It's tagged comedy but it fails to deliver.

While the translation is fine, the story just doesn't deliver. There's a fair number of flaws for such a short story.

First up the comedy, just isn't there. I get the idea of strong girl is supposed to be funny here, but it isn't. The gags are executed poorly and bring no mirth.

... more>> Second, the dialog is very hard to impossible to follow. There aren't good markers to indicate who is speaking. This makes it a bit painful to read.

Third the plot is telegraphed. It's not a question of figuring out what is going to happen next, the story hits you over the head with it.

The only recommendation I can give is find something better. If you like comedy about strong girls maybe give the old Harvey Comics: Little Lotta a try. <<less

So cute! Love the mc! She so funny and so much fun. Live by her motto, just be / love yourself and the there will be someone whole will love the true you! As always the translator way of translating is excellent and so quirky, lovely read. Thank you

The plot is fine, just that how it was delivered I didn't like. I am the type that doesn't care about grammar but my gosh how the story flows is killing me. I feel like there were a lot of ways to properly convey the story and how they did it was not it.

Otherwise the love story is very sweet and cute. Just that I don't being that overly macho to the point of being gorilla is possible w/o any other injects and modern chemical involved. And always putting weighs... more>> is not at all good for the body, especially since if you overwork there's high chance you'll screw your period. Tho the idea is lovely and cute that I'll turn a blind eye on it.

As the story suggest, it's about a macho girl hunting her macho lover. <<less

Naive and sweet, simple and funny. Plot is very simple, no twists, no intrigue. Not many laughs, too, but surely a lot of smileys. Good short read :)

MC was so cute. Her monologues were hilarious and successfully made me laugh several times. I love her because she defined her beauty by herself and didn't feel inferior about it even after being mocked by many people because of it. I'm really happy that she finally could find a man that could accept her the way she was in the end.