 without relying on the pressure of his bloodline. Oh another thing is the author can't decided on whether the main character of a genius or hard working / persistent. Don't get the wrong he can be both and most of the time that is the case. However one s*upid thing the author does is during breakthroughs sometimes the main character will continue trying to hit the barrier countless times even throwing up blood and injuring himself. This coupled with how his body cultivation technique makes his body as strong as those more than an entire major realm higher makes it seem like his talent is a joke. Their are a few people who have higher cultivation from the rich families supposedly due to having plenty of resources. However they still have to breakthrough the barrier as well and resources don't help with that. Supposedly the main characters talent his higher than them so how are they with far weaker bodies cultivating so fast when even he sometimes barely breaks through the barrier because of being persistent and having a strong body? The author already has shown how hard working he is so this breakthrough persistence is actually just lowering the quality of the novel as it just doesn't makes sense. I mean 45 days of continously trying and failing to breakthrough the barrier from Martial Saint 2 to 3, is this a joke? Lastly forbidden demon techniques. They are honstely the most ridiculous and dumb addition ot the novel. One of the main characters enimes loses to the main character, so he practices a forbidden demon path techniques. Basically the guy has to go through a period of pain that makes him feel like his hearts being eating by bugs or something, every so often (don't remember time period but its not everyday.) This had led the guy to breakthrough from peak low saint (3) to peak high saint (9) in just 6 months. The main character went through some body tempering bath before that requires a body and soul storng enough to do. Not only that its consider on of the most painful methods and all he got was a single realm breakthrough (it says it makes him closer to dao of heavenas it made his body perfect but as long as you become a martial god you get that anyways. Sure becoming a martial God if difficult but he already has a dao seed which makes him guaranteed to due so very easily and fast.) To show how ridiculous that is the main character used some special resource to breakthrough martial saints 3 to 6 in 3 months (sure much of the time was collecting it but still.) This resources is so precious even the greatest families only have a 100 pieces every generation. The main character was discovered something no one new that one develops an imunnity to the stuff after using so much of it. Yet with this demon technique all he this antagonist has to go through is lots of pain to make rapid progress. The main characters body cultivation techniques causes lots of pain every day when he cultivates. This is just a way to keep people of the same generation relevant as by now he has surpassed them all. The main character ha a the op broken dao seed but without enormous talent merging with it would fail plus it took an expert 1, 000s of years to make it. Yet this forbidden devil path technique is easy to use and readily available with the only side-effect something most high level secret Techniques already have. Somfar no side-effect like limiting his future has been mentioned which is ridiculous. Also the main character has some mental issues. Their is a situation were he is forced to trade (its more like extortion (she threatened to alert his enimes if he didn't agree)) certain things to some women, who is by far the most annoying character introduced yet. Anyway afterwords he believes he owes her to many favors because she left a formation that hid him from enemies? If anything that writes of the previous situations of forcing him to trade at most. Not to mention what she got out of the trade for surpasses what he got in value, considering one of the things she wanted was his True God blood which only he has in the entire world anymore. Even then his enimes find him and once again he almost dies only to just escape for the umpteenth time. No doubt if this has been a man (instead of a beautiful women) he would become life and death enimes, killing her in the future...

Later on the author gives his brother a ridiculous power up than has no explanation. The brother goes to some deadly place for a year and some how comes out absurdly powerful without a single leap in cultivation realm. He hasn't comprehend any of the five element or any other means of improvement other than supposedly constant life in death leading to a absurd power. I mean he easily killed a enemy with just a normal attack when it would require the main character to use one of the five elements to due the same at the same cultivation realm as the main character. Since when did just constant fighting increase the power of someone like this? Not to mention the main character has the more powerful chaos qi, is also a body cultivator (and the technique he used allows him to open the 8 gates and multiply his power) which raises his strength even further and he has the True God bloodline which multiples his power even further... Am I the only one who thinks something isn't adding up?

The authors ends up complete runing his novel with that antagonist who used the bs demon transformation technique. It feels like he is one of those protagonist with a cheat system in those popcorn novels getting abilites he shouldn't be able to. They finally end up fighting and the it ends up a draw. Somehow he (a human) ends up with a demon bloodline at least stronger than the 3rd strongest demon race members same generation. The demon bloodline comes from their ancestor the Demon god (an equal total he True God bloodline ancestor), the Zhan family (not the current fake one) created a way that could give a fake (incomplete (can only can reach rank 10)) version of their bloodline to fellow humans, yet a simple technique of planting worms in his heart can give such a powerful demon bloodline to a human which is a completely different race? Yes the 4 divine beast did give their bloodline to humans but that was done by the bloodlines progenitors, the divine beast themselves not through a technique... Even then this is bs the main character got the inheritance of the each of the divine beast, and the true God (sure he hasn't used the true God one yet but its still that shouldn't matter considering the above.) He some how comprehended some the 5 elements (and even how to fuse two) which is impossible for half step pure yang cultivators without help from someone like the divine beast (the main character got help from the divine beast inheritance (and a chaos seed natural treasure, which is why he was able to comprehend the 5 elements so fast and learn how to fused two...) Then it turns out he got the demon gods inheritance which just sounds ridiculous. The True God who fought for the humans to free them from ens*avement wouldn't let humans without his bloodline try to get his inheritance (only his descendents.) Yet the demon god who looked down on humans for being born weak and wished ens*ave all the human race allowed a human to be his inheriter? It feels like the author couldn't accept writing a non human powerful antagonist...