Half-elves Fall in Love

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The spring fountain town of miracle that heals anything, Polka. In the hometown of memories, with my dear parents, there was a figure of a half-elf girl who swore to become my female slave.

Repeating such a memorable talk every time he drinks alcohol, 25 years old Andy Smeyson is a former blacksmith’s apprentice and an innocent crossbow soldier. Andy is surrounded by nice companions and competent and sexy bosses, which is different from what he had thought when he was a child, but this was a cozy life. When the half-elf girl suddenly appeared in front of him, he will jump into a furious destiny. Andy, who is weak but courageous​ and clever will meet a lot of different race ladies such as elves, half elves, dark elves, loli dwarves, dragon girls, beast girls and make them his female slaves one after another. The horny adventure started from a half elf girl who doesn’t stop liking him will eventually become a legend ──.

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惚れ症のハーフエルフさん
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Fluffums
Fluffums rated it
May 25, 2019
Status: c853
Seeing as I've read 750 more chapters, I think I'll give a slightly more in-depth review, starting with the cons.

  • The "translation" is machine translation with poor editing. Machine Sliced Bread does better on some other novels, but for this one if you want to read just search the japanese title on google and read it at the original site.
  • The harem is large. You might go a hundred chapters without seeing your favorite character much because Andy doesn't drag everyone with him everywhere all the time.
  • It's a little repetitive at points. If you just read a few chapters a day it shouldn't be too noticeable, but if you binge read a hundred chapters in a day like I did, you'll see some lines repeated and similar h-scenes.
  • The early heroines fall in love really easily. Later on there'll be a variety of reasons for women to join the harem, but it will mostly not be because they got to know him and fell in love with his personality.
  • Don't think too deeply about why the miraculous healing waters are available to everyone and not monopolized by royalty.
Still with me? Good. Because this is one of the best protagonists I've seen. He's a Good Guy, but he doesn't let people walk all over him. He's a friendly, sociable person who gets along with anyone.... more>> He's not hypocritical, either - his idea of a good ending includes saving the villains too. Even men. But if it's in the middle of battle he's not reluctant to kill, either. He's honest with his feelings and proactive in relationships and adventures alike. Aside from all this, he has other strengths and weaknesses and overall comes off as a real person. He grows in a lot of ways over the course of the story.

The side characters are also extremely well-done. Even with a cast of easily 60 recurring characters, each one has a strong personality and is memorable. That includes both the harem and side male characters. I'm not good with names, but not only can I remember the names of 40 harem members, I can remember their personalities and sexual preferences and why they decided to become slaves.

The slave harem itself is amazing. First of all, it's the only slave harem I know of without magical slave collars that force obedience. Second, everyone knows it's wrong. Andy knows it's wrong and feels immoral about it. The slaves (mostly) know it's wrong but don't care how society sees them (most of them are masochists and enjoy being slaves). The normal people around Andy heavily disapprove of it and hide their daughters and sisters from him. Third, Andy treats his slaves as slaves. A revolutionary idea for a slave harem. Fourth, they all have strong personalities. There's 40 slaves and each one is unique in more than just appearance.

The story itself is good. I'd classify it as slice of life, but it's a fairly exciting life in many ways. The author splits the story pretty evenly between plot and porn, but the porn supports the plot and the plot supports the porn. There's a lot of world-building and character growth during the travels, though the harem members mostly grow in lewd directions. The porn does slow down the adventure but it's indispensable for getting to know the characters. The first few chapters throw girls at Andy who fall in love too easily IMO, but what happens after that makes sense as long as you understand that Andy is a pervert with a strong sense of justice, and the kind of woman who would get close to a guy with s*x slaves is...

The world is interesting and I look forward to seeing what kind of incident will occur in the next city/country Andy visits, and what kind of women he'll meet.

Harem as of c853:

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Main harem: Diane + Slaves: 11 elves, 7 dark elves, 7 dragons, 7 catgirls, 4 half-elves, 2 humans, 1 dwarf. A unicorn. Side harem members: The women from two dragon palaces. A catgirl village. Dark elf maids serving Diane's father. On the waiting list to join the main harem: Two humans and a dark elf.

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xXPredzioXx
xXPredzioXx rated it
August 25, 2018
Status: v1c1
Premiss loks great I like the presentation on c1 and I rate 5 stars for now im looking forward to what will happen next

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I love especialy how MC despite being perverted du not sleep with just any woman prete rare in this type of stories

And I love how the half elf came looking for her master and is not afraid of admit her relationship with him go get him girl

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Aharlequin
Aharlequin rated it
June 18, 2019
Status: --
I had been read all the chapters that were translated. So I'm gonna said my opinion. First of all, I really love S*x scenes there has a lot of Mouth Abusing Play. Most of MC girls are M. MC becomes like S. So it's fine. If you don't like that kind of play, don't read it. That's a lot of Netori parts or somethings like that. Second, that's decent storyline. MC is weak but he's not idiot. Really Weak.

If you are coming here Ero. So here. If you are coming... more>> for decent storyline and Ero. So it is still fine. Plot is ok. That does not have any plot hole or plot trick. Not deep, not dark. MC is not dense. For me it's good ero and recommend to read. <<less
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