Soul of Negary

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Heed my call! O’ Dragon of Eternal Sin, the Progressive Disaster, the Forerunner, the Land of Eternal Peace, the Flames of Soul Burning, He Who Owns The Deep Soul, the Sound of Origin, the First Cause of All Things, the Principle of Circles… o’ great Negary, your servant calls for your return!

Within the darkness, someone was harmoniously chanting, he was smiling, as he knew he would finally become one with his God.

And all of this, came from the remnant soul that was deceived to travelling to a different world and had his Protagonist Aura stolen.

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SON
奈格里之魂
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Rextraos
Rextraos rated it
September 11, 2022
Status: c317
The first 250 or so chapters (Rough estimate - didn't bother to check) are built upon original story elements and unique concepts I've either not seen in another novel or well-executed in comparison.
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Soul virus, higher form evolution, exploration of personality traits and what makes someone a human etc.

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4.8/5. But it all went downhill for me when it turned into fanfiction, the SCP arc is without a doubt one of the worst betrayals of expectations I've ever had, quite frankly it should be considered a crime to disappoint your readers that much after setting up a concise and immersive story like that.

If you had told me someone else was responsible for the mess that is the SCP arc and the original author had for whatever reason stopped writing just before then I would probably believe you. Damn, what the hell happened?
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cpzombie
cpzombie rated it
February 24, 2022
Status: c296
It's about a remnant soul that goes through different worlds to gain strength using disease powers. It sounds great based on that, but it is a bit of a mess. I liked the first two volumes, the third started losing me a bit, and I'm about halfway through the fourth without much desire to read further.

The power systems are all over the place with some being underexplained while others are explained to the point that it introduces inconsistencies later on.

I like the main character, but volume 4 is based on... more>> SCP foundation and is a bit of a random mess imo. That goes for most of the story at this point though, so I'll probably just leave it here. <<less
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bakaemon
bakaemon rated it
January 19, 2022
Status: c100
This novel is good at some part at the beginning, where the main character pretended to be a god. His exploit is thrilling and the story showed how good of being an evil god with magnificent tent**les was. But it quickly went downhill after the battle of Paladin and Chris the Great Adventure. The plot after that is copy-pasted from Dark Souls game with the first flame and abyss concept. The MC became unbelievable strong and everything he does now favored him, the plot escalated to the point of no... more>> return with power balance threw out of window. Also old characters also being abandoned and out to the bin.

In conclusion, this novel is my imagination simulator. Sometime my imagined fantasy story went to tr*sh and quickly discarded because of my uncontrollable urge to escalate my plot, thus making me unable to guide any of my story to the end. This novel, may not able to end well at this pace, is not worth to waste my time on it. What a waste, I'm really disappointed. <<less
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Rambira
Rambira rated it
November 14, 2021
Status: c67
The concepts in this story are interesting and quite well executed! I read every chapter with interest, and am very curious what else is to come! Like the power scales is going up astronomically, so I wonder how the story will keep up egagement. The writing style is a bit dry, and this is definitely not a character focussed story.
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Liero Dirlewanger
Liero Dirlewanger rated it
April 2, 2021
Status: v2c62
If I could i'd give it 3.5 stars, but I preferred to give it 4 since NU ratings tend towards the extremes.

This novel is alright, the protagonist is basically a fragmented soul which blobbed with other souls. It resembles Overlord a bit, with it's focus on the side characters, although the MC here gets more screen time.

What I don't like is that sometimes the side characters are uninteresting, although this is more of an issue with the first volume, it still happens later on. Thankfully, it focuses on them for... more>> 1-2 chapters at most, and it's always heavily related to whatever the MC is doing, since the MC likes manipulating others to do things in his interest.

Volume 2 is a lot better than volume 1 in my opinion. This novel is no masterpiece, but if you want to read an evil protag novel and already read the best ones, then I think you will enjoy it. If you don't like evil MC then don't read it, since the character resembles leylin from WMW with his extremely interest centered personality <<less
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WallEyeKnee
WallEyeKnee rated it
June 13, 2023
Status: Completed
After the 2nd arc, the whole novel became Author's chunibyo diary of some sort. He was out there writing all sort of nonsense that doesn't make sense. You are introduced to a new character every chapter and the worlds are so muddle up at one point you can't tell whether it's up or down.

I am tired but I some how managed to MLM to the end. The story has so much potential than it was I don't know a whirlwind, something can't be unseen, I am embarrassed he actually wrote... more>> some of the things he wrote,

Anyway Killer J best character, I felt like the author want to be Killer J through out the novel anyway, He was the best written one. <<less
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EFermi
EFermi rated it
September 5, 2022
Status: --
This novel starts exceedingly great. At first it seems to be a superb dark fantasy built on the foundation of Dark / Demon Souls game series, but with only a small amount of borrowing.

Unfortunately, as the novel progresses, the quality takes a dive down to the depths of a Mariana trench. The second world is passable, even if a bit mediocre, the third world is definitely below average, and when he gets into the SCR world (you'll know what this is if you have the patience to read up to... more>> this part) it turns into a mess. Honestly, if you want a good impression, read until Negary leaves the Flame world, and then drop this novel. Rarely have I seen a story that gets from being so good to being near-unreadable in such a short span. This sucks. <<less
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Taffyman
Taffyman rated it
August 25, 2022
Status: c334
Vol 1 and Vol 2 are very engaging but entering Vol 3 MC becomes too powerful and basically no longer has to struggle with the challenges he is presented, he doesn't even have to fight at this point. Warlock of the Magus World and Reverend Insanity are way better because MC needs to struggle to improve.
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Unlike here where the MC has reached such perfection he can literally hypnotize everyone except a literal god into becoming his clone, which is a fairly boring concept for me. Reading about how "perfect" and "charming" Negary is gets old too.

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This problem becomes even worse in Vol 4. Vol 4 is also confusing and draws on a lot of popular media, which I find distasteful.
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Gsichtselfmeter
Gsichtselfmeter rated it
July 27, 2022
Status: c475
This is a mess, but it becomes fun to read after you know which parts to skip. Every "world" is split into three parts: Negary builds up its forces, then some extremely messy explanation about the rules and laws of magic and physics and "origins" happens, and then the world battles to a conclusion. The first part is always the best one, then the explanation can be directly skipped and then the world battle conclusion can be skimmed -- did you like the worlds inhabitants? Follow their epic battles. Don't... more>> care? Skim read it for the important parts.

It really is all about selective reading. And if you do, you get rewarded by a very fantastic and interesting story about a characters striving to simply better him/itself to become the most perfect life form in the multiverse.

The worlds are creative, the whole "battling the protagonist" is often cool, characters wallow in misfortune and then there is Killer J, who brings messy to a whole 'nother level.

It is a mess, but boy can it be fun! 4* <<less
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Uhoh_
Uhoh_
January 1, 2022
Status: c208
At the start of the novel, I noticed that the writing does more telling rather than showing. I don't know if the translation is just bad but it's extremely awkward then. It also keeps changing from first to third point of view. As I reached to chapter 50, I noticed that the writing has so many filler paragraphs.

The start of every volume and new world was definitely exciting. Discovering new things, new rules, new characters are fantastic. Maybe it's just me but I skimmed like 50 percent of this with... more>> scenes between characters not directly related to negary taking up most of it. They were just incredibly boring, because we know they're insignificant. It's not worth of my time to go through them in my mind.

In the end I dropped it because I just kept getting burn out and I have to take break to read different novels just so I can have the motivation to read it again. Definitely not my cup of tea. For those opposite of me, I recommend it though. It's still good. <<less
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