Same author of The Villainess Does Not Want To Die (TVDNWTD)

This fic is downgrade from TVDNWTD, it is edgier for no reason and have no value, the whole premise is designed to elicit anger and frustration to Reader without any payoff.

Unlike TVDNWTD where characters feels human and the tragedy have built up, this one chuck you head first without any pace or time to process plot progression. Like seriously what the f*ck is the point of writing a chapter everytime the protagonist died to show off other characters emotional... more>> response? It has no narrative value or purpose to the whole story, you skip these chapters and nothing would even changed. Or even better you could skim read every chapter because it is so goddamn predictable in how the author will try to torture their protagonist.

Even the reason why her family is falling apart makes no rhyme or reason, just a bunch of random tragic events without any relationship to each other happening in short period of time that when compounded makes no goddamn sense.

The protagonist is ret*rded and edgy with mental issues without any built up so f*ck her she should just eat bullet everytime she Regress because her whole story has no point. Other characters are either cartoonishly evil edgelord toward the protagonist or frustrating ret*rded little shits with mental developments of 9 years old and emotional response and personality that does not make sense.

TVDNWTD was great at building up her mental issues through proper plot progress so you would actually give a f*ck about her, the people act like actual people and and circumstances are understandable and believable. This is the opposite. If you want to write a tragedy and psychological novel, this is an example of what not to do. <<less

When I saw the title of this web novel, I decided to give it a shot. I expected it to be either funny or depressing. So, which one was it? Depressing. So much so that I thought it might be better if the protagonist just killed everyone and herself, at least that way, neither of us would have to suffer.

She endures what the story calls 'bullying, ' but let's be honest—that's not bullying; it's outright torture. I'm no sadist. While I do enjoy reading dark, suicidal, or depressing themes, I'm... more>> only willing to stick with them if there's hope for things to improve. After reading five chapters, I can't shake the feeling that this story isn't going to get better.

The protagonist spends every waking moment consumed by thoughts of su*cide. That's not necessarily the issue, though it is deeply concerning. The real problem is that she's trapped in her suffering and seems powerless to change anything. This gives me little hope for a happy ending.

I also checked out the descriptions and tags for the author's other web novels, they all look equally depressing and traumatizing. Frankly, I'm not ready to dive into a story that's likely to leave me feeling the same way <<less

I hope more chapters are translated quickly (seriously, I'm willing to take an especially tr*sh mtl right now) because this seems to have potential for.. Something?

Annoyingly good at conveying how shitty this situation is, I couldn't help but think: "Yea, I'd have shot myself by now if I were them." Maybe that's my need for a therapist taking though.

So far it's 5 stars for how effectively emotions are captured, but also this author needs a therapist too or something. They have like 3 things that are all very, very depressing.

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Like the fact she plays Russian roulette till there are only 2 cylinders left, as well as implying this isn't the first time she's done something like that.

What the hell man?

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