I Am Just a Pebble! ~The Healing Golem and Monster User~

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The Moment I woke up, I noticed that my body turned into a pebble.

One day, when I was lamenting about why I ended up like this, A pretty golem with a body that looks like a doll came by.

“I” then unexpectedly merged with that golems body.

From that moment, I didn’t expect that it will be the beginning of all encounters and a great adventure!!

Associated Names
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watashi wa 〈 moto 〉 koishidegozaimasu ! 〜 iyashikei gōremu to mamonozukai 〜
私は〈元〉小石でございます! 〜癒し系ゴーレムと魔物使い〜
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Latest Release

Date Group Release
10/06/18 yurikatrans c14 part2
10/03/18 yurikatrans c14 part1
09/25/18 yurikatrans c13
09/19/18 yurikatrans c12
09/18/18 yurikatrans c11
07/19/18 yurikatrans c10
07/09/18 yurikatrans c9
07/08/18 yurikatrans c8
07/08/18 yurikatrans c7
07/03/18 yurikatrans c6
06/18/18 yurikatrans c5
06/03/18 yurikatrans c4
06/01/18 yurikatrans c3
06/01/18 yurikatrans c2
05/31/18 yurikatrans c1
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ValorPhoenix
ValorPhoenix rated it
July 12, 2018
Status: c140
This has some serious problems in later chapters, so keep low expectations. It's an okay story up until they go to the capital.

The adventuring part of the story is rushed and messed up. The girls will be powered up quickly, become famous quickly and then become casual adventurers. I'll provide a parody example to limit spoilers: "I know you girls just got back from subjugating a dragon, but that didn't count as a guild quest. Since you're still newbies, you'll need to have some random dude that just showed up... more>> assigned to your team for this goblin subjugation, even though everyone knows you're way stronger than your rank."

The major problem can't be pointed out without spoilers since it's a major plot development:
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Iris gets a human form and then rapidly devolves into damsel in distress. This includes a 3-5 chapter stretch of her being publicly s*xually assaulted, then a bit later in the story suddenly everyone wants her to get a boyfriend and get married. She also stops developing her combat ability and switches to a more passive support healer role.

If all of this makes anyone think she evolves from a golem into a girl and thus became weaker, ha, nope. She actually evolved from a healing golem to a holy knight type battle golem. The only explanation for the plot derailment is that the author introduced two male characters and wanted them to repeatedly save Iris because now she's a girl.

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