investors backing out for no reason? Tableware just breaking?? Testpapers suddenly being lost??? I know it's for dramatic effect and to highlight how much of their success was caused by the FL. I also know that it's a fitting way for them to end. But it's all just s*upidly funny to think that without the FL, they won't be able to live normal lives cuz bad luck just seems to stick to them. It's as if the FL was a shield or counter against the bad luck. (Or whoever falls out from the FL's grace is cursed with bad luck haha I'd rather read a story where her father's s*upid actions, or decreasing mined gems (while the FL was still there), was the cause of investors backing out or something similar.

Edit: so apparently she does cause bad luck as well, Im glad that thats the case. Ill try to reread it now bcoz of that lol. Anyways, if u want to read the downfall part or her fam discovering her powers I think ive read in the spoilers that it would be from chapter 80 and onwards

I mean, how are you going to live with a person you like but not have any s*xual urges at all? There is no s*xual tension between the ML and FL while they live together. It's a vanilla novel. It's to the point where They look like robots in that sense. They talk about possessiveness, love for each other, etc. but not s*xual urges 😂 like, how innocent were they back them?! I think she's in her twenties but behaves like they're 12 in that field?!
It's too innocent.
also!! The FL...

oh my gawd...

i don't like her at all!!!

I don't think the author really thought through about her character's persona. She was all naive and sweet in the beginning, a character that simply exuberanted kindness and all... but then, suddenly, after one moment of pain, she turns into the most cynical, sarcastic, and quite cold blooded, individual on this novel.
mans why do I say she's the biggest lied of all?

because apparently! She's "nice", but treats her old family like sh*t after they mistreated her. 😂 she don't hold back at all, such as telling them she hopes they die suffering and shit.

Yeah, she sweet like candy and soft like flower huh?
She talks down to them, and is quite rude too.
and the worst is that the new "kind" family, are always beside her during the encounters with the old family, and they don't say sh*t about her behavior.
they are all behind her on it. like, "you did a good job. You hold onto that grudge and rub it in their face whenever you see them."

😒

Yeah, they hurt your feelings and all, it was a Shitty move, but your remorseful as f*ck!
If you are going to hold a grudge for that long, I don't think you were that "kind hearted" in the first place!
Call me soft hearted, but I wouldn't be so petty to keep dragging the past along for soooo long. She goes from a angel to a rancorous mournful individual. Cross her once... and that's it! You done for! She'll drag that sh*t out as long as she lay her eyes on you!

1) Her brother Emil kinda figured out early that they made a mistake kicking her out for being “unlucky”. Instead of just letting it be, he actually spread the rumors about her being unlucky which was why she was kicked out of the family. Before that, it was unknown why she was kicked out by the general public. His reasoning? It’ll look bad for the family if people find out that they kicked her out for her “ability” but turns out she didn’t have that ability. 2) Her other brother Xavier meets her by coincidence at a store. He accidentally touched her when they both reached for the same item. He took out a handkerchief to wipe his hands as if she was contagious and was actually disgusted. 3) On several occasions, when they coincidentally meet her, they’re all surprised and disgusted at her for actually living normally and happily. It’s like they all expected her to be begging on the streets. Emil even told her to live quietly as if she was dead so that she wouldn’t “bother” the family with her presence. 4) Diana, 2nd eldest and the golden child of the father, hates her the most for some reason that wasn’t ever really explained. She would ridicule FL almost daily and treated her like dirt while FL was still with them. Author didn’t even explain that it was because she was jealous of FL for being engaged to her crush.

So first when the bio-father learns that her ability is luck and tries to get her back into the family. At one point in the story he sends people to kidnap her who were apparently strong enough to knock out her guards and she was only saved because Kenna happened to be there. Now, this issue alone has the major issue of absolutely nothing came from it. At the very least we should of gotten something like a report that the investigation came up with nothing and that she has more guards posted around her but it was instantly dropped like getting attacked didn't matter (Probably because the author wasn't planning on having it happen again they forgot how people would react to this occurrence) but my big issue with this was at a later point in time her father meets with her in public and due to the eyes watching them (Since they are in public) she went with him to a private location. This is one of the major problems with this series, this author isn't creating a realistic environment. The female lead continues to go out in public alone, walk at night, ect. despite the fact that we have been shown that violence and crime exists in this world. At this point in the story she fully knows her father is a piece of shit, she knows that he sent people after her, yet she decides to go to a private location with him (If I remember correctly it was a cafe) to talk. This man has already shown how low he can go so why aren't you assuming he might spike your drink and take you while pretending to take care of you... I think the issue is since the author knows that he wants "Meet in public -> He blackmails her -> She hates him more" they forget about how unrealistic and s*upid it is to interact with such a person... There are a lot of events in this story where the world building is just subpar because the author is making it work for whatever plot line they work rather than making their plotline work with the world building. An example off the top of my head is how her bio-brothers essentially forcibly broke into their house and wouldn't leave when requested and yet the entirety of punishment for this event was the bio-father having to apologize... There should be a lot bigger ramifications even if its just something like public opinion of those two being extremely negative...
Now this leads to my second big issue with this book which continues with what I was saying before, the world building is inconsistent. Kenna's family was framed for raising an army in secret and as a result everyone except for her were killed... Kenna herself if caught would be severely punished if not executed (The author never really goes into what the punishment is but due to Kenna's immense grudge against bio-father and how she isn't living with them after exile I think its safe to infer that they have been executed) and this is where a major plot hole is created in my opinion. The crime of raising an army against the emperor is a complete execution for the family yet when it gets released that the bio-father framed a long standing and loyal family for this crime the only punishment he receives is an exile with his family... The imbalance between the punishments is completely unreal and the part that really pisses me off is how the author plays it off as if this exile solved all of the problems... There are a lot of dark undertones in this story like kenna's family yet the author seems to hesitate to actually put these into words... The fact that kenna is suppose to be satisfied with this shitty punishment is just unrealistic, her grudge as we have seen is very deep... she would track him down after he left the country and kill him with her own hands or ruin everything and make him starve to death. It just overall feels like the author is trying to paint a happy world while accidently adding undertones like abuse and execution into the story since they are coinvent for the plot at the time. I'm very big on world building and consistency so while this is honestly very minor thing when reading its something that makes me dislike the story so I am biased but it feels to me like sloppy writing... The author subconsciously has a double standard... raising an army and forging an empirical verdict based on this timeline should result in the same punishment, execution. In order to maintain power rulers will shut down all forms of rebellion, the reason why they wouldn't be exiled is because that isn't a bad enough punishment... People might hesitate to forge an order that would benefit them if their entire family along with themselves would be executed for it but a simple exile would make these people prepare if they did get exiled and then commit the crime. In this case it would be an even harsher punishment due to the lose of a loyal family with a lot of history, its just an unrealistic punishment in terms of world building just because the author doesn't want the bio-family to be executed, they wanted it to be them suffering on a farm in another country... I went on a bit of a tangent but my overall point is the world building feels inconsistent and forced, its unnatural and changes based on the whims of the author... Things like how there is basically no difference between aristocrats and commoners except for one rules over territory (Book doesn't get into specifics) but there is plenty of interaction of elle making jewelry or female lead selling cookies yet then the author adds the line diana said about how she would execute kenna (Who she believed to be a commoner) for speaking back to her... The rules and design of the world are not consistent and while it doesn't change much with the main story itself this is just something I really hate when authors mess up. Thanks for coming to my ted talk.