Female Protagonist is a Blackened Villainess

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After nine years of traveling with her parents, Long Shiyan’s family encountered a group of bandits. Although her parents died, Long Shiyan was able to escape from them with the help of a system. From it, she learned that she was stuck inside the world of a harem novel! In order to revive her parents, Long Shiyan must prevent the protagonist of the original novel, Long Aotian, from capturing wives and attaining a harem. Otherwise, the world would end!

But, after saving a future harem member from Long Aotian’s clutches, why did this girl obtain a more terrifying characteristic than blackening into a villainess…

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女主不好当 (gl)
女主不好當 (gl)
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10/14/19 Wordrain c63
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hawlol
New hawlol rated it
October 6, 2019
Status: c35
I hate it when there's too many overpraising reviews for a poorly written novel tricking me into reading it. I'd find it hard to give this a 3 stars, being 2.5 at best. I don't know how some ppl can see this as a perfect novel no matter how much you love the characters and plot.

The reasons are common and can be seen in the first chapters: Overly expository, too much tell too little show, snail-like pacing with almost nothing happening in each chapter.

The writing is abysmal even though the... more>> premise was interesting. It's the ancient Chinese skill of streching a simple idea into several paragraphs and sometimes even a full chapter for word padding purposes, added to unecessary repetition and continuous out of place exposition.

The first 14 chapters were long rants about what the world was, who the characters of the previous novel were, how she must stop the old MC and who are all her family members (there's a lot of them). Then after the first scene with some tension, the pace looked like it was finally going to pick up... but the Author spits in our face and shoves a time skip of 6 years while making most of her family expositions in all these chapters absolutely meaningless.

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15 chapters, most of it talking about her family, only to kill them off from nowhere and in the background even (not shown). She was at the city, suddenly assassins and everyone's dead. Makes you wonder, why spend so much time telling us about their members, then? I mean, the reader couldn't get sad since it was all expository details about all the members in the family and all at once, while nothing was shown, so what was the point?

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6 years later she's in another city with a whole set of new characters and interactions. Instead of showing how she achieved the power and position, now we'll have another giant set of expositions and telling of how she got here. About chapter 32 I was already completely exausted and bored from all the telling and not showing.

By the way, you'd think there would be a well flushed out power system among all these out of place expositions... there isn't. It's a generic cultivation setting with mages and warriors but nothing is spoken of why or how their powers grow or work.

It's a shame since the characters and story sounded interesting. Breaking the Stallion's harem by a Loli yuri MC sounded fun, but the bad writing makes it hard to like this. <<less
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StrawberryStrallod
New StrawberryStrallod rated it
September 27, 2019
Status: c10
Review Date: Chapter 10

lmao this translators a man of culture

Story is cute so far. Interesting seeing the novel of this universe be brought up to explain the plot and the world that the protagonist is basing her judgment off of. Definetly interested to see where this goes
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nothingisit4me
nothingisit4me rated it
June 25, 2019
Status: Completed
I'm the translator for this series and I'll give a good word for it. It's not a reverse harem, but in fact, it's closer to an anti-harem novel. I hope you don't mind the errors since this is my first time translating.

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The story is about Long Shiyan who entered the world of a novel and has to prevent the original protagonist from attaining a harem. Up until the female lead appears, which is around chapter 7, it's all boring exposition. I won't say that it's a perfect novel, but it does have some share of cute and fluffy yuri moments.

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Sora-chi
Sora-chi rated it
July 14, 2019
Status: c8
Greetings,

At first I don't think I would read this one because of the synopsis were confusing (?) and it looks like it gonna have a bad translation goin on.

But, nope. The translation are good despite the synopsis thingy. And the story going at a good pace, not too rushing for the plot to set in. The plit itself are intriguing and interesting. I'm glad that I let myself the chance to take a leap of faith (lol) to give this novel a chance and read it before I judged... more>> it to be, well ya know ;).

Good job for the translator and hopefully, it goes with the pace they set of 3 times a week to be updated. <<less
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OmnisNihil
OmnisNihil rated it
July 10, 2019
Status: c6
Huh. I put this novel on my reading list before I joined the WordRain server. Hmmmmmmm. The world sure is small.

First. I was drawn to this by the yuri tag, hohoh. I love yuri. Yuri yuri yuri is the cutest cutest cutest.

This one is a xianxia, also. Transmigration, reincarnation, xianxia. In case you didn't read the tags.

Btw, the protagonist is a loli. And will be for the whole series, most likely. Was slightly confused by the first half of the synopsis, is it the POV of the system? Should be.... more>> (I thought the love interest was going to be a loli at first, hmmmmm....)

Who will the love interest be? Who will she be? I'm personally rooting for Yuqing, but it seems like the mysterious woman in chapter 6 who will most likely witness her black bellied side is probably going to be it... *Edit-Nope. I think. welp. So be it. Hohohohoho.

A fluffy yuri novel, course Ill follow. Translated yuri novels are always pretty good- yuri novels almost always never get translated, and so translators get to pick out of the very best.

I've got high hopes. <<less
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