Pendekar Cambuk Naga

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Dragon Whip Master
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02/24/19 BujangTL v1c2 part1
02/24/19 BujangTL v1c1 part2
02/24/19 BujangTL v1c1 part1
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The loner
The loner
February 24, 2019
Status: v1c1
Your translation quality is quite superb and the novel seems interesting as well..

it's hard to judge for now, but it seems the plot is quite complex and the MC hasn't shown up yet.. However, in my opinion, the genres are more suited towards history rather than fantasy..

if I may, here is a few suggestions from me :

... more>> - put sound effect in between star symbol (eg : *sriingg..*, *fwoosh..*, etc)

- use English as the title when you put in on a site such as Novelupdates

- avoid introducing lots of character on the early chapter.. That is, if you're the author.. Or else, if it's possible, make a slight change about it..

why would you put a name to a character that will be died in a couple of paragraphs? If that character would be significant later, just introduce him later when it matters..

if it isn't possible, you may try other Indonesian novels and coax the author to publicize it on a wider audience/reader..

If it's not for copyright issues, I believe that lots of Indonesian novels can compete with other novels in here..

I really appreciate your efforts to introduce Indonesian novels on an open site such as NU, and I hope you can have success on it..

While I also interested on it, my English proficiency isn't as good as yours, and more importantly, I'm just too lazy for doing it.. <<less
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