I'd give this a 4.9 if I could. Why not a 5? Because it ended before I could get diabetus off how disgustingly sweet the couple is!

I want to read about them being so disgustingly lovey dovey that even the King worries about his Knight Commander's priorities! Were the Knight Commander takes out his pent up frustration of being away from his wife too long (more than a day) out on the poor souls that make trouble for his Kingdom!

It didn't even end telling me if their lovey dovey-ness led... more>> to lots of children, who also ended up getting disgusted and embarrassed with their parents' pure love for each other!

*Writhes on the ground from insufficient sugar intake* <<less

a very short one-shot, lovey dovey story... the protagonist retains her memories and remembers that she reincarnated to the world of the game she played before... the misunderstanding between her and her husband is pretty cute and the reactions of other characters are quite interesting as well... recommended if you look for lovey dovey couple story...

It feels more like a first chapter for a short series (3-4 chapters maybe?) than a one shot.

I know that the author note says that plot doesn't matter and all that, but it ends so abruptly without resolving much, or explaining anything.

I mean, it takes time to say that it's an otome game and that the main character's husband is one of the possible targets for the heroine (as well as the father, which is a bit disturbing considering age difference, but there are weirder situation in doujin games in... more>> japan, so why not).

The problem is that it is stated that the husband is actually completely in love with his wife already, so much so that he is the one that forced the marriage, rather than being a political marriage to promote the father into a general (like the plot of the game indicated and the main character believes).

If so, how did he become a possible target?

It's not like it's a complete garbage or anything like this, but it definitely feels like a rough draft of something the author decided to not actually make into an actual story and published mostly as is instead of scrapping it. <<less

Dear fellow fellow readers who are looking for a little fluff,

I only have one thing to say about this one-shot; I wished it was longer. Although, it was very pleasant to read, I felt like it was too short. Author-san, I need more of this fuwa fuwa-ness.

Sincerely,

Yours Truly

Its too short. Well that is what you expect from a short story. But it will be better to make it 3-4 chapters atleast to make us satisfied from sweetness. The couple is so cute and a killer of single bitter people. I want to read more of there interactions. Its really is too short. So im short of a star in this rating as well. XD

Lovey-dovey stories are nice and all, but I've just read it for the second time and I couldn't help but be distracted by the loose ends and the way otome games are portrayed. ... more>>

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I have not seen a single otome game where the MC even tries to get together with a married man or vice versa. At most, when it's an older guy, he'd be divorced or a widower.

The MC has supposedly played the game a lot in her previous life and yet has come to a scary conclusion like that... Has she never gotten a happy ending that she can't tell that her husband is deeply in love with her?

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This story is so sweet. Sadly, it was too short for me. I wish it could be a little longer, maybe until the appearance of the saint. It would be interesting to read MC and the saint's showdown.

A lackluster piece with no sugar. Sweet? What sweet? Short story? What short story? Just a few paragraphs of... meh. Try it yourself.

Cute but super short. I would’ve wanted the author to at least lengthen it to have a solid story.

Its so cute it will give you diabetes but it is too short. Its' as if you only get the beginning but there is not a true conclusion.

Sweeeeeeet!!!! I am so disappointed that it doesn't have a continuation but I guess I would have died from sugat overdose had there been more chapters.

Well there is no actual "plot", it's about the female MC trying to win over the male MC, which is absolutely cute and fluffy. Ah~ the lovey dovey scenes~

I really recommend this short-story, it doesn't take that long to read it and enjoy the taste of sweet, sweet romance :3

A super cute story. I like the male lead and the female lead is also interesting. One disappointment though- It's a oneshot. This has a lot of potential. I want to see a scene where even their child is weirded out because they're too sweet