Review of the translation only. It's low effort MTL.

Changes between first and third person every paragraph. Mistaken pronouns. Wrongful translations. Lack of meaning/punctuation. They don't even bother typing 'enter' in between dialogues and paragraphs, resulting in confusing wall of texts.

It's a mess.

... more>> If someone picks this up I'll try it again and update this review since the story itself IS interesting. The tone is more grim and realist, reminding me of The Witcher. Alas, a bad translation messes up a proper story, yet again.

That being said, there's already a few glaring plot holes, like it being litrpg with the MC leveling up and upgrading stats but we don't see or follow any status screen of sorts. He's also too OP and the explanation for it is usually 'he upgraded his stats'. But maybe the translator just skipped the whole system part of the story? I wouldn't put it past them. That's how low the bar is. <<less

The world looks pretty interesting but the story is hard to follow along. The translation also isn't the best as many of the sentences do not flow with each other, making it more confusing for me to read :/ Also pretty sure the translator already dropped. I remember seeing her pic on another story that was shortly started and dropped too, and it's already been about a month since last Chap together with all 6 being posted previous month