"MOA" should be MOBA. This is an extremely common term in any eSport related novel. It's clear that they didn't read the manhwa before, or even bothered to check the actual novel to see if the (probably not-original) text they got was correct, since the original has MOBA is fully capital letters. They also got names of the teams wrong.

From the first few chapters, 辅助, 超神, 血, 平A, 打野, all these terms are gaming specific terms with an existing English translation in games, such as support, godlike, HP/health, basic/auto atk, etc. The tl either skipped over the term, or directly translated it without caring for context.

(ML) The man laughed and said, "Don't keep saying you, you, you."

No mention is made about the Formal You, which changes the meaning of the interaction, because ML is telling MC not to be so formal with him, and not just calling him out for using the word 'you'.

"What, you can't hide someone in your room?" -> should be: What, don't tell me you're hiding someone in your room?

Missing swears: 'it trembled!!!' -> 'The bed was f*cking shaking!!'

"What kind of broken design is this? Even if you really do that, how do you use it?" -> "What kind of crappy design is this? You can't even f*cking lie on this bed, even if you really want to do that sort of thing, how will you be able to?"

"The Words Were Surprising" -> "Till my lines can astound others, I will not die"

There are also several idioms that are literally translated (in a confusing manner) when there are English equivalents, too many, so didn't list them.

一朝破功心叨念 -> missing part

睡了别人记不住 -> missing part

怀搂他人遇现任 -> missing part

No glaring plotholes, but since the e-sports side wasn't fleshed out, the competition results left much to be desired in my opinion/felt really bland. The occasional, poetic chapter ends didn't do it for me either, but that could be mtl. In the latter half of the novel, I was beginning to grow impatient with the misunderstandings loll. So overall, good.

Like one minute he's getting his medicine from the psychiatrist. Then somehow hes magically cured by the MC without said meds. The change was too abrupt to be honest.

he didn't get pills one day and then it was gone I don't know if u we're even really reading the story the doctor said that originally the disorder should be curable without medication the only point why he gave the medication in the first place was because he thought nothing was new and it simply didn't help to just try until ML told him that MC is his first relationship and the other stuff where the doctor says that that is good because that way the original treatment method may work without medication I know this conversation could have been hard to understand because of the way the doctor talked but come on

and also he never took the medication but he also wasn't suddenly good MC listened to the origin of his trauma (what actually would have been the jop from the doctor) and thought of a way to make it easier it was described that even after the milk candy thing he still heard the curses of those people in his ears and later he also vomited again he got slowly better thanks to his wish to touch his boyfriend

and parents