Immortal Mortal

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Here, only those with spiritual roots can cultivate while those with mortal roots are destined to stay mortal.

Mo Wuji only has mortal roots, but will he only remain as a mortal?

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Bất Hủ Phàm Nhân
不朽凡人
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enzimiro
enzimiro rated it
July 21, 2018
Status: c1230
I loved this story. Spent a lot of time and money reading it. It was not worth that time and money with such a lousy, abrupt ending. However, the story progression itself was enjoyable and the MC was likeable. If only the author simply created an epilogue worthy of the character and his development. Thank you for the journey, despite such a lack-luster finish!

PS: Would have given this a 5 star review if only it had a decent ending
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original
original rated it
July 4, 2018
Status: Completed
A Good Novel with a bad ending

Immortal Mortal is a good novel with a story which piques my interest as it has a concept of a man who is mortal becoming an immortal

It may seem generic but the plot tends to change throughout the story. It has space wars, alchemy, cultivation etc..

That all seems well but the biggest problem I would say is the romance part or the women in the series.

here is why ;

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The girls have an okay personality description but the main issue is the splitting up, The main character tends to stay away from the girls for hundreds of chapters especially his wife whom he couldn't find from mid way to the end.

I would say its good in some circumstances but even add the servant girl Yan'er who from the beginning had
(1) lost her memory
(2) been separated from the mc
(3) has been forgotten about for most of the series.

Its alright to say that the main character was "cheating on his wife" with the other girls, but to be honest he hasn't seen his wife for nearly 30, 000 years, I would even go crazy. At least he stayed loyal (to an extent).

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That's the women part, the MAIN problem with the series in which it gave me the biggest headache was the ending. The ending was so bad to the point I wished I never read the novel in the first place. Here is why.

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The ending was the biggest plot, Mo Wuji is a sage and had created his own universe, however, the reunion between him, his wife, yan'er was so mediocre to the point that it was practically irrelevant.

The series also ended in a cliff-hanger, but I wouldn't even call it a cliff-hanger as it was mid-conversation and the author claimed it to be an "open-ending" which shocked me.

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In conclusion, the series was written well for many arcs especially the "Star Lord Mo Wuji" part which I admired since who else can be called a frickin' Star Lord. <<less
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I your Father
I your Father rated it
June 14, 2018
Status: c1068
I give it 3 stars because I liked the first hundreds chapters but now I think that it could been written better, there are too many plots left unresolved, the bad guys well they are all born from the same mold none of them are originals.

You could litterally rename the novel "the law of murphy" and by reading a few chapters you'll understand why, as long as something can turn bad it will necessary do so.

Every character there are so poor that as long as they see that the ML... more>> possess some kind of treasure they are all eager to end his life and plunder him like no tomorrow.

And the plot is used and reused everytime, for that I will quote kjoke:MC goes somewhere -> some random guy suddenly gets offended to the point where he has to kill the MC at any cost ->MC flees somewhere -> Repeat. <<less
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Cygnus39
Cygnus39 rated it
May 3, 2018
Status: c1039
First hundred chapters is good and interesting in my opinion.

The cultivation system is clear and easy to comprehended, side job also good and some skill arts are unique.

I give it 3 stars because this novel actually has more points which could be improved to makes it 5 stars for me.

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But after that comes too much plot, and the fast changing world background with new powerful enemies, with a lot of MC ways of doing things so unreasonable makes the story goes downhill..

The romance in this novel is bad. MC is too stupid with woman, and too many woman just passed by in a few chapters just too be forgotten lately (even his first servant girl is missing for almost 800 chapters)

And the biggest mistakes author makes with the story is timeskip without any good improvement for MC (just lvl up few lvl).

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hiphopper
hiphopper rated it
April 27, 2018
Status: c1011
Incredibly stubborn MC that's never honest with anyone. It starts out like any other generic novel of the same genre. While it have some interesting happenings in some different story arcs, the over all story is what it is. A complete recycle every time. Romantic interests magically disappears and only serve as a reminder once in a blue moon to remind the reader that the MC is in fact not gay.

Author lacks imagination and should keep in mind that just because something is "high ranking whatever" (cultivation, ingredient, treassure) it... more>> does not in fact describe why, how nor looks. <<less
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themell
themell rated it
April 15, 2018
Status: c200
It started off pretty well, but the dumbest plot armor keeps being added. Like how he managed to get a lot of points in killing alien cultivators, and then every cultivator voted him to be the leader of every organization because of his bravery, even though there's tons of people more powerful than him. In every arc, the people around him act either retarded or unrealistic.
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