I don't know about you, but I measure why a person should be patriotic by how well the country does for the people in a time of peace. That includes the government; how it treats its people, and the society; whether it's worth protecting or not; whether the government's ideals are worth fighting for. This is done by factoring in the personal experience of the character. The patriotism is baseless, considering how every time he meets someone in a position of power, whether in the government or the underworld in China, is a corrupt and crappy character. Furthermore, the government never did anything right for him, and even went after him for vigilantism, unless he threatened guys with a position of power. There are also many young masters trying to kill to him, but failing and not even bothering obtaining info about him after. In other words, this novel showed me absolutely nothing that China is worth patriotic for. In a time of war, it would be different, because patriotism can arise from defending against foreign invaders or invading others. However, China here wasn't in a state of war nor was he fighting or the ideal of China nor are foreign invaders overtly invading.

When he kills an evil japanese boss, he did it in front of the police, then asks, "what crime did I commit?" rendering the police speechless as in they don't know how to respond what crime did he commit. Seriously? I don't know specifically about china, but that could be considered murder and vigilantism, which are considered a crime in certain countries.

Aside from his China Numba One, Foreigners Numba Last attitude, his first actual s*xual experience with the opposite s*x involves raping his Japanese college classmate. She previously apologizes about the Nanjing Massacre on behalf of her people[seems like this is what every Chinese novels dream about], yet he r*pes her. That's like getting a person to apologize genuinely, then spit on them. For whatever reason, she still holds good will for the MC after that; probably due to a heavy dose of his right hand and his eyes. While he did it while drunk, it wasn't like he couldn't have gotten rid of the alcohol initially, since he did use his powers to get rid of his sister's terrible cooking.

His second s*xual contact involves getting a dog-girl blow-jobbing him without the girl realizing what she's actually doing.

Invading a US military base just to assassinate a traitor? And do it in broad daylight and go in guns ablazing? Did the author really think the political ramification of this through? Doing a high profile assassination so blatantly just screams that China did it, considering only governments or powerful secret organizations would have the power to muster high-profiled manpower to do the job. It's like China sent a tactical nuclear weapon to kill the target. Considering the target, it only could only point to China, and that's not including whatever likely recordings as evidence the US should have when he spoke. Jeez, something like this could have started WW3.

And the traitor, who stole 1.2 billion, gave his bank account info just so he wants to die? Why did he speak truthfully? Why did US even bother protect such a person inside a military base in the first place? Why did he not instead live in obscurity like all other protection witness people do?

MC should have killed his first crush long ago. Considering she not only held no goodwill to him from the start, led him into traps, and when that failed, tried harder to kill him. She further fell off into a cult, and started killing others to get more power. Yet the MC still refuses to kill her despite her not having any redeemable trait. First love? So what? He dealt with his emotions long ago.

MC plays around too much when he has antagonists between his fingers. It leads to opportunities for villains to make a comeback, which they sometimes do if he does let them off or sometimes he gets caught off guard when they break out. Such as MC's first crush, who he refuses to just kill despite doing far more evil than other villains.

He can even go as far as kill the innocent people for his loved one.

It was extremly rushed and ramdom girl just suddenly appear and will be quickly forgortten. Like half of them only appear in only 1 arc and never show up again. Moreover due to these randomly popped up girls, the other earlier girls who the author actually develop their characters in a good way dont have enough time to make an apperances and ALSO make them forgotten too.

Some completely unrealistic characters that got on my nerves:

1. 1. Random police lady keeps on wanting to fight the MC when she realises he's pretty strong. Like she literally chased him around shouting at him to fight. This happens really, really frequently.

1. 1. MC and a few other people about to be killed by a serial killer. MC fights the serial killer and is about to finish him off. Then this strong ice girl appears and calls MC a murderer, while protecting the serial killer. MC explains to her that the person she's protecting is a serial killer who's killed many people, but she willfully ignores it and keeps trying to kill MC. What's even more annoying is according to some spoilers she's a harem member. *Eyeroll*

1. 1. The girl the MC used to like told her boyfriend (who's a gangster) to break the MC's legs, for ABSOLUTELY NO REASON, and throughout the story she keeps setting the MC in traps even though he was nice to her the whole time. What the hell?

There's plenty of other annoying characters that I just mentally bar out (*cough* almost all other characters). All characters behave as if they're high on stimulants and it seems like in this world any conflict, no matter how trivial, must lead to someone being crippled or killed.

MC (has already awakened his second star jade-> he is unbelievably strong) and his classmate (a girl) are eating skewers and talking to each other. Suddenly a van halts before MC and his classmate. Some people in black came out and kidnapp MC's classmate before his eyes. They took her to the van and drove the car away. Now MC reacts and follows the van.

NOTE: The people in black are normal people (thugs) and MC is already an immortal cultivator. He is like 10 times faster and stronger then them. He already took out mulitple of this kind of thugs with one punch, as he had only 1 star jade, but he couldn't react in time, as she was kidnapped, like 1 meter before him?

the MC becomes the god of the world, but he can't touch his woman anymore due to being to "Powerful".
some of his close friends and family become the last bosses along the way.
At the end, he is trapped in a time loop that he cannot get out of despite being a god.
Bad time loop story which makes the whole story worthless in the end
If the MC can't live with his woman and even worse, the fox waifu is separated forever from MC, why the author doesn't make the story after thousand years later when the MC can meet with his woman and happy ending
if the MC cant get happy ending its better to destroy the universe and commit su*cide than keep doing loops for eternity.
damned rage inducer story, regret ever reading this novel

In short, MC gets powers out of his ass and wins. But sadly dies and wishes Lin Tong (fox waifu) and Everyone else to be happy, then MC dies... *flips table*

The MC is technically MENTALLY DISABLE him having a split personality is a big misunderstanding. What we call as a dark side was just suppress negative emotion from his childhood experience. In a way to survive all those traumatic bullying he suppress those negative feeling that is why must reader think that MC is dense or a hypocrite who shout justice and peace loving but in reality that is just a side effect from all the bullying he experience.

MC was bullied?

MC first love is a Sl*T and for some odd reason hated the MC she was also the major reason for his school bullying. (Imagine your crush who knows you love her beat you up and have s*x in front of you) I can some how understand the girl's reasoning on why she want to bully the MC as the MC at that time is simply a moving punching bag as a result of sealing all the negative effect that comes from the bullying his emotion are almost null and void and what's left is that happy go lucky attitude and who always aim for world peace.

Like they said be-careful of a cheerful and happy person never you know what kind of darkness is hidden in its heart.

As for MC power up will we can just let PLOT ARMOR take the credit I mean he is called MC for a reason.

I certainly dislike some female counter part especially that rich girl with her air head friend their combination seems unnecessary for the story I seriously hope that the author drop them and forget them since they are what we can call a SUPER EXTRA side characters, Their relationship to MC is vague lets not talk about romance as the MC never once admit that he LOVE them as MC only love 1 person at the moment.

The classmate girl who sit next to MC who chase MC all the way to college has some promise but she certainly needed some serious appearance since she is barely mention in the story (I hope instead of the two girls I mentioned the author can focus with this girl)

The Japanese girl that the MC r*pe in another point of view I can say that their was no R*pe, Why? First the girl was willing, second after the deed was done the girl accepted the MC although we cannot deny that their is racial discrimination but who cares about that this is just a story only a sever hypocrite would shout out racism from a fictional novel. So far this Japanese girl also has a potential to be MC's partner so I hope we stop saying that she was R*pe by the MC.

And last is the FOX girl (Their are other girls in the story but since their relationship with MC is in sister brother level I will not mention them as they rarely appear in the story) this girl is the main love interest of MC honestly I was disappointed as so far she was just like a nanny for the MC. Despite MC saying he loves her their was no romantic scene for them (have they ever kiss? I forgot)

MC was like booom "I am so OP" then got his ass kick and is save by plot armor