Not necessarily a bad novel, it feels more like a webnovel with a K-Novel setting mixed with JP plot.

There is a lot of cliche in this novel and too much women, MC literally only interact with them and for some reason all women is important into saving the world, plus the 'Original Protagonist' of the game he transmigrated into is apparently also a woman crossdressing as a boy. Not only that but the system he has literally gives him 'Points' for literally BREATHING, he gains so much fricking points for... more>> doing absolutely nothing it's not even funny.

But I've only read a small part of the novel so I'm still giving it a chance.

Update 02/08/2024 :

I've read it again after a year, my rating is still the same, don't expect too much on this novel, just read it if you want to kill time. <<less

The plot seems interesting enough, but man is the translation horrible. It reads like it’s horribly machine translated with 0 work put in and it seems to be getting worse in the later chapters. At this point about 40% of the sentences straight up don’t make any sense and I have no idea what’s going on with some of the characters. I would not recommend this unless someone better picks it up and actually starts translating it.

Kinda suspicious how this got ranked so high...

I take the risk of being a little unfair in this assessment since undoubtedly this work is not for me. I don't like the harem genre, but I love the "extra" character trope, and works with this trope usually have a harem. However, I've become capable of overlooking the harem, mainly because in this trope, the harem is usually very mild and non-aggressive. However, this work, from what I could gather so far, will take a different path, a path more similar to Japanese novels. From chapter 7 onwards, the... more>> protagonist is surrounded by girls, and even the only relevant male character who got close to the protagonist is actually a girl disguising herself as a boy. Honestly, this novel draws heavily from Japanese novels, even the protagonist's sword is quite similar to a katana. I'm not the target audience, so I won't continue reading, but if you are the target audience, you can go ahead without fear. <<less

Hello, SkyDemonOrder has been translating the novel recently so ignore the reviews about it's translation quality. (They are the ones who are doing 'Return of Mount Hua Sect').

This is another "the Novel's Extra" novel.

IF you liked titles including but not limited to:

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• I Killed the player of the academy*
• The villain wants to live*
• The Extra's Academy Survival Guide*
• Fated to Be Loved By Villains*

Then you will enjoy this novel.

To sum up, veteran gamer enters his Gameworld and using his knowledge and competency attempts to prevent the world from imploding.

Cute Heroines, Good Main Character Temperament (Not too dense), Cool Story Telling

Give it a read. <<less

Story seems pretty cliche, not necessarily bad but nothing outstanding. Translation quality is abysmal, I often wonder if this is just mtl without any editing. In the story there is too many women, every position of power is held by a beautiful woman. Author is making up new things only to forget about them a chapter later, the same goes for the characters.

He's a knock-off Jedi with a Korean cultivation system that holds his hand and makes everything easy. S-rank skills at chapter one. Janky translation writes onomatopoeia as words in quotations like they're dialogue. Did someone sigh? Nah, they literally translated the word "sigh" out loud unironically.

The entire novel.

Is formatted into single lines without paragraphs.

... more>> Like this.

It reads like a middle school journal.

Or someone attempting prose.

The.

Entire.

Novel.

They even do this with system prompts, but with center alignment.

Fairly standard "extra" character template story, but with annoying formatting and inflated descriptions of everything related to "cultivation." <<less

I don't know what to even say. The author is constantly skipping over stuff. It's like there should be 3 scenes before each one. Yet they do not exist.

So far everything is literally copied off those chinese novels with 1 dimensional characters. With everything being handed to the MC. "Wow you are so great MC. Here is 500 points".

Now since it is skipping. I have to wonder if the author is hurring up to get somehwere in the plot... But why write dozens of pages of sh"". oh right. Pay... more>> per chapter web novel system. I wouldn't pay for this.

It's bad enough that I have to... Wonder if the translators care about what they look at when working on this. This is the second story I've given these translators a 1/5. <<less

Hi, welcome to my review. This is a rather decent and interesting novel with an intriguing world-building. Let's get to the pro and con according to me:

The pro:

1. It has a rather well-balanced and compelling main character that isn't utterly dense or screwed. Armed with game knowledge, he is a very powerfull but not broken character. He isn't obscenely smart but not s*upid or naive either.

2. It has a captivating world that wasn't bare bone. The author explain the inside and out of the world stage. The power scaling is... more>> also quite well-balanced although not perfect.

3. The plot is ordinary but the story telling is great with well-maintained tension and anticipation throughout that won't bore the reader complimented with the world-building.

4. It has a good cast of characters with decently unique characteristic.

Con:

1. The author way of writing is more often than not is confusing because the author is using Murim or Cultivation term often which hard to translate and has a lot of flowery wording.

2. The cast of characters may be unique but shallow with usualy one or two special characteristic that differentiate them. They are still fun to have but not that interesting.

3. The author like to exagerate a lot in the power levelling of the MC which impact the pacing. It make it like the MC is getting stronger really fast but doesn't do much in term of action. It can reason that the enemies is that much stronger but it still underwhelming to see in action compared to how the author portrayed it. <<less

I think this novel has great narratives and compelling stories.

The main character is a game addict who unfortunately got vaulted into his favourite game. I wish there was more info on how he reacted when he realized he got shipped into another world without consent but the way the story moves is very interesting nonetheless.

I'm not into harem and some of the girls irks me a bit but that's 1 of the few cons in this novel and it's easy to overlook it and focus on more compelling stories.

Although this... more>> is an academy action fantasy harem novel but I wish the main character would engage with more male characters instead of collecting girls like Pokemon cards. It would be a nice change of pace to just see bros hanging out (non sensual)

P/S. I think some of the illustrations on Ko-fi makes a wayy better profile pic for novelupdates. Some readers tend to avoid reading novels that has ai art as a pfp. <<less

Grade:

6/10 (cliche, but at least is done well)

TLTR:

Its quite straigthforward, and completely filled with cliches, but as said before, its at least decent quality to pass time if you have nothign else to do, even so, its quite obvious to see the pattern in this story, so if you have read similars before, you already know what will happen.