Water ghost: ？？？Laozi didn't suffer!

This is totally off. It should be 'Water ghost: ??? Don't touch/get close to Laozi!' Nothing about suffering at all.

The pig head usually rushed to the refrigerator, only after emptying it out did he greet Lu Qingjia.

No pig heads mentioned at all, and for some reason the roles were swapped:

The moment this pig arrives, he would rush to the fridge to munch on food, and his only fear would be that the fridge was empty, so there was no need for Lu Qingjia to entertain him at all.

Upon hearing this, the old man eyed him. He looked similar to himself now.

Who's the him?

The boss eyed Lu Qingjia upon hearing this, and right now, there wasn't much difference between Lu Qingjia's image during the day and now.

衣着讲究加上外表亮眼，陆清嘉从来没被质疑过消费能力，当然这会儿也一样，虽然刚刚他才说了声自己身上没多少现金。

第二天早上胖子醒来，精神肉眼可见的好了很多，来到餐厅碰到正吃早餐的陆清嘉。

I couldn't afford something, and they held me back I didn't have the time to come to you

Now this one is quite off, not only did the subject it was referring to change, but even the things that happened. In the translation, the translator made it sound like the sentence was referring to the MC, when it was referring to the old lady instead.

What it should be: She didn't have money to pay for the things she bought and was detained by the shopkeeper, of course she wouldn't have time to go and find you.

revenge on his uncle's death.

Lu Qingjia has an uncle named Lu Ji. Lu Ji was an intermediate player at a game named Horror Game. One day in his teenage years, his uncle came back from the game with ruptured organs after a betrayal of teammate, and so Lu Qingjia swear that he'll take revenge, with his own hand because he loves when he pushed the people he hates straight to hell and watched their despair.

Anyway, because his uncle again and again refused to let him enter the game, he can't enter it when his uncle died so he has to take another measure. He got closed with someone else on reality (our ML), seduce him and got the secret about the game from him even when the ML ain't telling him a dime, because MC can summarize the people thought based on probabilities and facial expression. He broke off with ML after ML refused to take him to the game, but the ML keep staring at him so MC stayed at his homestay until his friend Pan Zhi got in contact with the test of Horror Game and he won and replace Pan quota.

Then he met ML again because ML has a kind of filter in his brain where he thinks that he can be together again with MC once MC got in the game. They're not though, because MC doesn't want ML to curb his desire for revenge, and ML is scared that MC will die if he insist on taking revenge on the uncle's killer. The reason is, once MC knew the clues to the killer, the killer can also knew that MC want/will kill him, because he's an administrator to the game and so he can pry to the secret of heaven (destinies). Anyway, ML is also an administrator in case you're wondering. He managed to become administrator after MC got the evidences to send ML father to prison and thus cutting off bad karma of ML and making him eligible for the positions.

the game is a kind of entity. There's horror game (a black leopard), unlimited flow game, extreme (mtl said so) game, scumbag game system, and other minors one.

The fact that this guy is a genius and is able to plan ahead to clear instances while also act as if he is enjoying a holiday baffled me. And also it's different from the usual clearance method where a person needs to wait for hints to be supplied by the game. It's basically a no-brainer task for him, and that made me relax my mind as well from thinking about the complicated process of clearing an instance. The best thing is, death is avoidable for other players as well. I think so but Im not sure since I have only read to chapter 17.

LQ and his ex's relationship seems to be a bit.. Forced for me, where it is actually ZY who forced him. It's just the impression I have from their interactions revealed so far. I know that it is not the case since ZY is another case of a person with abnormal logic and that justifies his actions I guess. The ones where he deems himself to be righteous hahaha. I am still expecting character development from both of them, ZY especially, I preferred it to be realistic. However, since both of the main characters have a relationship with each other and seems to still hold feelings, I am not sure how the plot will progress.