Rachel’s Sweet Surrender

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“I love everything about you. And that includes your entire digestive system .”

‘Don’t open your eyes, Rachel’, she whispered inside her head. ‘Don’t open your d**n eyes.’ But still, she couldn’t keep herself in the end. She opened her eyes and she was greeted by the most handsome face she had ever wanted to see in her entire life, only a few inches away from hers!

“Hi!” Melvin greeted with a smile.

Then without any preamble, she just heard herself speak. “Will you marry me?”

She almost slapped herself. How could she ask him that thing when they had only been together again for only a few minutes after eleven years of not seeing each other?

“Yes, Rachel,” Melvin answered. “I will marry you.”

Okay. Now, what?

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08/31/21 star-gazer c5
08/31/21 star-gazer c4
08/31/21 star-gazer c3
08/31/21 star-gazer c2
08/31/21 star-gazer prologue
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chande
chande rated it
April 15, 2022
Status: Completed
Can't believe that this story was 16 years old by the time I wrote this review. Time really flew. Now onto the review.

What could I say, I really didn't like ML in this story. He told MC that he loved her since their time in high school but there he was, having girlfriend one after another even after knowing that MC liked him from their friends. Then he kissed her before the graduation and left MC just like that without any explanation.

If you say MC herself also never confess to... more>> ML; who the he** would confess to a man who ignored her all the time and also already had a girlfriend? Just to be thoroughly heartbroken? But I really wanted to smack MC's head when she turned silly after meeting ML again. I mean, don't let him came to your life again that easily, please?

On the other words, ML was sucks. MC was also no better because she strung along one of her suitor for years without really rejecting his advances while she clearly wasn't interested. So yeah, maybe they really suited each other. <<less
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