Hokage: Ryo’s Path

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Surgeon Guan Ryo Is reborn in Naruto’s world! Enjoy his trip as he uses his knowledge of the story to find his path in this troubled world and eventually stand at the top of Konoha!

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火影之远途
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OldManGu
OldManGu rated it
June 22, 2018
Status: c151
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The MC needs to use water jutsu and then freeze it to make ice. He still uses chakra for the water. Its super lame because even Haku could create ice from nothing. Mei could also spit lava out of her mouth. His ability is based off Aokiji. But its nothing like Aokiji's ice because Aokiji can create ice from nothing.

The author loves giving the MC kryptonite abilities.

The MC stores nature chakra with Tsunade's recovery skill. He can't refill it until it runs out.

The MC pissed his pants when he met 9 tails. He couldn't even speak when Kurama asked him a question. This is the same guy who killed a root member without blinking an eye. He never even cared that he killed somebody. He also knows Kurama is a good guy. He's still pissing his pants when he meets him years later. He even stutters when Kurama wants to meet him.

The MC has contact lenses to hide his Sharingan. But I feel like the Byakugan should be able to see it.

His sharingan's absorb nature chakra to get his 3rd tomoe. This is stupid for 2 reasons. The first is that his whole body had already absorbed nature chakra. His body even turns into nature chakra in his ice mode. That would include his eyes! Even normal sage mode would affect his eyes. It's been stated that nature chakra helps people see better. The second reason is that nature chakra doesn't advance the Sharingan. The Sharingan is created from a special chemical the brain produces during intense emotions. Then the author says he couldn't understand why Sasuke awakened his 3rd tomoe fighting Naruto! He then blames it on his curse mark! Is this author a idiot! It was clearly because of his intense emotions from fighting Naruto!

The author counts Sasuke's feats against Itachi's Mangekyou. This is stupid because Itachi was trying to lose. I dont think Sasuke's 3 tomoe could have done anything against Itachi. Just look at what he did to Kakashi. Kakashi was helpless in front of him. Granted he only had 1 eye and wasn't a Uchiha. But its known that Kakashi was better with his Sharingan than most Uchiha.

The MC gets one shotted by White Fang. The MC already has a 3 tomoe sharingan, sage mode, ice mode and elite jounin level chakra. He also knows all chidori variants and rasenshuriken. This can only mean 1 of 2 things. Number 1: The author thinks Kakashi's dad is ultra kage level. This would also mean that he thinks grandma Chiyo is ultra kage level. Thats because grandma Chiyo can fight him for a long time. That would also mean that Sasori is Madara level. Thats because Sasori is way stronger than granny. Then there is the 2nd option. The 2nd option is that the MC is super incompetent at using his skills. Im going to go out on a limb and guess its number 2. That makes me wonder who wants to read about a incompetent mc?

Pakura should not be able to melt the MC's ice. The MC's ice should be stronger than normal. He is also using nature chakra. There is no way Pakura could melt ice made with nature chakra.

The author thinks that Jiraiya became an author during the 3rd ninja war. But Jiraiya became an author during or after the 2nd ninja war. We know this because Naruto's name came from a book that he wrote while teaching Nagato.

This author knows nothing about Naruto. The 3rd hokage could never fire Danzo and the 2 elders as advisors. Danzo is in charge of the root and his power is unshakable. The 2 elders fought alongside the 2nd hokage with them and are the 3rd's most trusted advisors. They side with the 3rd over Danzo most of the time. They didn't start leaning towards Danzo until Tsunade took over. They even picked Minato to be the 4th hokage. Danzo was trying to get Orochimaro to be hokage and didn't want Minato. I think the elders even wanted Jiraiya to be the 5th hokage if I remember right. The 3rd hokage would have never fired them for saying he shouldn't give the MC a S rank skill. There is also 0% chance that he could fire Danzo! Danzo has a brainwashed underground army! You can't take away his right to speak when he has that much power.

The 3rd hokage made the root disband. This is the dumbest thing ever. Danzo would never let this happen. The 3rd would also never want it to happen. Root members are super loyal to Danzo. The root is there for a reason. The author has zero understanding of the Naruto world.

White Fang could not cut off Danzo's arm in 1 move. Danzo is a old war vet, who has gone through countless battles. He fought alongside the 2nd hokage. White Fang would also not want to cut his arm off.

The MC asks Kurama if he can be controlled by a Mangekyou Sharingan. Then Kurama tells him no. But this is wrong because the Mangekyou can control him at the loss of the eyes.

The MC has the hots for a 4 year old even though his mental age is 30-40 years old. His body is also 9 years old. The author doesn't seem to find this creepy. I hope the chinese police are watching him.

The MC breaks a sand ninja spy out of prison. Its stupid because the 3rd hokage would have let her go if the MC told him why. Instead he feels the need to risk being a traitor.

There is no way the MC can teleport people through his ice! The MC can only do that because every cell in his body is ice! This author is so stupid!

Anko learning snake sage mode is a complete asspull! She doesn't even have enough chakra to learn sage mode. She also learned it in only a few weeks and never went to the snake cave. But the worst part may be that she can even melt the MC's ice with a normal fire jutsu in this mode.

The MC should be able to feel his surroundings in ice mode.

How would the Leaf not know anything about the 3rd Kazikage? He was around during the 1st hokage's time! They would have seen him fight countless times!

The MC, Kushina and Minato meet Naruto from the future. Its from when he went back in time in the lost tower movie. The problem is that Kushina's Kurama should have talked to Naruto's Kurama. He should have been able to find out everything. He also should have known his chakra was in Naruto without him using it.

Th 4th hokage gives the Leaf his families ultimate skill so they stop fighting! This is the dumbest thing ever! The 4th hokage would never do it!

The author didn't seem to know that Shisui awakened the Mangekyou when he was 7 years old. He awakened it when he saw his friend die in the 3rd ninja war. Then he became a pacifist and made friends with Itachi. Itachi was 5 and Shisui was 8 at that time. The author makes Shisui become the MC's student when he is 9 years old and the MC is 12-13 years old. The MC says that Shisui is only chunin rank. This author knows nothing about naruto! The MC even said he's going to bring Shisui to fight, so he can understand the brutality of war!

The author thinks Shisui's and Itachi's crows are from a summoning contract.

The 4th mizukage did not get 3 tails until after Rin's death.

This author loves to write bs.

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slaider23
slaider23 rated it
April 14, 2018
Status: Completed
Previous Review:
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I read most of the other fan fictions by authors like "Strongest hokage" and "God of Soul system" and others but for this the author took a different route. I'll be honest I'm not that interested in this, especially with him looking like he's going all Medical Ninja atm... The author's writing in this at times feel like some high school kid is writing while other times its okay (if I didn't know otherwise I would think this was his first novel)... The first chapter just feels like everything happened out of nowhere like a lotto event. But even if I look pass that there are a lot things in the beginning I really can't understand at all.

For example...

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He's fresh out the womb, meets his uncle in the narutoverse... who doesn't spend that much time with him in the beginning a little later he dies in the war... and when this guy finds out he gets so angry as if he was so emotionally attached to this person? If it was the mother I would understand but the uncle? I mean even the mother was shocked he even remembered his uncle who she said he hadn't seen since he was 1 year old (he's 5 years old now when his uncle dies), Plus it was angry enough to unlock his sharingan? Like really?

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Since this is only 10 chapters in theres not really much to go on but i'll continue to read either way and see how it goes...

Also translator needs to get someone to do editing for him as I ran into way too much grammatical errors and missing words.

(2/5) I'll probably read this in my free time when I have nothing else to read...

Update ---> Chapter 21

From what I see so far... this will be the most normal novel vs the others the author has written, when I say normal I mean he didn't add anything outside of the naruto world i.e. Fruit from one piece or Zanpacto (is that how it's spelt?) from bleach. Not that its bad or anything but anyway so far he has dropped the notion of being a medical ninja and started focusing on becoming stronger. There are few strange twists and turns but it only has slight potential so far so ill move it up to a (3/5).

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Update:

In my free time I decided to read some more into the raws... and the story turned out to be surprisingly good. The author doesn't introduce any foreign elements to the story like his previous novels (powers from bleach and one piece) but strictly focuses on naruto world elements to make our MC stronger... What I like is unlike his previous works in this one the MC tries hard to change the history we know, saving several characters who we know to be dead in the original story but this also causes some changes in the original story.

Such as
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one of Kaguya clansmen appear earlier which causes some slight confusion in the MC's planning but still solved none the less.

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The MC also chooses his own direction in terms of development and didn't follow the same route as Madaara and others to gain the 6th paths powers but instead used what he had to develop his own that turned out even stronger than them.

MC history in medicine also plays a big role in this as he successfully changes the Konoha medical system. This has small impacts on the story at first but later it causes bigger impacts.
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Small impact: Kakashi's sharingan no longer limits his potential as the MC along with orochimaru fixed the issue with the Sharingan not being compatible with Kakashi bcuz of him not having uchiha bloodline. MC

Major Impact: The MC fines the solution to mangekyo blindness without having to transplant another sharingan though it has some defects it worked for the most part. MC also did some soul and cloning research that he uses to bring back people who's souls he used his power to save.

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At the current chapter the MC has just finished the 4th ninja war with Madaara and etc... but the new arc is going in a different direction.

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MC decides to go to the home world of Kaguya to slaugter her clansmen instead of waiting for them to appear like in the story but this also further expands on the clan the original never mentioned.

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The story is done well imo, although there were one or two times the author said some then did the opposite the next chapter but for the most part it was okay. Also the author being chinese threw some of that coincidental bs in there lol...

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MC knows that Kaguya left something like beacon that could draw her clan towards their world, MC goes out of his way to destroy these things and coincidentally meet a stranger from outside of their world who happens to speak "Chinese" but is not from earth but a different race that happens to use Chinese as their main language lol (I'm assuming there will be an arc about this race also).

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Overall you will enjoy it if your a naruto fan, if not it will probably just come off as decent. The starting is kinda sh*tty in my opinion but the way the story develops, the interaction between MC and characters that weren't around in the original/the ones that were around and the methods the MC uses that changes certain elements in the story makes it interesting.

Rating : 3.8/5

Final Update:

F^&k this author... built up so many things that could branch off after 4th ninja war arc into something different yet he just ends it right there.

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Author built up so much expectation as if he was about to had his own original storyline to the narutoverse yet he just ends it after he fights the head of Kaguya's clan... like wtf... there were so many things left that he didn't pursue in the novel sh*t....

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Final Rating: 3/5 (f**k you) <<less
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Sef
Sef rated it
May 16, 2018
Status: c25
Let me say first that, although I am a fan of Naruto, I have never been much of a reader of fan fictions in general.

After seeing the rating this novel had at the time of this review (3.3/5 and getting lower), I went in expecting this novel to be a very poorly written amateur work.

After reading up to the currently released chapters, I found out that this isn't the case at all. In fact, I'm persuaded that people who have dropped such low ratings on this novel may have done... more>> so only because it is a Naruto-based fan fiction (and perhaps down voted it out of spite?).

The story itself so far has been fairly deliberate in its progression. The author knows enough about the original Naruto story and its background/historical details to not write in any uncomfortably glaring changes. An although the MC's influence on the world is shifting some parts of the history of the world, everything that has happened so far is believable in the grand scope of the original story.

Important character relationships have been maintained and the characters from the original work have kept true to their original personalities so far.

In addition, the MC as an original character to this fan fic doesn't feel glaringly out of place in the world of Naruto. In some other fan fics I've read (after trying this one), the new characters introduced through the fan fic sometimes have powers or abilities that don't blend well with the original canon world for various reasons (ripping space time with bear hands, shooting energy blasts, new elemental affinity outside of the established system, etc).

Although the MC here gets an ability that is specific to himself, it isn't one that it so different relative to the other kinds of abilities from the original setting that it feels thematically disconnected.

Also, the translation quality is well done. I don't find myself having to go back and reread phrases to understand what is being said. Although the original author is clearly not super advanced and captivating in regards to their diction, the message gets across clearly enough where it does't distract from the story being told.

The story is worth trying out if you're a fan of the original Naruto story. Though it isn't some expertly written fiction with captivating depth, it isn't without decent qualities (at least enough for some spare time reading). And it certainly deserves better reviews in comparison to many of the other stories on this site that somehow manage to achieve a 4-star rating. <<less
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Clegaspi012
Clegaspi012 rated it
May 28, 2018
Status: --
It’s actually not a bad fan fic. Character actually tries to change the negatives of the story that exist like a normal person would and the author knows his stuff about naruto. Only problem would be the main character is growing to fast I guess but it ain’t that bad. Give it a shot.
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scooby1234567
scooby1234567 rated it
October 22, 2018
Status: c95
its a fun series.

Some people are complaining that the MC isn't flinching when killing people and is ruthless and using people to complete his goals. I know this is shocking but ninjas kill people! People go to war and kill people.

the MC isnt naruto he doesnt have talk no jutsu.

the MC loves the series and he is doing everything you would do if you were in naruto world
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GenesisOfDeath
GenesisOfDeath rated it
April 15, 2018
Status: c10
Despite the beginning being a bit stretched to go to the narutoverse the novel is not that bad and in my perspective explains stuff very well.
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Krucifer
Krucifer rated it
October 13, 2018
Status: c128
I can only say, the author know nothing about naruto. He is just like a people who skip reading or skip watching naruto. There are so many nonsense he created himself for the convenient of the story. He should have done his research before creating this nonsense novel.
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Not Red Yet
Not Red Yet rated it
July 18, 2018
Status: c220
Started off kind of interesting but later you'll notice the author knows very little about Naruto universe.

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Pervy sage supposed to be already writing a novel yet only starts when MC tells him to. Has to teach the 4th Hokage how to us his own Jutsu Rasagan. The time line also gets messed up by the author. Doesn't help that author puts Rin into hiding then like 2-3 chapters later says she has an arranged marriage even though ever body knows she died how can she have a marriage if the entire village thinks she died and doesn't know she is in hiding??? The while Obito part is BS and the Pain sequence is even more so, I think we all would stop Nagato from becoming pain yet MC doesn't... Author also let's Danzo live multiple times even though he could kill him, Don't forget the unnecessary politics that Happen cause people told author to get into more politics (actually says so in a chapter) long story short: Authors info about Naruto is what friends told him probably and suffers from Chinese BS syndrome.

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GrimVeilRule
GrimVeilRule rated it
June 13, 2018
Status: c36
Some minor translation errors really noticeable in the first 5 chapters. I was having a lot fun with the story until around chapter 29 character goes full Mary Sue.
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what he can use sage mode and because of his ice mode there are no side effects of using natural energy! And only like 9 years old

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But I'll keep reading to see what happens. If your a Naruto fan you'll probable like this story. If you dislike Mary Sue type characters you probable won't like this story.
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Petrox
Petrox rated it
September 5, 2018
Status: Completed
This novel takes the whole anime/manga + movies (not all of them). I would rate it 3.5 stars if I could.

If you have watched naruto, this is a good read. He basically do every stuff you would have done if you were reborn there knowing what would happen. This is also the disadvantage of the novel. Changing too much would create another branch with another story and changing too little you are just retelling the story. This makes the author forcing certain plots that doesn't feel right in this branch... more>> to keep the story from branching too much.

Another fault is the MC is your typical Xianxia MC. Killing doesn't even make him flinch and feels like his previous life was a terrorist or assassin. What's diplomacy?Kill a lot, make them retreat, ask for compensation, rinse and repeat. What's trading? You have something I want, I take it by force. Law of the jungle. Too much blood for my taste.

Everything else this is a good read, making me finish it in 3 sleepless days with MTL. <<less
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stefanus101
stefanus101 rated it
June 28, 2018
Status: c36
Despite the low rating, I found that the story is good enough that it captures the charms of naruto world with some changes that is reasonable enough that the charms of the original naruto is not affected by too much, at least at this point inthe story that is
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