The biggest flaw in this novel is that the MC is too perfect. I don't even understand why a reincarnation was necessary. In his previous life, he was a genius artist, musician, and businessman.

And he reincarnates to become... a genius artist, musician, and businessman.

He achieves things at a younger age and uses some of his future knowledge for business to become even richer (although it's mentioned that he hasn't reached the point of his previous life despite being a billionaire (or trillionaire in won)) and even more famous.

Oh, and of... more>> course he's perfectly handsome as well.

The writing isn't terrible for the most part aside from those issues, but it's a very anticlimactic story overall.

If there's one thing that really bothers me, it's the romance.

Spoiler

Aside from not being particularly well-written, the age differences are a bit stark.

It's constantly emphasised that his mental age is 50 years older than his actual age, yet he sets up his position as a fiancé for a girl who is six years older than he is after reincarnating.

And while there's fortunately no romance between them when they meet as children, I do think that the timing of when she develops feelings for him was too soon.

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So that part was a bit iffy.

Overall it was decently readable, but ultimately felt like a far worse version of "Forget Management, I Just Want to Spend Money". <<less