The first thing I need to say: It's adorable!

This is a heartwarming story that really gives you those fluffy, sugarless sugar rushes when you're feeling down. Becareful for diabetes!

This novel doesn't exactly have any real plot, but the characters are the kind that makes you squeal "aww!". Although there are probably better novels out there, if you just want a quick burst of happiness *topped with extra sweetness*, than this is it!

Aye...I like cute stories. More often than not, they involve little to no plot and only run on glucose.

But this... is a bad attempt at a cute story.

It is painfully obvious how hard the writer was trying to make this into a cute story. And cute stories shouldn't be handled that way.

On one side, we have a lo*icon hero who has fallen in love at first sight with the demon Lord. This speaks volumes about the strength of character/ideals of the hero as he fell in love at FIRST sight... more>> with hi enemy knowing who she is. I basically have a 'hero' who is a lo*icon. Dot. He does stand to the royal decree later on to protect his lover but really... it was already established that he is the strongest of them all.

(I got no issues with him being a lo*icon but him just doing a complete 180...I mean, dude! You really changed your case there.)

The Demon Lord. For a 200 year old Loli, all I can say is that she disappoints with her null dimensional character. Her ONLY 'cuteness' card comes from her Loli appearance. And her innocence?? She has been shown to not care about human life, and thus let her subordinates do as they please. Killing so easily... is not innocence. When she gets beaten and thrown into the hero's mansion, she continues to live there doing... cute stuff.

Again, both of their characters are pretty much non existent. But this is a fluff right? Why care??

I care because this is BAD fluff. And not to mention, the romance. A series of s*xual harassments that eventually (probably) get her to love him back.

While I might be cool with this kind of a romance in a CN or something else of other genres.... this book kinda like had ONE genre/job. And fluff is essentially fairytailesque. And this one falls just short of that, at 3.

I am being lenient here, as I have only read 15 of the 22 chapters (this is short). But from what I see, romance and fluff have to be the only two things in this. And it fails, imho.

This is not Mango approved. <<less

RIP kidneys, albeit not so literally.

This Maou has really low self-esteem and paranoid attitude. But don't worry, their fluffy interactions will soothe your dirty nasty conscience. The hero is head over heels to the Maou, even go as far as abandoning his duty as a Hero..... —wait, so does he still can be called a hero? Hmm...

Oh welp. Just shut up and enjoy the fluffiness.

—edit:

**reading the epilogue**

NGGAARGH—!! A-author..... I didn't expect... t-that..... **dead by sugar overload**

Did this really get completed? Because it just....... doesn't feel like it. Because there were some things that were left unquestioned and unanswered. Was "that" really the trigger to ending this novel? Wow.

Well, this novel was certainly cute and had a great buildup in the beginning, with FL having a lazy, paranoid and low self-esteem character whereas the ML had a bored, way too OP, doting and love-in-first-sight character. The ML tries his best to get his love reciprocated, although always failing because of FL's low self-confidence. Even though their... more>> relationship was forced by the ML, it somehow or another managed to smooth out in the end *cough cough Stockholm Syndrome*

Just wish the author wrapped up matters with the royalty a little better. <<less

Stockholm Syndrome the novel. You know how some cute anime girls make people say "I want to take her home"? Well, the "hero" did exactly that. And nobody could do a thing about it, because he was that strong. And he kept her like a pet until she stopped resisting his advances. Leaves a really bad aftertaste.

I feel that the author could have done a few interesting things with the setting too. I mean, it's a fantasy setting that has notebooks and internet at the same time as sword-wielding heroes.... more>> But we don't even have an explanation of how it works.

And the king didn't get what he deserves either. <<less

Seems like it could be a really nice story. Short, fluffy, and light-hearted.

Unfortunately, the translator commentary really ruins it. It's like watching a movie while someone in the background mocks almost every single scene. I really wonder if the translator actually hated this story. That's the only reason I can think of for ruining the feel of the story like that.

I wanted to read the story, but I gave up at chapter 4. To actually enjoy this story, I'd have to download the whole thing and remove the offhand comments... more>> that are every other sentence in some areas. It's really frustrating. But, that would take all the fun out of reading, so I'll just have to put this on my never read list and hopefully forget about it. <<less

In my opinion, I think more people should read this novel. It's definitely a cute love story with a doting love interest; it's what makes the story give you a light-hearted read. Although unfortunately it is short and sweet, the interactions of all the characters (especially the main female and male lead) is interesting and terribly fluffy that it could give you a toothache and squeeze out a couple of squeals. A strong hero unrivaled protecting and sheltering his beloved demon lord just to keep to himself is too adorable.... more>> If you're having a bad day or need something quick, I encourage you to read this novel! <<less

I didn't finish this story, so I'm just going by what I have seen so far.

When I saw the synopsis, I wanted to try reading this story. Because of the dead links, I went to the Internet.

Needless to say, I was very disappointed.

My eyes were tearing up just by peeking a glance at it. The idea of the plot is good, but the way it was written is not really that much great. Or maybe it's just the translation? I can't continue reading it until the end, and... more>> judging by the other reviews, maybe it's for the best. I do not want to waste my time.

Anyways, I'm just stating my opinions, it's up to to you if you want to try it. Maybe if you're into this kind of stuffs and doesn't mind the things I said, then go for it. But if you are looking for some quality read, don't even bother. Oh well, this is just my preference. <<less

I just don't know how I feel about this. It was such an abrupt ending, I thought I accidentally skipped some chapters.

It was cute. No real plot or progression. An extremely tiny slice of life?

I really don't know how many stars to give this...

I guess my advice is not to expect much and read this in between enjoying sips of tea.

Okay, first of all, the link is broken so I have to search another source to read this novel but the translation is a bit confusing. The premise is actually quite funny but for me, the story seems unfinished and makes me a bit disappointed.

Haha, truly lovely. Why couldn't there be more chapter!?

The pace was quite nice and everything played out well. But why, just why did author-sama have to leave it like that!? I so want to know want happens next. Cicily.. "Urgh, I mean Cecilia" is so cute and I hate Oliver for keeping her to him self but since I'm not in the novel, he'll have to do want I can't. But DOES IT EVEN MATTER if I can't read about it *crying*. A light novel comes out with more story.

All... more>> in all great story and Cecilia is cute. <<less

Nothing heavy, no real plot or progress but this is a cute fluffy romance kind of story that might keep you grinning all the time~

The romance is so slow though (if not very very slow) and so I believe the number of chapter is not enough to show any real progress between the two. The epilogue is quite a bomb, but it just made me wants more!!

In short, it is a fun read and I recommend it to everyone!!

Its an okay novel. Just fluffy story about hero who fall in love with cute dense demon lord-chan and try to make her his own property, simple yet adorable. Its not bad, and isnt great either for me. Just act like novel for filling ur break time since its short.