Honestly I would have appreciate it more if author made MC go to psychiatrist for counseling for Trauma....... bro it advanced century with more developed world. People should know to get proper counseling from psychiatrist for trauma. Even if author wasn't planning to go in-depth regarding treatment, I would still have prefer ML taking MC to psychiatrist or inviting psychiatrist to check on MC. Get help from Professional..... there's a reason for those Professional to exist. Don't just try to treat trauma yourself without proper knowledge or ability.

Also I was expecting a lot to happen, especially with how glory guy was after MC, scheming and approaching MC slowly but somehow they totally disappeared from the story after MC and ML officially started dating. Considering Glory guy assumed MC to be ML lover before (when MC was not yet) and still approach him, I waiting to see what will he do now but then author just kicked him out of the story.

And last but not least, MC first friends, Copperplate and NonMeta...... I missed them. Author never brought them up again after the last peco peco quest. It was sad to not see their name being mentioned even when MC got married in-game. It would have been nice to atleast see them congratulating MC but (´-`　）

This later becomes a major plot point when MC and ML gets together. ML tries to help MC overcome his trauma. Only, this part is too short (just one ride in the car and he's fine, really?) and too abrupt, considering this is a major driving force of MC's action, I expected something more.

Lucky Cat x Main System ftw!

I think this is a really awful way to think. It was addressed multiple times in the novel that ML understood why MC dropped out (it's not like he dropped out because it was too difficult, or b/c he was lazy), and ML fell in love with MC before he even knew all that. The author writes about how the two love each other regardless of money or status. Yes, there's a huge social divide, but the MC takes active steps towards the end to start learning again, he proves to be talented with finances. It's also not that uncommon for wealthy people to marry people in the middle/lower class.

A negative review mentioned it was cured too easily. I do not agree, especially since the story addresses that even at the end of the story it's still not cured at all. It's improving, but it's not gone.. The trauma was repeatedly mentioned, the author explained how MC and ML slowly worked together to overcome it. Someone mentioned MC was too dependent on ML, but here's the thing, MC was COMPLETELY alone after his parents' deaths. He had absolutely no friends, family, or supporters. So it's actually pretty logical that after he finds someone to love and support him, he can start the slow journey to recovery.

It's mostly just continuity. MC's first friends he made at the start of the novel disappear at the end, which is a bummer since they were great.

We never figured out what the Wing's guild was scheming and why the Guild Leader was so interested in MC. I thought that could have been a really interesting part of the story, but it was left hanging.

There were things left unexplained, but the author did acknowledge that they had some trouble finishing off the story. It's the first long story they ever wrote, and I can see how an inexperienced author might accidentally leave some things hanging.

ML: I like you
MC: I like you too (but in a friendly way)
ML: No I mean as a lover
MC: Wha???
ML: You don't hate it right? Let's date.
MC: Okay I guess

Then they got married.

Like the random chapter where ML's 15 year old brother French kissed the 5 year old ML as punishment... I'm calling the police. Also the fact that his cute cat pet was actually a fully sentient cat boy sent from the heavens who got banged by God... What in the world...

Technology's so advanced, no one's ever thought of giving him a few sessions with a psychiatrist? Like may be the government could have sponsored it for an orphaned kid, or those responsible for his parents' death could have done it too. I don't know, just someone. Help, apparently, in this world, common sense was lost in the advance of technology.

Constantly getting bullied by various types of players, yet doing nothing really in return and just letting it slide. His Mary Sue White lotus act can be very annoying sometimes when you read.

the male lead r*pes the protagonist in the extras. There's also a scene where the ML's brother forcefully makes out with him when he was a young child. Neither r*pe nor mol*station are okay. Just what was the author thinking?

MC feels more like a pet than a partner tbh. Now, I don't expect every MC to be a warrior amongst warriors, I do feel the author have the MC the level of trauma that they had no idea how to handle to make him as maleable as putty in ML's hands.

The trauma is handled so badly. I saw some reviews stating that the ML understood it was a heavy trauma & slowly worked on it with MC but that is also part of the problem!!! The ML is a layman meddling in matters he clearly isn't qualified to meddle in willy nilly. It's not like he doesn't have the money to get him to a psychiatrist or the education to understand that you need professional help for PTSD of that major levels. It's only because it's fiction that things didn't go horribly wrong & I really wouldn't want anyone to learn from this.

Regarding the smut part - it just made me uncomfortably speedread/skip through. Consent is so dubious that it made me mildly nauseous. Please respect your partner if they say no. Understand that no doesn't mean that just ignore it because he'll agree once the d*ck is in.

& I have to mention, the elder brother just is a criminal. J can't see it any other way. Kissing a child, with tongue, as punishment is just so unnecessary and unneeded. No clue why the author had to gross me out with that.

there’s a lot of things left unexplained or just forgotten.

like there’s mc’s first friends that just went missing half through the story. It’s fine if it was just acquaintances in passing, but, they do have significant importance in mc’s beginning life so it’s pretty sad to just see they disappeared. especially the NonMeta and CopperPlate duo.

and then the villain glory of the wings guild. Their scheming, and stalking, a lot of foreshadowing. All that for nothing. I don’t know what’s the use of the author mentioning this if there’s no conclusion for it. They’re even more legitimate as a villain than the Snow magician and yet they just disappeared like there’s no animosity at all.

then the trauma! It was way too abrupt. Supposedly this is the core of the story but it was solved too fast it doesn’t have much impact in the story.

The story had huge potential but the way some things were resolved was lacking. One part was that the MC had been traumatized for years, but then he's abruptly cured. I expected there to at least be some more heart-to-heart discussions/therapy. Another let-down was how the plot eluded to one of the guilds seemingly plotting something, but nothing really happened.

the chapter which wasn't necessary in anyway (and in my opinion it was really disgusting). Prior to this chapter, the ML tells the MC that if the MC lied to him, he would kiss the MC as punishment. For some reason the author thought it was a good idea to dedicated a whole chapter to "explain" where ML's kissing-punishment "backstory" came from. The "backstory" included a scene where a 5-year-old ML had lied to his 15-year-old brother, and in order to "punish" the ML, ML's older brother forcefully french-kissed him and then laughed at how he could boast to the ML's future girlfriends that he stole ML's first kiss. I have no idea what was going through the author's mind to write this; the ML's brother literally mol*sted his own little brother (even worse, the author wrote that the ML was struggling but was too weak to resist). How some people find this funny baffles me. I would understand more if ML's older brother was also a little child who didn't actually understand the implications behind kissing someone, but for a 15-year-old teenager to do this to his 5-year-old brother? This chapter completely came out of left field, and after this, I had to power through and skim like crazy just to get this story over with.