Paying Dues

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When Old Beast runs into Bad News, it’s not love; it’s karmic dues.

A certain bottom encountered two scum tops in a row, one worse than another.

Ex-ex-boyfriend had a pair of slender peach blossom eyes and was a master at getting around. In the month they were together, there were twenty-seven days of cheating. Yup. In February. Of a common year.

Ex-boyfriend was a 190cm, big-dicked, looks-chasing male chauvinist. After they slept 18000 times, he pulled up his pants and said, “To tell you the truth, I have a virg*n complex.” Before leaving, he even tossed out, “Oh, right, too much c*m makes poison, you be careful now.”

The bottom cried his eyes swollen. Slapping the bed with gritted teeth, he decided to get revenge.

Hence, he used ex-ex-boyfriend’s photo to seduce ex-boyfriend on social media, exchanging nudes and flirting aggressively every day.

Ex-boyfriend sent the bottom polite invites to come do it 108 times and was blown off by him 108 times. Lying alone on a huge double bed in a hotel, as he jerked himself off lonesomely, ex-boyfriend gritted his molars and seethed, “One day. One day, I’ll do you.”

Then, one day, the two tops ran into each other in a bar.

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还债
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Recommendation Lists
  1. BL romantic enemies
  2. Daun searching for Enemies to Lovers tropes
  3. Reversible Couple
  4. Quality danmei stories
  5. [BLs I'll read]

Latest Release

Date Group Release
01/30/22 BlackBoxTL c2
01/21/22 yunyun c1
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yunyunyun
yunyunyun rated it
January 21, 2022
Status: Completed
The story is as hilarious as the summary, trust me. A very feel good, short danmei that is mostly vibes and a bit of plot. CP has a cat x golden retriever dynamic. Both are huge fuccbois and terrible partners to everyone but each other.

Ex-ex bf Wen Xunchuan:

  • old
  • mid-aged
  • late 20s but has the energy of a 60 year old boomer with grown kids
  • Tired
  • disillusioned with romance
  • perpetually cranky
  • possibly an alcoholic & cigarette addict
Ex-bf He Linzhou:

  • early 20s and has Early Twenties Energy
  • rich and s*upid fuerdai
  • but actually an angel
  • overthinks his way into falling in love
  • but then just goes with the flow and starts chasing?
  • does whatever he wants really tbh
  • it always gets him in trouble but then he just sajiaos his way out and it works like a charm
Their relationship progresses from enemies with UST >... more>> roommates for Reasons > lovers (question mark) > lovers (period) and there's an underlying bickering couple dynamic throughout. It's also 100% the kind of story where you try to hurt your enemy only to hurt yourself more. Every. Single. Time.

There is a dog who becomes part of their lives for a while who is the cutest, cutest step daughter.

Oh, and Nekocat's cars are amazing.

CWs:

Spoiler

Elements of dubcon/noncon elements in some of the s*x scenes, hurling insults like "you're mental/insane" & "little cripple, " but mostly in a loving and not actually meant to be hurtful manner

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rimirinrin
rimirinrin rated it
April 3, 2023
Status: Completed
After hurt by his ex-ex and ex, a certain shou decided to take revenge by pretending to be his ex-ex and tried hooking up with his ex. Two ex-es met each other at a bar and were drawn to each other.

It's a switch couple which is sooo good. No matter who tops or bottoms the smut are all so good. Both of them have s*x friends prior to meeting each other so the situation actually feels real. He Lin Zhou is a golden retriever liked guy. He's really tall at... more>> over 190cm, good looking and rich (but just plain simple minded lol). But he has a warm personality and I love him so much. Wen Xun Chuan is pretty faced with seductive peach blossom eyes. He is super coquettish and seductive in bed too.

The whole novel was very light hearted and humourous. No deep plot or whatsoever but kept me going at it because I love their interactions. Dare to say it, dare to do it double gongs are so tasty. By the way, the intro about scum x scum can be ignored. They're just so sweet together. <<less
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FrostyDragon
FrostyDragon rated it
March 9, 2023
Status: c57
Didn't read the extras (yet).

This is probably around 4.4-4.6 for me - not perfect, but very enjoyable. Agree with the translator's review and description so don't have much to add except that it's a nice read, the author's writing is quite good (read this one because Intoxicated was really good). Kind of a romcom setting, minimal angst, the ML is quite adorable and the world-weary MC is intelligent and kind of cynical, but with a vulnerable side too.

The smut was nice, the author is quite good at writing s*x scenes.... more>> It's nice to have a switch couple for once, and the CP felt like a more realistic gay couple than you often see in danmei, it also deals a bit with real-world issues like coming out of the closet. <<less
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