Aw.. I'm sad.

The story is written in third person perspective, and since it's oneshot, it didn't tell us a lot of background story and didn't portray much about the feeling between SHF and SL until the last section. However, you could still feel their love through out the story. I feel really numb while reading this truthfully, I can already predict the ending from the start, but I still hope it will end in the other way.

Beautiful.

If I am to use just one word to describe this story it has to be "beautiful". From start to end the story grips you and tears your heart tiny piece by piece.

I really would not mind if author were to write a 200 chapter story based on this one shot.

... more>> The Flow of story is nice although it does get confusing in start because it's a 3rd pov story (story between the leads) while 1st pov is more common.

As tags say it is a tragedy and BE. So keep your tissues close. It's technically double BE. You just keep on hoping it's the other option but your hopes will get crushed again and again.

Happy (Sad/tearjerking) reading. <<less

So good! The way it was written was lovely and beautiful, it touched my heart, made me even shed 3 tears and Im telling you that I rarely shed tears to oneshots. I think the description of SHF trying to reach for something he would never touch again broke my heart the most.

The story is quite literally told by a third person, even so, it didn’t ruin the tragedy between the couple.

A heart clenching story.

At first I was confused until I realized that the author tells the story from a third perspective. I keep hoping that there will be a different ending despite seeing the tag.

But if you love this kind of story and want a double kill (double the heart clenching) I recommend reading Defect before this and just imagined that this is Defect’s sequel.