One Piece Invincible

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He Can extract Devil fruit fragment by hitting someone!!!!!

The stronger the opponent you hit, the more fragments you can extract, and even fragments of God can be extracted!!!!

Lets start our Journey from One piece.

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海贼王之碎片提取系统
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Recommendations
God Of Soul System (1)
The Strongest Hokage (1)

Latest Release

Date Group Release
10/16/18 deadlynovels c29
10/16/18 deadlynovels c28
10/15/18 deadlynovels c27
10/15/18 deadlynovels c26
10/14/18 deadlynovels c25
10/14/18 deadlynovels c24
10/13/18 deadlynovels c23
10/13/18 deadlynovels c22
10/12/18 deadlynovels c21
10/12/18 deadlynovels c20
10/11/18 deadlynovels c19
10/11/18 deadlynovels c18
10/11/18 deadlynovels c17
10/11/18 deadlynovels c16
10/11/18 deadlynovels c15
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WongNungLong
New WongNungLong rated it
October 15, 2018
Status: c1200
Another fanfiction about MC turning up in another world with system. The first two arcs were ok. A couple flaws but nothing major. An interesting take on how a completely overpowered MC dominates 2 anime worlds. However that's it. You can pretty much stop reading there. From the third arc onwards its like a completely different author took over and it just went downhill.

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So the third arc turns from a fanfic about anime worlds to a xuanhuan world during the era of pangu and the creation of humans by nuwa etc. If it's just this it wouldn't be so bad but it's as if a different author took over from here and the MCs personality took a 180. The MC suddenly turns into an arrogant, indifferent to lives young master who did everything based on whether it was fun/amusing or not. Pretty the the first thing he does after getting to the new world is killing and framing provoking a major war between all the races which pretty much massacred over 10 million lives just cause. He literally never met any other living being yet or did anyone provoke him nor did he have to do it cause of the system. He literally just arrives in the new world and starts immediately on causing a war. There's no explanation on why he does it either. The author never mention why, its as if the the author just assumed everyone reading will somehow know that according to legends a war will happen anyways so lets make the MC the mastermind behind it.

Another thing is that the MC enjoyed the entire process of manipulating everything and sitting above the clouds while watching millions of being slaughter each other because of his actions. This is so different from how he was just a couple days back when he was in the Naruto world. In naruto it's explained that his system works by collecting belief to form incense which gives him new powers and makes him stronger so he did everything to fight and protect people so they would worship him. But in this world its as if the author went and forgot about it cause its never mentioned again. Instead the MC goes on and on about how he is the true god and everything exists for his amusement which includes being the mastermind behind wars which destroys millions of lives an annihilating several races (which he does more than once too) for no reason. Not because someone provoked him, not because they threatened him and not because he had to for the system to collect something. He did just cause according to his knowledge it'd happen in the future anyway so he'd just make it happen faster and bigger cause it'd be more fun. He stops caring about whether they are good or bad, instead he keeps going on and on about how he is a true god and the lives of others are no longer worthy of his care. An example is that he caused a flood that wiped out dozens to hundred of villages of weak powerless civilians, and he was like they should be glad to be sacrificed for my plan.

Another thing is the timeskips. He spent less than 5 years in one piece and naruto together but in this third world after spending a week or 2 to killing and framing to cause the war to happen, a couple days for the war to end then boom, 34000 years pass. The time skips become so ridiculous, it's like every other chapter several thousand years pass. For a guy who had trouble waiting so much that the system had to forcibly accelerate time 6 years in naruto so events happen sooner to spending 34000 years doing nothing but wait like it was the most natural thing ever. No mention of how he felt or what he did during the time either. It's like the author once again just assumed readers will work it out themselves again and didn't bother writing why or how.

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Overall just read the first two arcs and drop it there. There's really no meaning in reading further. <<less
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Skoll028
New Skoll028 rated it
October 10, 2018
Status: c4
Another fanfiction! Personally, I've started to get into fanfics a lot, but only if they are good.

This one is kind of ehhh so far though. MC reincarnated (mysteriously, no explanation, just bam, we are there), has a system with 3 main abilities (Devil Fruit, Pills, and something else), and is apparently a towering... 1... meter... tall! (about 3.28 feet btw).

Not a lot of effort is put into the setting, we start out in the same village Luffy grew up in, but the fluidity of the story is okay-ish, if like... more>> reading slightly edited MTL. A lot of terminology and sentence flows are dropped, but if you don't mind that, it's not a bad read. I'll change my star rating if the story gets better later in terms of quality of reading.

TLDR:

Story: 3 (nothing super original, aside from
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ability to have unlimited devil fruit powers

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TL Quality: 3 (edited MTL level, missing terminology, from what I can tell, I hope the TLer can get an editor, so they can give them a hand)

Characters: 3 (nothing unique here, but I'm not very far in yet)

Overall: 3 (being a bit generous tbh, that one person that runs around on NU giving new stories a default 3 star actually got it accurate this time) <<less
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vkg313
vkg313 rated it
October 10, 2018
Status: c19
If you are looking for accuracy, you shouldn't read this.

This is a fanfiction obviously. The writing isn't that great, and feels a bit childish. The translation has some typos here and there too.

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Apparently there are dinosaurs in East blue somehow. And according to the author, people with bounties in the hundreds of millions just wander East blue. And then it went from belli currency to gold and silver coins...I stopped reading One piece after the time skip, but I don't know if that became a thing.

Also, MC is overly OP. He can get and use all devil fruits. No limitations. Unfortunately, he became stupid all of a sudden.

He is getting crew members in a similar order to Luffy as well with the navigator and swordsmen. It is lacking a bit of originality.

He even gave away the healing fruit so far to his one and only crew member. So apparently no one can get in the water on that ship. He says its for her protection, but she is a non-combatant, and if she falls in the water from not being able to protect herself, she'll die anyways.

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It might turn people off that the MC and navigator have Indian names, but I don't mind.

Its an okay read, if you're just looking to pass the time. <<less
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