I’d Like to Scold the Capture Targets

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The student council members who hurt my best friend stopped doing their jobs once the fancied-by-several heroine showed up.

I won’t forgive you! You need to get an earful, so it would be better if you sit down there!

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Kouryaku Chara-tachi wo Sekkyou Shitai to Omoimasu.
攻略キャラたちを説教したいと思います。
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01/01/21 Nani Mo Wakaranai Kedo oneshot
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The Sliveren
The Sliveren rated it
January 2, 2021
Status: Completed
I have lots of expectation when reading this. In the end, the only thing I could say is 'what?'

When I finished reading this, it left me confuse. The dialogue is so confusing while the first POV of Akane (MC) is a lot more confusing. The flow of the story is so freaking messy!

Nahhhh... This is not my cup of tea.

Be warned while reading this.
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pansikoser
pansikoser rated it
February 2, 2021
Status: Completed
The editing of the translation is that sloppy for me to barely grasp whats happening.

Granted its a mob chara being bad ass and ends up getting the attention of the capture targets, although theres a main that barely gave off romance vibes.

If the original really read like this, almost impossible flow of thoughts. Then I can say, treat this lile reading a teens journal.
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Realvnv
Realvnv rated it
November 18, 2021
Status: Completed
I only give 2 stars for the translation, 'cause the story was messy as f*ck.

Like, I'm pretty confident in this translator, I've read several novels from their website before, but why is this one so bad? Was the writer drunk or sth?

MC bit*h was just rambling on and on like it wasn't a god damn one-shot but a long-winged novel with 1800 chaps. The plot was just trying to crawl through all that messy bullshit.

All in all, for a one-shot, it was a disaster. For a translator, a legit reason... more>> for blackening lol. <<less
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darkchocolatesan
darkchocolatesan rated it
June 22, 2021
Status: --
This is really not that bad of a story, it's just that there seems to be some random changes in perspective that I think may have been a mistranslation, and it kind of makes the latter half of the story confusing. Or it could be an issue on the author's part, who knows.
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dailang
dailang rated it
March 13, 2023
Status: Completed
What a complete waste of time. Wording aside, even the plot waste itself.

The story is about how a girl discover that her student council is behaving brainlessly like a reverse harem in otome game.

The problem is the ending of all her action led her to basically get a reverse harem herself which also acting brainlessly.

If not for the absolute beating she was giving in the middle of the oneshot I would have give it 1 star.
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mmem
mmem rated it
September 25, 2022
Status: oneshot
A bit of a mess. The MC’s thoughts are jumbled and constantly jumping around. Became too confusing and tedious to finish.
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Sakuragawa
Sakuragawa rated it
August 30, 2022
Status: Completed
I didn't find any of the characters likable. I don't know why so many stories like to sh*t on otome games but display very little understanding of what otome games are actually like. ... more>>
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Most otome games don't have reverse harem endings, okay.

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The heroine hasn't even played any and yet is quick to slap on stereotypes for the other characters.

About the translation
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It was still understandable at the beginning but then it became completely incoherent/non-cohesive which leads me to think it's either almost straight up unedited or wrongly edited MTL in the second half...

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