This is written like how our MC talks. Very fast and very impulsive. There are extra details that are unnecessary, confusing, and leaves you thinking about if there will be a continuation.

Our MC kept eating cookies, no idea what that means. Our MC is suddenly a transmigrator, no idea how that was necessary. Our MC developed a modern voice record and runs a “general store”, no idea how that’s important.

Our MC being a money-lover is more of an afterthought to the story. This is villainess-heroine-annulment story with a minor twist.

Honestly,... more>> if the author took away like a third of the story and refined the remains, this would’ve been a better short story. <<less

"Money never betrayed me"

Ahhh such a sweet girl. I liked the character a lot. She was charming in her greed and straightforwardness and frankly just plain better than 90% of the female leads in these novels, especially those that out white lotus the white lotus.

Had to take points off for low quality writing, a bit of repetitiveness and trying to do too much in too short a story. It's still a fast fun read and certainly worth it.

BWAHAHAHAHA! That was HILARIOUS! I LOVE a good MC who knows who she is, what she is doing, and is in charge. Girlfriend is all about "Full speed ahead, and d*mn the torpedoes!" - mostly because the torpedoes are what she's going for.

This story used the same formula of engagement cancellment with a bit of plot twist in the end. I think the author wanted to make this story different from common otome game story but unfortunately, his/her attempt didn't make any sense.

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Spoiler

Surely, the prince cheated with other girl but his fiancee was also the same. She already hooked up with MC's brother before officially broke her engagement with the prince. Also, was it that easy to engage with neighboring country crown prince since she was a foreigner?

And as a princess of neighboring country, how could MC make a commotion in another country without any consequences? Moreover, MC's brother technically snatched the prince's fiancee away illegally. Isn't this enough reason to wage a war between 2 countries?

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Ah, well, it was a bit s*upid. Like, there was barely any plot without holes. I don't expect an oneshot to have perfect plot but this one had a percentage of 80% holes, 10% plot and 10% useless stuffs. I swear to god, the plot twist was the biggest hole in the story while Canan's HE was the second biggest one. And the revelation was literally the most s*upid thing ever.

But anyway, for a story which took me 5 minutes to finish, I did get a laugh out of it... more>> It was mostly cause how audaciously s*upid the plot holes were but MC's savage remarks about Judy played a part too. Aside from those lines, everything she said was s*upid. The translation was really good though. I thank the tls for working hard. <<less

What can I say? The story is very short. The progress of the story was initially interesting and nice but it kept on adding useless information and story was too focus with the "gotchu" moment. Overall, it was a nice twist to the broken engagement kind of story but doesn't really give you satisfaction to both the face slapping and anger.

great little story, I really like the way the FL think, though it's quite shallow as the story is short but she's right up my alley. ^^ 4/5 recommended