My Yandere Succubus Daughter is Mommy-Warrior’s Natural Enemy

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—Translator’s Description—
A different adventure novel!

This is the final chapter of the demon king and the heroine!

There are no pretty battles or fiery battlefields. The demon king is dead. That is the end of all perfect adventure novels! That is where humanity’s glory lies!

The end of that era means the start of a new era, and those who belong to this new era quietly appear.

He doesn’t have a sword, but he has a more dangerous and terrifying weapon……

He can’t use magic, but he can get the entire empire to focus their eyes on him……

He was toyed with when he came here, treated as a slave, but in the end, the entire world trembled in fear at his words…….

He’s not the demon king, but they call him the demon king……

However, he is an invincible demon king.

This is a story of love and contention. The jealousy and destructive powers of the women are no less than that of a man. Females’ hearts are set aflutter everywhere he goes. Countless flirtatious eyes are always on him. However, as the man who adopted the succubus daughter of the demon king, he has something more important to do right now.

Raising a daughter isn’t easy for a guy after all.

And if your daughter loves him in some weird way, then not even mom will get to go near her dad.

“Lord Dongqing…… Father……. Darling……”

—Reader’s Description—
He died on an accident and appeared on an unknown world with nothing at hand. After rescuing a little girl, he was, later on, made a slave for trying to protect the daughter of the already fallen, Demon King.

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病娇魅魔女儿是勇者妈妈的天敌
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01/15/19 Wu Jizun v2c38
01/14/19 Wu Jizun v2c37
01/08/19 Wu Jizun v2c36
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01/01/19 Wu Jizun v2c34
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12/17/18 Wu Jizun v2c29
12/11/18 Wu Jizun v2c28
12/10/18 Wu Jizun v2c27
12/04/18 Wu Jizun v2c26
12/03/18 Wu Jizun v2c25
11/27/18 Wu Jizun v2c24
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hphunter
hphunter rated it
March 24, 2018
Status: v1c10
This is a bad novel. It's awful how this seemingly mediocre MC is in the middle of everything happening as he is a nobody, has no conversation skills nor anything that justifies people actually listening to him.

The fact that the world revolves around MC is stupid. The "daughter" trusts this MC because he protected her from being killed (let's not talk how he's faster than the sword blow and how he can reach the girl before she's cleaved) and even accepts calling him father within a couple hours. What? Even... more>> if she wasn't close to her own race it doesn't mean she would be willing to trust the invading, pillaging and murderous race. She's just plot device to make the author pander to his kinky slave incest fetish.

The MC is a rock too. He's put into the middle of the battlefield but he's unnafected by it. Even when his future is not known he hesitates to drink from the same container a chick drank from (and he even writes that he "swears that the liquid on the edge is not water" i.e. He's about to drink her salive) as if the author just wants to write his erotic novel but pretends that there's more than loli succubus growing huge boobs during nighttime.

If you want to fap then maybe there'll be erotic content but if not then you'll end up as a cuck like MC.

Also, Translator adds chapters to Novelupdates while they're still Patreon-only chapters. That's not good. <<less
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Yandere Mania
Yandere Mania rated it
March 7, 2018
Status: v1c5
From the same author as the one who wrote:

"Oh no! After I Reincarnated, My Moms Became Son-cons!"

As usual, the Author simply loves his Yandere & "family affairs" (please refer to the author's previous title for further "details" on my "as usual" comment) and this time, it begins with a "father" and his "daughter" (yeah, you read it correctly). Besides the aforementioned sub-genres, there is also an Isekai element. The MC, right after the mysterious transfer, considered himself as unlucky due to 1> having no cheat or any special abilities (or... more>> so it seems? I still need more chapters to confirm my hunch, but it looks like he was actually "blessed" with some ability, unlike what he claimed) and due to 2> what happened right after he was being transferred into the new universe (he was practically ready to give his "second" life away for a certain cause or reason)

Next, as the title suggested, there will also be a "motherly" (alright, "mother") character (or even "mothers" that is written in a plural form) getting mixed into the MC's family (as of the moment I read this LN, the mother characters have yet to be introduced) and the carnage & competition might ensue consequently (what exactly do the disputed parties compete for? Well you can guess it from the provided synopsis and my review, can't you?)

The "daughter" is apparently not of human-race (and she seems to have "dark" past & secrets befitting her racial characteristic). In addition, there are also two female characters (both are of human-race) as of the fifth chapter of the first volume, one is an absolute ruler with a sadistic tinge mixed in her character and the other one is strong heroine with outstanding capability well-versed in combat and warfare (and with a good nature and traits? Need more chapters to confirm)

Without further ado, do give this series a read! Especially if you have read the author's previous work, for there are some "easter eggs" lying to be found on the series. I hope you enjoy this new, electra-esque (LOL) series which revolves around Yandere and the female's hostility & jealousy! <<less
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hyperlunatic
hyperlunatic rated it
August 21, 2018
Status: v1c55
It feels refreshing to read a well-written novel amongst the trashes and filths that are CN novels and most LNs nowadays. Read it on your own, you gonna either hate it or love it. If you like 3d characters, somewhat decent romance and some territory building then you are in the right place. MY THOUGHT ON THE MC

Well, most the 1-star review here bitch about the MC, that is due to the misleading summary and their expectation. They were expecting the MC to be some uber demon king who... more>> wreaks sh*ts, dominate people and having some Oyakodon s*x with his wife and daughter. They got a normal mediocre MC who act like a gentleman and has the decency to not jump his cute, s*xy, clingy adoptive daughter and his beautiful stoic mistress whose common sense does not exist. Excuse him for not acting like a horndog and having a strong moral fiber in his being. Also, most of the action makes sense. He is, after all, is just a normal slave with no extraordinary power or skill, so if he wants to live, he has to do undignified things. That is typical of being a slave. So I don't see a reason to bitch about it. Besides, he has plenty of chances to jump both his daughter and mistress but won't due to his standard, that is admirable. It good to see an MC that not follow the stereotype of being:

A horndog who thinks with his penis. A retarded motherf**ker who is too stupid to live yet keep living like a cockroach due to plot armor. A mastermind who know it all and play several Xanatos speed chess match at once. An omnicidal maniac who just go around killing people left and right

It's much more interesting to read about regular joes doing great things than an OP character doing great things. Don't get me wrong, it's fine to write an OP character. Just make him challenged. We read stories to see characters struggle and overcome challenges. Although it is cool to read and OP characters overcome challenges with a wave of a hand for the first few times, it gets boring fast. This is unfortunately forgotten by many LN writers nowadays and as a result, created the great pile of Trash known as "Typical Isekai". They also forgot that there are many other ways to challenge a character than just physical challenge. Challenge his mind, challenge his sanity, challenge his relationships and challenge his morals like the author did in this Novel.

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St.Agares
St.Agares rated it
March 17, 2018
Status: v1c8
Very, very interesting.

Unlike our MC in Son-con, our new MC literally got thrown face first into a new world with nothing. No special status, no way train or power up, nothing.

Prior to this our MC was only a secretary, I guess his only power is to bootlick.

Regardless he has to protect his newly acquired daughter in this new world filled with danger.

Too few chapters to really give a well done review, not that I make any of those anyway.

Hopefuly this picks up pace, it's very promising.
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Not Red Yet
Not Red Yet rated it
May 7, 2018
Status: c10
Yeah the description for the novel is a straight up lie except the part that states the MC is useless.

If you don't like authors son-con novel (abysmal also) then you won't like this one.

MC- got stepped on and a foot shoved in his mouth and guess what? He enjoyed it. Even though he seems to be an adult he has no contact with women since most of his monologs are what a horny teenager would say.

Queen- Sadistic and treats humans like actually dogs and such, If it wasn't for the... more>> Warrior girl then I don't doubt that she would've been overthrown already.

Warrior girl (forgot her name) - Seems to not mind what the Queen does since she is a soldier, Her exacts words is "I'm a soldier". Wants to be friends with the little girl she tried to kill and then wonders why the little girl doesn't want anything to do with her.

Leah- the girl our MC 'saves' at the start. Only saving grace of the novel is her, Except her stating MC is her papa after a few hours of conversation she seems to act like a normal child. <<less
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ReadsWebNovels
ReadsWebNovels rated it
April 9, 2018
Status: v1c7
A poorly written soft core fetish novel about a loli succubus and her adoptive "Daddy."

No matter what other reviews say, the author's focus isn't the story. They're practically tripping over themselves to rush through the opening and get to the fetish content, which isn't good for story telling. Additionally, if you've listened to the cringy dialogue of a porno, you know what to expect from the novel overall with how forced everything is.

Content aside, just it isn't written very well.
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Dannie1993
Dannie1993 rated it
July 8, 2018
Status: v1c11
First I would like to say I'm really suspicious of the number of 5 stars this novel got. Going by the reviews with actual words in them the score should be much lower. Seriously I've never seen a novel description lie so blatantly before. Pretty much 90% of it does not fit the novel. It makes it sound very over the top and hints at the fact that the main character is interesting in some way. Both are false.

Also, I'm just gonna say it, the MC doesn't f**k anyone and... more>> there is not that much Yandere stuff. So if that's what you're looking for look elsewhere.

From what I have read so far the novel is VERY slow and kind of boring, with some erotic descriptions sprinkled here and there. The weird part is that the erotic segments seem awkward and out of place and the story wouldn't really change with it removed. Which makes no sense judging by the description and the title.

I skipped ahead to ch40 ish and the story still did not progress much and the few chapters I skimmed through still seemed pretty boring and nothing really happens in them.

The novel seemed like an interesting read and I'm still pretty pissed that the description lied to me. Giving it 2 stars because the story shows hints of promise but for sure it will take many more chapters until it gets there (like at least ch100+ judging by the way the novel is progressing). Personally I don't have the patience for it so I'm dropping it. <<less
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rikuolin623
rikuolin623
October 3, 2018
Status: v2c8
I'm not gonna lie, I love this and I probably will even after everything has been translated. Compared to the other novels, the MC feels grounded. He's weak, he doesn't have any special abilities, nothing. He's not isekai'ed with a class and then kicked out only to gain skill-steal, he doesn't have some op cheats, but you know what he does have?

Balls.

More balls than I ever will and he's rewarded for it with a cute loli and a waifu wife who hasn't realized it. He loses his balls however... more>> when he's confronted with women stripping and his daughter lusting for him, I would too, the responsibilities that comes after it is too much to bear.

Real talk, I like this novel because it has a good blend of everything that I like, little pieces of world-building scattered about, slice of life, character development, femdom (wait what) , and I like incest (in fiction ok?). Also, the issue that many seem to have is that the MC doesn't have the balls to f**k his underaged daughter and an emotionally deprived women with no common sense and has been penetrating demons all her life (if you get what I'm saying (͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) (͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) (͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)).

Look, what I'm trying to say is, is that it's 2AM. Idk wtf I'm saying but look, if the MC f**ks his daughter and his waifu wife'nt the story won't be what it is now. It's like if Kirito wasn't dense and f**ked his harem, it's like if the uhhh... the guy from Infinite Stratos f**ked his harem, it's like if Negi f**ked his class, what would the story be then?

It'll be boring that's what.

Also, when's the last time you've read a story that has an extreme kuudere (without the dere) ?

6/5, would not stay up late again.

edit: why did everyone who read under 20 chapters give it a bad review? HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

Look, honestly, suspension of disbelief is a thing desu. Just enjoy the ride. <<less
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Suzzie
Suzzie rated it
August 7, 2018
Status: v1c20
I don’t know if it’s just me, but I feel like the the author takes extreme pleasure in making his main character getting dominated by other female characters. Overall, the story is pretty slow while some chararacters make you really annoyed. Main chararacter as of so far is a complete disappointment. The synopsis makes him sound omnipotent and all this Anat that, but he’s actually pretty useless.
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TerraEarth
TerraEarth rated it
June 18, 2018
Status: v1 prologue
I would have given this a 4, but the main character can be a prude about the dumbest things. The MC practically acts as if he's allergic to women half of the time. Whenever he sees a naked woman, although they themselves think nothing of the circumstance, the MC will not fail to spill his spaghetti everywhere on the floor and soil his pants in the process while clamoring for clothes to be worn. It wouldn't be far-fetched to imagine that this guy was a Franciscan friar in his original... more>> world. This is incredibly annoying to deal with every other chapter, noone I know would start squeaming over a pair of uncovered breasts.

Other than this nuisance of a character trait, the plot does seem quite interesting, it reads much like a Kingdom Building novel set in a other-world fantasy. If the main character grows some balls anytime soon I might bump up the rating but for god's sake, can we just get over this trope already? Grown men cowering in front of a woman's body, these MC's obviously need testosterone therapy with how spineless they are. <<less
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Renaxan
Renaxan rated it
October 16, 2018
Status: v2c12
First thing, the MC of this novel way to weak to woman, while he's cunning and smart, he's bad when it come to his feeling.

There's almost none yandere aspect so far. Story is about MC who man without power summoned in demon king castle and while try to saving demon king daughter (taking role as daughter), they become spoiler of war for the hero (which in taking role as mom later). Then the story goes on as MC try save his daughter and save the hero as mentally illness person... more>> who try become normal girl.

About character, they are good. Its only me who dislike MC attitude, who is okay being trampled as long he's save. Hero, or rather heroine are emotionless person who try become lord despite only know how to kill. The daughter so attached to MC, doubt there no lust in it.

About world building, seems no magic so far and they hunt demon with sword. Really unique as isekai with demon inside. Idk if magic introduced later since chapel things come in. Plot itself heavyweighted in how MC save trouble and relationship toward other character.

Its enjoyable and cute sometimes, but some MC attitude sometimes make me skimming a chapter. Its just not cup of my tea but I think other person who like reasonable MC are gonna have good time. 4/5 <<less
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Kagutsuchi
Kagutsuchi rated it
December 11, 2018
Status: v1c4
You can only read this novel if you're a masochist. The description is too random and gives a different feeling from the actual novel, Wu Jizun I'm looking at you >_>.

The MC looks like a teenager, no, worse than that, he gets excited from people stepping onto his head. Also, he's made a slave and literally treated like a dog in front of a large crowd.

Overall this novel looks interesting, but the MC is so disgusting that I can only drop it.
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