This was fine. It’s an interesting premise but it’s so short it feels barely explored.

Strangly this doesn’t really feel like yaoi. MC gets attacked by tent**les at most but I didn’t get the sense the ML even viewed him sexually? Like this could legit remove the yaoi tag without changing the content. At least that’s how I feel lol.

Kinda Meh.

Its a oneshot so I get theres not much one should right, but it's way too rushed. Felt like there coulda been at least a few more paragraphs describing the two interactions.

But if this was a long-term story, I feel like this has a lot of potential.