It felt... okay. It was a fun read but there were some parts that just felt, eh. There was also a LOT of pronoun changes throughout the story. Even one occasion where it seemed like the wrong name was used.

Like, the gender changes. Most characters don't really care much at all about it. The parents are about the only ones where it comes up a little. But then, in their old life, the husband turned wife seemed to be pretty neutral. The change doesn't really change anything. The wife turned... more>> husband is a strange one where in their old life they lived in a way that could be considered stereotypically masculine. Straightforward, fought a lot in their youth, firefighter. But they don't really ever acknowledge much of the sort outside of commenting how they'd broken through as a firefighting woman.

I dunno. It felt weird. Like there was a setup but they never wrote a pay off for it.

There was also a really sudden smut scene in chapter like, 35, I think. I wasn't expecting that at all.

Having pretty much the entire story (that's not locked behind the site) in their territory kind of hurts the story. We don't get a good look at how others look at the world and what they're doing now outside of the servants and townspeople who went from "Hate" to "they're better now".

It just kind of feels, eh. I feel like it could use more worldbuilding. <<less

This is a comedy of multiple people transmigrating into the same Fantasy Book World, and every one of them so far is gender-bent. I am beginning to think that the gender swap is a necessary rule for transmigration into this world. A sixth transmigrator is soon to appear and perhaps prove the theory. This is pure chaos; I can’t wait to read more. (To translator: I say that but I can actually wait for proper editing and proofreading lol)