Vampire? Absolutely my kink. I'm suprised no single one review on this book.

The story plot so good. I need more. I hope the author updated more frequently. I'm so excited to know the waht inside the Duke's mind

The Crown Prince attitude really irritated me more. What do he think he is that highly person who only FL can be with. What psycho. Even his idiotic head didn't understand her breakup to him. Need to get rid of him ASAP

I've had my fill of vampire stories, and I've basically stayed away from them. This story only has one vampire, our FL. I've read to chapter 11 and so far we've had one bite scene, which was chapter 1 where she dine & dashed the ML.

She transmigrated into a villainess from a novel she was reading... the villainess supports the prince for years, she falls in love, then the prince falls in love at first sight with the heroine, the villainess harasses the heroine... You understand. BTW this isn't placed... more>> in a school setting, and IDK how old they are, but they are adults. This world has magic, sorcerers, and magical beasts that drop magic stones that can be embedded to make magic devices. The magic aspect isn't the main focus of the story, it was kinda like the author shoved it in to justify the ML's resistance to the FL's magic... It's fine.

You're probably wondering... since she's a vampire did she transmigrate into a vampire novel. I don't consider this info to be a spoiler, but I'll tag it incase.

Spoiler

NO. She was a vampire who transmigrated into a human however, her body started to change into a vampire due to her soul's instability with the human body.

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The story starts after she had broken up with the prince, she dumps him 5-ish days before the ball where he would meet the heroine. She cleanly breaks it off... but even though she swatted the pathetic mosquito it's still buzzing in her ear...

This story so far doesn't go in-depth about world-building, character personalities/appearances, and the situations aren't detailed so much you don't have to think for yourself. The story doesn't have a strong presence but it's light and enjoyable to read. I have so far enjoyed this story, the ML & FL fluff is heart racing <3 <<less

Writing:

(1) Reading this was confusing. Despite the premise being really good, I often felt like I was reading a mish-mash of whatever the author wanted to add in instead of a linear story where there is a direct cause (enemy).

(2) There are several plot points that didn't really click with the storyline. The subjugation and family accident was a good point but the writing made it confusing. The addition information at these arcs made it difficult to understand the point. There isn't any foreshadowing or hints that could... more>> help the reading move forwards with the story in mind but instead, most likely because of the lack of planned writing, it felt like arcs after they were done served no further purpose to the story in the future.

(3) We are given new details of the characters in a weird, abrupt way. While characters who we learn about are indeed loveable, having their information laid flat and plan feels weird. The delivery of new information was weird. The archmage's introduction felt off, like it was added in haphazaradly. The introduction of the Knight Bugs was abrupt and centered around that lone introductionary detail. The many important side characters who become so 2D that they are laughably unfavored in the author's detail drop. There isn't a balance to the writing.

Chatacters:

(1) Elysia. As the MC, you'd think we would know more about her and her thoughts by chapter 50. Her emotions don't reflect her personality, her personality is every changing and her misalignment to her own chatacter detail is weird. She often shows varying personalities that don't compliment or stem from the original personality she carried in the first few chapters. Her details: Vampire, magician and apparently a saintess, do not make sense. As a vampire who has lived for a long time, you'd think they would be mature. Nope, she is as mature as a pre-pubescent teen. Her lack of "strenght" when needed and her overt "strenght" during Ryan's arc is weird. The details switching up makes no sense. Author-nim, please write down what you want the characters to be.

(2) ML. Why is he so forceful? What is the inherent point of him being so forwards? His character pacing made me feel weird and often unattractive as a character. As the reader, I preferred different characters (such as the Archmage) to be partners with Elysia. ML just seems forced, there is nothing complementary with Elysia. They are both sexy and strong, that's it.

Overall, this was a disappointing read for the second time. I hope the author gets better and their newer works reflect their learnings. <<less

Dropped

Idk if it's just me or not, but the flow of this novel was off. There were times where the sentence structure didn't make sense or it felt like there were gaps in time that felt jarring (as if we we got to Point C but the missing paragraphs were about people getting form A to B). A lot of plot holes. At Ch 21 and FL seems unhinged. She's going crazy about her body's family as if she personally knew them when realistically, it's only been a month at most since she got into the villainess' body? Again, a jarring feeling since there's no background provided for why she would feel this intensely considering she wouldn't have spent that much time with them. The only explanation written (see spoiler) was so dismissive that I wanted to throw my phone away.

To be honest, sometimes I found myself a bit confused when reading this o.o

But well, I love the characters! The FL and the ML; I love seeing them together. Love how the ML is so selfless for the FL. Sweet. I love the story too. Its a love story about human and a vampire as you know.. Overall I enjoy my time reading this novel so I would still recommend this as a good read regardless :)

Uhm, I don't know what to say. The translation is slightly tolerable. Sometimes I can understand it, sometimes I can't. It doesn't help that whole atmosphere of the novel feels emotionless. The words do not make sense altogether. As if they were just casually or forcefully put together. It's boring. I do not know where the problem lies but scenes do not connect with one another. It felt like the novel is fast paced but it wasn't either. I can't finish c10 because it felt like I was forcefully eating... more>> words (food) that I hate. <<less

1, 5 stars, because I manage to read it all.

The writing at the beginning was emotionless: No heaviness in any action, everything turns out underwhelming, it's like they wrote a summary of the actions... The translation didn't help since it was poorly converted from MTL. Well, both these problems improved in later chapters. I'll give them that. HOWEVER...

It bored me after chapter 75, normally I finish these types of novels without taking a break in 2 to 4 days but reading this took weeks. It was so dull, plain writing... more>> became a problem again, I couldn't wait to see this book's end so I could be free from it.

There was a repetitive theme going on too: FL gets harmed, ML cries and became more anxious. Normally I really love this theme but this book overdid it.

The story gets unbalanced at the end, couldn't give lesser fck about the newly introduced characters and how petty or evil are they... I'm feeling like giving even 1, 5 is a bit much for this novel. <<less

It seems promising but... dropped.

so I read up to ch20, but got bored so jumped ahead to the ending. The writing style or translation is what gets me the most. It’s very drab and jarring. Feels like I’m missing something, or it doesn’t feel very cohesive. Hard to read and pay attention, so cannot bring myself to slog through this.

ok for those wh love transmigation or reincarnation kinda stories like me this is gonna become ur all time favourite it starts wit the plot FL has come into the villainess body but plot twist she is a vampire in human body so with time her soul and body start to mix and she is sort of half vampire. ML is super interesting and strong but FL is not weak cute type she pounces on ML because he smells good and that's how their relationship starts. THe ML falls for... more>> her she is relatunact for a really long time as no matter what at end of day she is a vampire and her forever is diff from his forever and she cant confess that to him but he loves her so much that its just too sweet for readers its so strong relationship the ogFL and other characters are also good the plot and fights are intense both are ready to sacrifice their lives for each other its just a really good read the plot is interesting and story doesn't just end with a happy ending well I wont say what happens later but its just too good I really want to read more works from this author <<less