1. The Mother of Su is near death and MC doesn't know what to do and asks desperately Doctor for advice. The Doctor directs him to the Sage.

But f*ck turns out MC actually knows about him and are best friends. Which makes no sense, if he knew about the miraculous doctor, why ask in the first place?

2. He met a girl in a Club and actually tells her some his secrets and easily divulge his identity of a Soldier! Like WTF? Who pours out their heart out to a person they just met and falls madly in love? I believe in love in first sight but this is ridiculous... How could a Soldier/Expert heart be swayed so easily?

3. The Ye Family father must be pretty terrible, even if a good father already got another Woman even when his wife hadn't fully died yet. He should know some sensibility even if the new Woman was caring.

4. The beginning was terrible but Su gave a sorta good impression, being cautious, emotionally tired, it made sense for her to hate the absence of his sister, but she took it too far into b*tch mode. All we got is that "He gave a stature of a soldier and she shut the door." Seriously? Can't you write it better? Maybe say "she's had a lot of pursuers and harassment's in these perilous times that she thought he was one of them as well." Give the Character logic for acting that way. It would make even more sense on why she was cold to him. This isn't the only time it's happened. It happens a lot in this story.

5. Yehzi is in fact a good girl and humble, but her drama background was too forced. She appears like a girl who hates her family and a victim when in reality her family was not bad. Though disgustingly s*upid, they do love her. Yet here she is like "I would rather be poor." Though she had unmatched confidence in MC, she almost went crazy when he was sent to Prison when he's obviously in control. Just forced drama. What's worst MC even praises the family for "not being ordinary people." When he's clearly above them.

Thats why I hate CNs like these. Are they below or above you in status or not? The Author puts them in a high pedestal but at the same time to MC they're Ants. Which are they then? The writing is just not clear. Nope the MC actually super weak.

6. The Author even immediately gave MC the "Heavy-injury plot" to weakened him a bit but also an excuse to get overly powerful later on. (Though I actually don't hate that and love it, but it was really forced and should had been one of the first things mentioned.)