God Of Soul System

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All Things of this World, Turn to Ashes, Flowing Blade-like Flame!

Crossing over to the world of pirates (the One Piece world), eleven years after Gol D. Roger’s death, Roja becomes marine hero Garp’s nephew and obtains the Sword Soul system, which lets him gain strength without limits and learn various skills.

Flowing Blade-like Flame (Ryūjin Jakka), Mirror Flower, Water Moon (Kyoka Suigetsu), Moon Fang Heaven-Piercer (Getsuga Tensho), Thousand Cherry Blossoms (Senbonzakura)……

Roja looked at Akainu in front of him and told him seriously
“If this sword descends, you may be roasted to death.”

Associated Names
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God Level Sword Soul System
GOSS
神级剑魂系统
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MyRAMEN
MyRAMEN rated it
May 7, 2021
Status: c40
It started off pretty interesting, but the story started to go downhill quick. One reason I dropped was because many of the historical/era parts of One Piece was wrong, for example wrong ranks at the time, wrong place, et cetera. Another reason was that the characters were very different from their actual One Piece characters. The only similarities were the abilities and names, but u can basically consider them a whole nother char. But it's fan fiction, so I won't hang too much on that. The real reasons why I... more>> dropped and rated thus as a 2 mostly comes to 3. One is that the main character's personality devolved into a arrogant cliche cringe personality, and the story started to revolve around that. Second is that the story progression was honestly somewhat awful after the first few chaps as it started to revolve around the new MC personality when he finally got an ounce of power. Third is just how overpowered he is, which already usually ends up as a bad story if not written well, which unsurprisingly turned out as bad. Now there is 0 suspense, the only conflict there is by arrogant chars who randomly pick fights in the most forced ways ever and the new personality MC reacting/acting exactly how'd u expect... The story was quickly starting to devolve, a d I couldn't keep myself reading eventually. If I had to pick one more horrible thing about this novel, then it'd be the romance, which was already bad enough as the current female leads cbaracter/personality heavily differs from the actual One Piece series <<less
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wendelar
wendelar rated it
July 30, 2020
Status: Completed
If you're in a "Overpowered MC" - novel mood with the degree of OP-ness being no drama, no/little amount of slice of life, no/negligible tr*sh talk before fights and are somewhat familiar with One Piece, Naruto and Bleach then I'd definitely recommend this novel.

Whether or not you'll like the pace of story progression and strength growth is very subjective after all, but for sure worth a try.

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Chapter 600 and onwards story feels a little rushed and kind of forced to make the MC fight certain groups just for the sake... more>> of it and in my opinion these group fights became the most boring part. Additionally some pointless killing. I ended up simply skimming through two of those group fights, because it was too repetitive for me. I think even chapters 600+ are worth a reading attempt, but I'd recommend to just start skimming/skipping if it gets boring, because there's not that much happening anymore storywise. <<less
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7starkiller99
7starkiller99
November 5, 2019
Status: Completed
Novel should have separate ratings for each arc.

One Piece: 4.5

The main story arc! MC has over 10 legitimate fights! Here we see MC use bleach powers to wipe out all the OP mainstays and ... more>>
Spoiler

Wife Hancock.

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Naruto: 3.75

Naruto was paced but author gives everyone super confusing strength levels. MC can beat time static by using the Fire Bankai... MC is weaker than Six Paths Sage in Chakra form as a Hollow. There is only 2 legitimate fights this arc... and no taken advantage of the fact that MC Owns an entire One Piece world and yet never brought over any of his people other than Hanc*ck to the Naruto world...

Bleach: 3.5

Bleach arc was rushed and MC never even used any of the Bankai he gained before versus the Captains of Gotei 13. There are only 3 legitimate fights in the Bleach arc... which is such a waste considering MC is the most powerful he is now and I wanted to see him take on the supposedly "Strongest" enemies. But we still had some fun interactions.

Basically GOSS suffers from sequel syndrome where all further stories are worse than the first.

Also MC becomes progressively lazier and less Haki Conquerer the further the story gets. It's weird seeing Roja become a mellow guy after all his domineering marine days.

The rushed Bleach arc ends just as badly if not worse than compared to the Original Manga... <<less
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AzureFenix
AzureFenix rated it
July 26, 2018
Status: c246
One of my favourite novels right now, I watched quite a bit of both One Piece and Bleach, so I know the Characters and abilities, but I'm not a huge fan. I actually prefer this story over the original. Good pacing, likable characters, good action and a very good translation make this my favourite fan fiction.

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A name is useless
A name is useless rated it
April 9, 2018
Status: c190
A good novel with good ideas, MC with shinigami powers from bleach in One Piece world is interesting and really enjoying to read in my opinion but I'm affraid because I know after the One Piece world he will go in Naruto and Bleach worlds and I think I will lost a lot of pleasure to read since I prefere OP world than the two others, OP world is larger, wilder and more unknow and characters are more funny and charismatic and I don't know why he will leave OP... more>> world since until now there are no reasons at all, if it just for ad more chapters in the novel for a bullsh*t reason I will be really desapointed, but maybe the story will be as good in the two others worlds as OP world.

The romance seems to be Boa Hanc*ck but what will happend to her when MC will leave the world? Will he bring her in other worlds? Will he leave her alone and have a new romance in other worlds? Will he return in OP world after leaving the other worlds or will he return in his origin world and what will happen in the romance (s) in this case? Or I just dreaming and Hanc*ck is not at all the romance and it 's just my own desire towards Hanc*ck who speaking^^? I wonder if he will eat a logia, a paramecia or maybe but I don't think a zoan or if he will eat anything?

I just think this novel deserve a faster translation but since I only read for free I don't have the right to complaint so Mr translator keep going your great work and thanks for translating this novel.

Sorry for my broken english^^. <<less
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dragonmage124
dragonmage124 rated it
February 14, 2018
Status: --
If you can ignore the timelines errors (which there are lots of) , ignore the false romance (he gets the girl drops her like a worn out shoe to go to 2 different worlds while collecting 'maids' that are tossed as well in 2 different worlds [the 1st and 2nd worlds maids] only to be with the girl there for a few chapters worth of time [in both the 1st and 2nd world] with a whole one line at the last world in the last chapter), and the rapid changes... more>> in personality of some characters [with huge and rapid fluctuations to the mc's personality that are sometimes an observer, sometimes a standard xiānxiá/xuánhuàn of cultivate for many days without caring about the world since ya no one will harm the people I care about while I sit down and meditate for day to years for that little power jump or since you harmed my ppl I will kill you all, sometimes silkpants young master teasing girls while tossing all the work to underlings, sometimes trying to be the evil behind the scenes], and the unreasonable rapid learning speed of any type of skill or even world law... then you can enjoy the story [since it is like watching kids put on a play of being the MC of different books mixed into one play all the while forgetting the order of events and adding there own events into the mix] <<less
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Justpointing
Justpointing rated it
February 11, 2018
Status: c215
I can't give this a higher rating than three stars. As a fan fiction, this story fails miserably and the plot is without any depth as well. The only reason this is three stars and not two is because that it has characters which I know and like in it.

I'm only in the first arc (One Piece) of a total of three and so far the story is still well before the actual beginning time of One Piece. As a fan fiction, I expect for events of the MC to... more>> coincide with the storyline of the original works, not everything taking place before hand. To make matters worse, the enemies just line up like a production line and most battles are boring and without any depth and is just focused on showing the mc's constant growth of power.

I've been skipping many chapters and skimming over others as the "original story" in the anime worlds aren't very engaging. If it wasn't for characters I know and like, I wouldn't have even gotten this far into the novel.

EDIT as of c709 (completed)

I still can't give this more than three stars. Battles get slightly more interesting sometimes, but people are still lining up in a row constantly challenging the MC. It's too repetitive.

The story does cover the original plot, but most of the events take place prior in all three worlds. The plot that takes place during the anime timeline is horrendously brief. Out of 709 chapters, only 150 approx cover the anime original timeline and events.

The mail love interest is a disappointment as they are more of a convenient side character. The MC leaves the first world, saying that he will bring her over briefly, then immediately forgets and later uses the pretence of making it "safe" before bringing her over. She is then forgotten somewhere in the second world and seems to vanish from existence and is only mentioned again in the last two sentences of the final chapter in the third world. I'm a sucker for romance plot lines, but the romance in this novel is absent. <<less
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Rohan Hades
Rohan Hades rated it
December 18, 2017
Status: c156
This is a novel where if you know more about bleach then one piece you will enjoy it. Basically this novels leveling system is just spice, giving sword abilities at every stage and mystical because growth of such a level system is not consistent.... more>>
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I am at chapter 156 and he hasn't even unlocked his own shikai yet, but can use ichigos abilty and 2 other captains ability. If he does unlock his shikai and it turns out to be a clone of bleach then this novel is tr*sh but if it combines the abilities he currently has into his shikai then its going to be great.

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If your sensitive in seeing the one piece world being dominated by bleach then this is not the novel for you. <<less
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zidane86
zidane86
December 9, 2017
Status: c466
A good story to read if u like bleach, naruto and one piece. But there is a catch, I don't know is it for increasing the chapter/word count, after the one piece world it felt a massive drop in attraction....

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First 359 chapter is in one piece world with main char using his very own zanpaku thousand magic (yeah it can basically using all other zanpaku ability) along one piece world of haki and body strengthening till he conquer the whole world and become overload in one piece world. (Don't worry luffy still get his one piece using identity of adventurer instead of pirate)
Then the next 207 chapter, main char goes naruto world and repeat strengthening using chakra, natural chakra, path of six and merge those power with his shinigami and repeat conquer naruto world to become overload.

At last 143 chapter of him going to bleach world and conquer the world and become overload.

You see the repeating part yet ? He keep going from world to world absorb different power system and conquer everything like some sort of ego to fulfill. The chapter is getting shorter and shorter because the author running out of thing to write. After the first world the next 2 world very quickly become boring because of repeating theme. If only the author end the whole thing at first world it will be a great 4/5 star story but if u add in the next 2 world I don't even know it is deserve 3/5 star.

By the way https://www. novelupdates. com/series/the-strongest-hokage/ is author earlier story with similar setting but only with naruto and one piece world. And the whole novel stink of repackaging so try not to read both novel together.

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Niurem
Niurem rated it
March 5, 2022
Status: c376
I tried my hardest to not drop but wow.

Overall the beginning is ok but becomes so bad I would rather you don't start since you can't really read the good parts then quit because it gets very bad before the first arc even ends.

World Building - tr*sh. The world is already set for the author by a better one but still the guy manages to tr*sh it.

Characters - at start theyr fine but after a while you start thinking this is not the one piece universe this is just a... more>> knockoff with worse characters overall, you cant see luffy or shanks or even random characters doing what they do.

Writing - starts as a story from one piece universe then becomes a generic xianxia with faceslapping and crowd reacting to MCs coolness.

Translation - just check first chapter and laugh since these are supposedly *edited* chapters too lol

The site - sooo many ads. Between the chapter before chapter after chapter and even when you're reading theres an ad bar on top and below the page that moves with your screen while reading lmao

Mc- very very sad. The MC completely changes even before the first quarter from a funny, hard working and ambitious MC who tries to make his favorite characters from an anime series he loves happy, to wuxia MC eith face slapping and awkward trying to look cool but can't character with dirty jokes.

Starts good MC is living the best life and our dreams, he's in one piece world with potentially very strong powers, ok good. Feels like what you'd expect reading a one piece novel but then as MC gets stronger he turns into chinese MC faceslapping and waiting for the audiences reaction. At first 100 chapters this was ok as the scenes were written like kinda cool moments from one piece but after that its like the author stopped for a while and read every generic wuxia ever. If you look at the chapter titles after ch 100, theres a chapter with just the title MONSTER!. Like 20 times. And then when the MCs power starts breaking the setting of the one piece world, this author tries to fill in the blanks created but every thing he writes is soo generic that it doesn't feel like its a one piece fanfic. One pieces amazing world building is just sh*t on. As MC for some inexplicable reason starts having a complete overhaul of his personality and values for the same reason one piece and the other universe characters also start changing and you start seeing these phrases we hate to see, "So this is the *mc's current title*'s true power!" "Theres no way MC get out of this situation now!" or "How is he so strong, this isnt possible, ". Then theres the characters, in one piece it wasnt so obvious to me since im not a huge one piece fan but as we go into other worlds where I know characters better the worse thing to see in a parody reared its head. The characters we love acting like completely opposites of what we're used to and being treated like cannonfodder tr*sh. Im ok with the story being about MC after a certain point but did the author not read or watch the actual shows hes referencing? Or is he not good enough at writing characters that should be smart doing smart things? Since an author doesnt have to be very smart to write smart people but I guess characters are only as smart as the author. The MC around the start of the second arc gets even worse as he does dirty jokes and innuendos to lolis which comes off creepy but the author seems to know his readers won't like it so MC suddenly plays it off as a joke and says he has a lover which just leaves the ends of these situations even more awkward. And yes this is why I kept referring to author as he, you don't have to research to know the author is male and he also hasnt been in a relationship, ive only seen one romance event happening and it was *bad* but I didnt really care since I just said meh let the author write out his single romance fantasy I guess but if the characters are dull the females are even more so. Like the reasons some females blush at the MC for made me cringe so hard I questioned how old the author is and if he- *and I hate to say this*- ever talked to a woman before. Im disappointed more than angry that I wasted my time since the first 100 or maybe 200 chapters were like they were written by another author. Pity. <<less
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LoliconAkuma
LoliconAkuma
January 4, 2022
Status: Completed
Okay, I've read a decent number of fanfics and some that aged well and others that didn't. I've read power fantasies and hentai fantasies, this one didn't feel like a fanfic but instead a cash grab. The reason is that the story neither tackles anything that an actual fan would write fiction about. Instead it felt more like a story written by some random dude in a room who heard that many people loves OP and Bleach then decided to make a story that could attract them.

If you want to... more>> read a fanfic that is actually a fanfic better stray away from this. So to explain why I said my previous words I'll avoid spoiler territory and just enumerate the various things that went wrong for this fic. If you want the short version go to the bottom TLDR.

First is the one piece timeline, I don't care if the author messes up the timeline or does some BS with it but! I do care if the author completely ignores the sequence of events that allow certain things to occur. This is important because OP has s much information that many people will really like this fic if it actually even remotely considers the existence of such information. Let me put it this way the author seems only to know the general progression of the actual story of OP, moreover this isn't a case of a story not aging well but instead complete ignorance of the information even the most casual watcher of OP (which I am, yes I am an anime only guy) would find countless holes in.

Second the literal personality of the characters in the story, I get it each person would see or interpret characters differently. But! This author took it into a whole new level, the various characters felt more like Xanxia cardboard cut-outs than OP characters. For a fanfic I questioned multiple times, "Is this an OP fic or a Xanxia fic?". Since most of the characters barely reflect the personalities they had in OP! Heck the way the characters speak are not an error in translation, the way word are said by characters, if the author can't reflect their personality he could at least make them sound neutral. But nooo he had to make majority of the characters sound like characters from some cultivation world even pirates sound like some weak sect disciple who were amazed at the MC.

Third - events, arcs and battles, I enjoy power fantasy I really do, but this story made me imagine a Xanxia powerfantasy than an OP powerfantasy. This is because the author wrote it in a more "Cultivation world" style. It's not bad if done right but I felt like the author just googled the most famous characters of OP and then added them. The characters don't resemble their OP counterpart and exist solely to make the story feel more "One Piece like" even if some did have a bit of resemblance its more like Mihawk = sword god, Big mom = b*tchy soul hag, Kaido = dragon dude, Luffy = shounen MC, and so on. The events play out in typical MC flex, peanut gallery go "WOW!" women go "LET ME HAVE UR BABY!" but MC just acts cold and detached. Because of this no matter how much chaos he causes between the nexus characters things still ends up in the same way- I mean if he didn't touch nexus characters I could accept things playing out the same way but-
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he basically became an OP powerhouse but for some reason the marines still chose to do the whole Marineford shlik instead of just sicing the MC to the Emperors which in the end he still did, moreover I don't care what kind of endgame theory the author had so I'll ignore the whole becoming a God thing

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Final Verdict- if you remotely like or even just know of OP, Naruto or Bleach- I advise you to avoid this novel if you want an enjoyable read. This is not completely unreadable but its best read to waste time with your brain turned off.

TLDR: Lack of knowledge of the fiction he's making a fanfic on, the titles and characters are used solely to make people read. Read with your brain turned off else you'll probably drop the novel in the first 10 to 50 chapters. If you are a hardcore fan of OP, Naruto or Bleach skip it, even with your brain turned off you'll probably see many problems. It's basically a Xanxia version of OP, Naruto and Bleach, with characters who are also Xanxia-esque. <<less
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Kevin06x
Kevin06x rated it
April 19, 2021
Status: c709
I have finally finished this novel. For a quick review, it has a decent story and is very fun to read as this is action-based, so go read this if you have nothing better to do. Based solely on enjoyment here are my scores:

One Piece World Arc: 9/10 (Fun to read and would read this Arc again.)

Naruto World Arc: 6/10 (Not really fun. Wouldn't read again.)

... more>> Bleach World Arc: 7/10 (Kind of fun, minus the cringe dialogue. Would read again with proper translations.)

A more in-depth review on why I gave these numbers is here...

One piece:

Honestly the best thing about this entire book, it was fun at the beginning and it was fun all the way until the end. Like seriously, I couldn't stop reading it and skipped a couple of hours of sleep to read the fights between Roja (MC) and other Yonkos. It doesn't lean too much on the original story and mostly focuses on the MC, it barely even has other characters that frequently appear. The timeline is also pretty good, you can tell the author knows one piece to a certain level.

Story: 8/10 Not perfect but good enough to have some fun and enjoy Roja destroying people like nothing, out of the 3 Arcs this one has the best pacing and understanding of the story. Although there isn't much detail apart from normal stuff so you'll probably have to google some characters if you haven't watched one piece.

Characters: 8/10 most characters are pretty loyal to the story as they keep their same personality most of the time, almost all the time I can picture the character saying that in the actual anime. Nothing much to say here.

Action: 9/10 Best part of the story, the action in this Arc was really good and actually really good. In the later part of the story, there are little to no scenes of MC actually seriously fighting apart from certain fights but yeah barely anything. In this Arc, he had to fight strong people while being weak which made me really into this story. The power system is decent too.

Naruto:

Wasn't anything special but still somewhat decent, it's a little downgrade from the one-piece arc but nothing too dramatic. I couldn't read this too often though, I had to take like week breaks in between since it got so boring in some of the scenes. This is way before the actual beginning of the plot so you only see naruto and the main characters towards the end of the Arc.

Story: 6/10 Honestly the worst out of the 3 arcs, not because it was badly written but because it was boring. Pretty much they focused more on the side characters in this Arc and I would be interested but none of the characters there are interesting, like none. That lead to pretty dragged fights and boring dialogue.

Characters: 5/10 Again the characters here are what brings this entire Arc down for me. I finished this arc less than a week ago and literally forgot everybody in this part, that's how forgettable it is. (Only sage of sixth paths is a lil cool)

Action: 7.5/10 The only good thing in this Arc, although there's little action in this Arc, when it comes it's pretty sick. when he was fighting characters that I always wanted to see to fight, I was honestly hyped. However, I will say that most of these fights are one-sided, back in the one-piece arc there was actual tension in some fights since you don't expect Roja to win but somehow they come up with bs ways for him to survive. LOL, but here there is like 2 fight that has a tiny bit of tension

Bleach:

Nothing too serious here, it is average. I enjoyed it but I probably would've liked it a lot more if I didn't read the MTL of this. I got aids trying to read some of the more complicated information but that's not the author's fault so I shall not judge him based on the translations. This one was better than the naruto arc though idk why I just don't like that arc.

Story: 7.5/10 Pretty good, this also starts before the main story so there is little taken from the original story. It was somewhat interesting seeing his interactions with other captains/shinigami. I probably would binge this if it wasn't for the shitty translations.

Characters: 7/10 This would've been a better score if the author didn't decide to add those cringey, really cringey Chinese dialogue like "Little child" "Courting Death" types of shit. Nothing worth dropping but still, I really hated that. This actually has good characterization and explains the side characters really well. If you haven't read or watched bleach you could still understand this really well, really enjoyed his interactions in this one.

Action: 6/10 Apart from that one fight in with the knights and sh*t (I forgot the name of those people) there really was like no good fight scene. It's either A. MC wins with 0 effort or B. MC tries like a little and shits on everybody. That's pretty boring right. He unlocked all those bankais and still didn't use them once in bleach which is like what??? isn't that the point of unlocking those bankais? I'm pretty mad at this.

All in all, I'm not that much of a picky reader. This story didn't bother me too much, but if you want an in-depth good story and plot fanfiction, then you'd probably not like it as much as I did. I just read for the dumb and funny action scenes. If I were to give this an actual full-on review then this would be a 3.5/5 Start Fancfiction and a 2/5 story. I'm giving a 4/5 since I'm in a good mood.

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Ending: 1/10 literal dog sh*t because it was so underwhelming. HE DIDNT EVEN HAVE KIDS WITH BOA even after turning immortal. I was still ok with it though because it was still an ending. Glad he didn't stretch it out however I believe this could've gone for another 10-15 chapters of them drawing out the fight and ending instead of cramming it in 1 chapter.

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moneng85
moneng85 rated it
February 15, 2021
Status: c600
3.6-3.7

Conflicted feeling, it was good the first few hundreds, until his Power level was scaling in an unpreceeded manner

Some characters are not portrayed well

There is a lot of killing, but characters are uselessly killed here and there like harvesting wheat, not with an emotional battle, a great reason or what so

Takes away what is romantic about one piece

Moving worlds was OK, but another un- accurate portrayal of how it should have been if this character is not in the story flow and that
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Dazky
Dazky rated it
September 19, 2020
Status: --
So this guy went through 3 different worlds and conquered every one of them,

First lets talk about the worlds with one piece world which is the longest one and was probably the best of them all because it was the very first one and my dude went from 0-100 and trained to achieve Ryūjin Jakka and Haki and other things, not like in the next world (Naruto) where he already started with all of them and he just needed to absorb some natural energy while he already was one... more>> of the strongest.

And then we have the Bleach in which my dude just did nothing expect learing kido and just waited for the hogyoku to achieve final form <<less
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nothingtodo
nothingtodo rated it
March 13, 2019
Status: c317
3.5 stars

the MC character is confusing he kills doflamingo and leaves crocodile&blackbeard?

it was good till around 220 after roja beats big mom then it became boring like the author felt it will end early so he dragged it out with the ace/luffy stuff and the normal timeline although MC knows they wont be bad pirates who go around killing and loting (except for ace who would be till he joins whitebeard) when garp is sad about them being pirates he says ok I will handle that and go hits them... more>> tells them its ok to be pirates but dont be bad pirates or I will arrest u and leave them?

he let ace be arrested and doesnt train him or luffy but trains tashigi? He doesn't seem like one piece fan but hentai fan

MC wants to beat the world government (for short 'wg') but he waits for lv6? He's already the strongest what is he afraid of? He meets dragon tells him he wants to be a god? Not even coordinate a plan to overthrow the wg he has a passive to get back spiritual power from killing people but it still runout in group fights?

at lv6 he wishes to get rikua and toshiro skills seriously did u watch bleach? With shinji hirako shikai (it reverses direction) he'd be invincible. <<less
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vamsip000
vamsip000 rated it
July 8, 2017
Status: Completed
Hardcore fans of One Piece that love luffy, that love naruto, that love ichigo do not read this. Because in this series the plot was completely controlled by MC where the original MC of the anime in this are completely become background characters as they hold no importance.

I have enjoyed this series. MC was not like other where they are transported to anime world and create harem with all the main characters that are beautiful. MC only and truly loves Boa Hanc*ck from start to finish, although there are many... more>> followers to him and love him.

As for the story only one piece was still running and author made an interesting story to complete it and naruto and bleach somewhat follows the story.

I like it so I completed it. <<less
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HunterGeorge
HunterGeorge rated it
July 4, 2017
Status: c172
Interesting. Let's see how this goes. The one piece world is perfect for a swashbuckling adventure, especially the Marineford arc! Personally, I have caught up to the latest chapter. Overall I would say that it has been surprisingly good; the grammar has improved, and there are no longer any jarring mistakes which confuse you as the word flow has improved. It looks like the story will get better, also this is a self-insert and some of the characters are distinctly different from the characters from the manga or show. Garp,... more>> for example, has become softer than he was in the manga. Where he put Luffy through hell, somehow, Roja does not get the same treatment during his training arc. Also, the character of Roja feels very robotic like he is always too cool but then again this is a self-insert. What did you expect? Anyways, this is an okay novel to waste some of your time and for a quick read. It's like pizza, it's a guilty pleasure. You like it but you know it isn't all that good for you. <<less
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Mahesvara_
Mahesvara_
November 23, 2023
Status: c221
First and foremost. This translation is ruined my immersion on several levels. Using google translation on raw sites is still better than this insufferable translation.

So many missing paragraphs, and the sentences makes the story feel pretentious like for example in the raw it says "Roja is a little surprise for a moment" it was calm and subtle but in the translation it says "Roja's eyes popped out of their sockets" which made it look cartoonish, overreacting and removes the seriousness of the MC.

There's also a high amount of inaccuracy like... more>> for example: From the raw novel the MC is talking about how to learn a sword skill by 'swinging the sword several times in a second' similar to kicking the ground 10x to learn Soru Rokushiki. But in the TL the MC is talking about using 'weights for training', both came from the same novel but the content is completely out of context. The TL from translatin_Otaku is basically butchered version of the real novel.

Also, the translator also keeps making unnecessary comments in the middle of the story. I hate these kind of attention seeker translators the most. This actually caused missing paragraphs, the translator probably got excited adding his own 2cents and because of that he most likely accidentally erased the important paragraph that should be there.

PS: I found Novelhi had complete content and overall better grammar than translatin_Otaku but some names of the characters are spelled wrongly.

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This is a very low quality fanfic. The only reason I'm even reading this sh*t is mainly because of the source material is interesting enough and MC's powers bit by bit climbing the ranks of the world. The MC definitely has plot armor but it's not very obvious and he undergo the process of getting stronger.

Pros:

  1. This novel had a good "Weak to Strong" element in it. Just following MC getting stronger is fun in itself. This is the only good thing in the novel.
But there's so much bad than good in this novel.

Cons:

  1. Translation is tr*sh and incomplete. It's not about the grammar, it's about the very content of the story. So many necessary paragraphs are cut off from the whole novel and it's also obvious that the Translator doesn't understand what he was translating at all.
  2. MC's personality is all over the place, at first MC mostly acted like a normal person- then he get stronger a bit he became arrogant as if world is beneath him as he starts calling people "Ants"- then sometimes he will turn cold as if he doesn't have any emotion- sometimes he acts like a young master telling people " how dare you question me"- then sometimes he is humble as if he couldn't even harm an ant- sometimes he acts like a complete snobby guy condescendingly look at others as if they don't matter- sometimes he does random sh*t out of nowhere! (Example: MC meets Nico Robin, Robin tries to run away from him because MC is a marine, but MC playfully blocks her prevents her from leaving and then he killed a few criminals trying to act cool in front of Robin then he suddenly just ask her "Why are you still here?" MC basically blocks robin for no reason now he ask why the f*ck is she there?!! Fvck. And then after that Robin never appears again only giving shock reaction about MC whenever she read newspaper about him! That's it's) MC's personality is a complete turn off for me, I would rather have a robotic emotionless MC rather than this erratic MC that doesn't make sense, this is just plain abomination. Author also keeps making the MC "Acting cool" almost everytime. For example: MC will appears in front of female characters trying do a cool pose by crossing his arms while leaning to a wall to look cool. MC's personality is Cringefest.
  3. Everyone underestimates the MC and it's very overused to the point of ret*rdation in this story. MC basically grows from Nobody to Stronger than Admiral level and yet people keeps trying to downplay the MC's achievements. Also, whenever MC fight someone all mob characters will whisper among themselves and mock the MC then they'll praise the MC's opponent listing all the achievements of the opponent, saying the MC is no match to that guy or whatever. So when the MC manage to beat the Opponent the people will deny it and say "How can he beat him?!" "This is impossible!" Basically like those mob characters from cultivation novel. This happens every single time in all his fights. Even akainu was like "He manage to become as strong as vice-admiral in just less than a year but eh, he will never catch up to me." MC's growth from a Weakling to a Vice-Admiral level in less than a year was enough to surprise everyone but still keeps downplaying the MC as if he's nothing special. Lol.
  4. No notable side characters that are interesting. Everyone is bland and has no depth, they all exist to give shock reactions whenever the MC shows his power.
  5. Cringe and chunni.
The one that annoyed me the most is the MC's personality and too much underestimation of MC. I read this far because I was expecting it to be gone later in the story when MC finally becomes very strong but it never stops. MC being mocked by weak mobs because they think their boss is better keeps happening.

Plot: 2/5

Concept: 2/5

Characters: 1/5

Enjoyment: 2/5

Translation: 1/5

Overall: I'll give it 2 stars.

PS: If you're gonna read this better read multiple story at once and read this only on the sidelines, If you focus reading this I don't think you'll just get pissed off and you will want to drop it. <<less
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fightready2
fightready2 rated it
October 1, 2021
Status: Completed
This fanfiction takes place in three anime arcs so I want to give it three reviews. The first could be the basis of all things fun in the story with creative character interactions and fun displays of power. When I want to re-read anything from this story, it will typically be from this arc. From there it takes a standpoint of a conqueror moving on to his next place to conquer while taking his time getting to be the most OP the world has to offer. The second arc introduces... more>> its world with a clash between two different world's power systems but this is neglected for the third. Sadly, the third was both promising but also disappointing with the idea of how the main character would interact with this specific power system that ultimately became a watch-a-long as he kept his abilities as secret as possible and let the story progress to a point he decided to end the series. Last chapter kind of came out of nowhere as the main character just hit godhood with no problems and ended the big bad in the same chapter. Ultimately, the story ended on a "He went on to conquer all the worlds" kind of ending that made the character development, in the beginning, feel like a different character. Stick with the first arc if you want a story that feels like a story, move onto the second if you want to see some classic characters in your fanfiction, and ultimately read the third if you are obligated to by some inner emotion. <<less
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M.A.T.R.
M.A.T.R. rated it
May 31, 2020
Status: --
Just rating the One Piece arc because I'm not interested in Boruto's dad or cleaning product.

the start was pretty good, but it was missing a flair for me to completely like it, I got really burnt out when the MC was fighting with Jack. But after that the story becomes way better and I really enjoyed it enough for it to become a 4.5 star story.

It has tons of dumb things though like everyone being as strong as they were in the original story, Whitebeard and his sons being way... more>> too f*cking assholish for some reason, Blackbeard and his fruit addiction, also the MC's s*upid love with Hancock, I don't like her and I don't like the relationship since they aren't compatible.

Doffy wasn't that bad since I actually liked what happened with him and Edward Weevil was a little strange to be that strong, but whatever, I wanted to read Whitebeard's reaction to him, but he was just an arrogant as*hole the whole time. <<less
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