Rebirth in One Piece as Deputy Captain

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Lin Tian, who had reincarnated into the world of One Piece ten years ago met Garp, who was on duty to eradicate pirates, and become his student.

In the past ten years, Lin Tian has lived his life as a Marine Soldier and has experienced many amazing adventures and battles in the Grand Line.

However, due to the World Nobles incident that shook the world, he became rebellious against the Marine until seriously injured.

He escaped and met Luffy, who had formed a small pirate crew, and became Luffy’s vice-captain in that pirate crew.

He returns to the Grand Line and begins a new journey with Luffy as his captain.

Lin Tian became accustomed to playing the role of a vice-captain who always made plans, had unreliable captains, and always acted before thinking what exciting things would happen…

Associated Names
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One Piece Deputy Captain
重生海贼王之副船长
Related Series
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Recommendations
God Of Soul System (1)
Super Card System (1)
Recommendation Lists
  1. Male Protagonist
  2. fanfict

Latest Release

Date Group Release
03/26/24 System Translation c530
03/23/24 System Translation c529
03/22/24 System Translation c528
03/20/24 System Translation c527
03/20/24 System Translation c527
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03/13/24 System Translation c524
03/10/24 System Translation c523
03/08/24 System Translation c522
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03/04/24 System Translation c521
03/04/24 System Translation c520
03/01/24 System Translation c519
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Sh1n_00
Sh1n_00
Jan 29, 2021
Status: c10
I can't give this anything more than 3 stars and anything less for two reasons.

The first being a good reason, this is still only up to chapter 10 so still a lot of potential for this novel to get better and improve since it is still early.

The second is the bad, this is hard to read for those first couple chapters that are out and I mean hard. The translation/english is pretty broken at times and going along with that the MCs interactions with Garp are too strange it's like... more>> they can't speak normally and have to say "smelly brat" or "old bastard" every time they talk to each other.

But I still have hope that maybe farther into this things get patched up more and straightened out, this looks really interesting and has potential to be good. <<less
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fightready2
fightready2
Dec 30, 2021
Status: Completed
Note: At this point, I have read up to 166 translated chapters, 334 MTL chapters, and skimmed through the rest so my opinion is subject to change if new information pops up.

For the first section of the story, I was anticipating what story the author was going to tell. Based on the summary, the story was going to be a complex one with a protagonist that has depth. Unfortunately, that was different from the final product.

Three things to beware of that might be solved with the translation are action, pacing,... more>> and character interactions. Pacing is the least likely to be fixed as it is difficult to justify how much the author includes, doesn't include, and speeds past in a blink and you miss it kind of way. That leaves action and character interaction. The action only serves to get from point a to point b with character interaction being used to 'justify' how the author sets up the characters in proportion to each other despite the little weight they hold.

After the initial summary, the protagonist's inclusion actively works against the story. This is despite his apparent absence for the majority of the story. Different from fanfictions that try and spin their own narratives around their protagonists, this one actively tries to have its own out of the way from the second the original story begins.

Not going to lie: the story suffers from major story friction where the events of the story do not match what the world and the reader says should happen. Personal recommendation is to read another fanfiction instead. (Super Card System pulls off what this ending tried to do but better at the cost of a weaker foundation. Of course, you are free to your own devices as this is only a personal opinion.) <<less
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