3 stars flat.

The theme has been done to death, and the only thing this brings is it removes all the details. Think of Bakarina without all the complexity, her crazy plans, the winning over the other characters and all the other fun and you have this story.

It just goes from start to finish on a rather predictable path. There's some small attempt to be cute but not enough to carry the story.

Bottom Line: Well if you have nothing else it's OK.

So, ML hated MC in the original story because she was so aggressive and it irritated him. After she avoided him in this current life, he became interested in her instead. I think ML loves a girl who plays hard to get?

I love how the heroine didn't change into a villainess and became MC's best friend instead. It's happy ending for both of them with the heroine ended up with the leader of a knight and MC finally accepted ML's proposal.

Giving it 5 stars because some dummy gave this 1 star.

Typical shoujo oneshot, no characterization and no real conflict. It reads more like a summary of a longer story, but it is quite to the point and short, and I enjoyed it. Since it's such a short oneshot, don't expect much else than a snack inbetween meals.

Real stars would be somewhere between 3.5 and 4.0, simply because it met my (looww lol) expectations of a oneshot shoujo villainess-centric story. Good for spending idle time while looking for new fics to... more>> read, it took me like 5 minutes, maybe less. <<less

Just one-shot with a cliche "I'm now villain but I don't want to die so I'll make ML hate me but oh no why he is so persistent chasing me?!".

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Yes, it's just like that. Maybe because it's just one-shot... It's not enough...

Most disappointing of it is how short and quick it is. The character chemistry is there. Side characters progress, although only stated or might just be hinted, feels unfulfilled but intruiging. Still, an entertaining read.

Real cute and real short. Fluffy tale about MC loving but rejecting ML.

No bag guy as ML just confession and goes along with whatever MC dose to him.

It is a bit weird, but I like It because its a good change of pace and its weird in a funny way. It is pretty short though.