the MC was Ill, tired and still has a Gun wound, in the middle of healing but not only that he also has a shooting the next day and the ML was like "I'm bla bla bla with you bla bla bla" and it just ticks me off like let the dude rest man

the ML had amnesia to cover up the memories he soon was able to remember it

I'm disappointed the MC didn't fully explain nor convey his feelings to the ML... It was talked about so the READER understands that, yes, Noah actually means something to the MC - far more than MC ever realizes or admits... But he never explains that to the ML who, imo, really needed to hear and understand it.

He was simping on a man who was 10 years older than him when he was sixteen, I mean I understand cause I like older guys too, but this was crazy and shit. His more of an evil villain most of the times than MCs Lover.

I prefer this story rather than True Star. It's way better in my opinion. Of course there were parts that are just damn annoying: The earlier chapters of the story has so many typos, wrong grammar etc. As the translator didn't edit the earlier ones even though she/he already has an editor. It was really hard to continue reading due to the many mistakes but I persevered knowing from reading the other reviews that it will get better later on. (It gave me a headache.) BUT! It's absolutely worth it!

it seems that his rebirth has something to do with some wierd voodoo the actor was doing in order to gain the affections of this one man who happens to be the mc's ex boss and a kid he saved a while back

Although the MC is supposed to be this op mercenary I did not really get that vibe from him since he tends to panic a lot especially with things envolving the ML

Some of the things that didn't follow thru: 1.) Mason/Haley not knowing Noah's relation with Zii when Noah showed up at Mason's old apartment, yet clearly saying in an earlier chapter that Noah had power within Zii. That entire scene didn't make sense since Mason was working for Zii when he was a body guard. Noah should have been fine if confronted by Zii agents. 2.) Why would Ashley stay with Aaron after getting out of the bunker and knowing they couldn't open the safe? I think the author was going to make it like a CP like relationship since there was detail about how Ashley was looking at Aaron before they went on the mission, but didn't follow thru. As it is, it would have made sense for Ashley to escape the bunker with Aaron, but go back to Zii to explain what happened since she seemed to respect and admire Mason up to this point. 3.) MAJOR: It was not explained fully what ritual Haley did in the bas**ent or more about Rachael who sold "it" to him and has an accessory for it. For Mason not to even be curious about it when he just jumped into someone else's body was odd. 4.) Given Mason's occupation, why didn't he look into whom Haley had relationships with to avoid troubles, considering his new body was weak? 5) What was the harm in telling Phil that Haley was now Mason and what did Noah tell his parents about his relationship with "Haley"?

When the same plot point is told from different POVs, its slightly different as if the writer decided to add a detail that wasn't thought of before at the original writing of the pp.

Noah's abduction as a child from both Noah's and Mason's POV had different details. With that, how could you not hear the person knocking walk into another stall when your adrenaline is pumping and you're on high alert (kidnapper).