Cool to see my fav chinese fic get translate.

I can't say much because its too long since I read it but the story is about MC who transmigrated into Shirou child body at Fate/Zero timeline before Shirou meet Kiritsugu and have peace family.

But unfortunately his peace come to end when he get kidnapped by Ryuusuke and his blood get used to summon servant. Without other choice, he manipulating all other servant mental with his knowledge in order to survive at fourth holy grail war.

Im love this fic so much because... more>> the MC will travel in all Nasuverse world including Camelot timeline.

Anyway, sorry for my bad eng. This is my first review in this web. <<less

A good and well done writing. The most enjoyable so far. The author perfectly use all characters description and personality to its fullest and more reasonable. He even including the lore of some character that some people may not know. Everything focus on characters growth not just the MC but all. It can be emotional sometime.

I hope this work can become canon someday it was so good.

This fanfic was written by a true TYPE-MOON fan with very good understanding of the stories behind it. The fanfic puts the MC through each of those parallel worlds in a way that makes a the story flows well and makes logical sense. A must read if you want to make sense of the whole different type-moon franchises. This is very rare for fanfic or a Chinese novel to have.

The translations are very good. You can see it wasn’t machine translated like many of the fanfic translations on here.

If you like Fate fix-fics, you'll probably like this. If you don't like characters acting OC and the author taking some liberties with the rules of the setting you might not like this.

Personally this is one of my favorite Fate fanfics, the quality of the writing is pretty decent, with the author actually being pretty creative sometimes and the protagonist actually being really proactive. However the author tends to take some liberties with powers and the OC Shirou gets a lot more power and pulls off various things that are... more>> a bit of a stretch so depending how hardline you are on Nasu lore this might put you off.

Its fairly consistent with its theme, and is able to somewhat justify the way things go in the story in a way that's consistent with Fate rules. Its also narratively connected in a way that I see few fanfics are, with the MCs actions continuously snowballing and some actual foreshadowing in places.

Overall it hit a lot of the notes that I wanted in a fix-fic and game pretty happy endings for a lot of characters I liked and goes though most of the expanded Fate setting while placing its own spin on things based on the consequences of the protagonists actions.

In Summary, I liked the plot, some of the characters were kinda OC, it follows the rules of the setting mostly, but takes some liberties in places but does its best to justify those liberties in the framework of Nasu rules. <<less

Even though it's supposed to be a comedy. This is not a comedy. You need to have an IQ5 to bring a strange kid from the street. I don't see any other reason than the mental imbecility of the mother figure. Unfortunately, this piece of the story already shows the intellectual level of the story. That is, for idiots with IQ5. Score minus 100