Old Review

The premise of the story is really good for the love-comedy story. As this story starts from how their relationship as a couple will proceed together. Though the MC already have a girlfriend, it seems there are other potential heroine which made this to have a harem tag and there's so many elements here that made the story more interesting.

Even though there are almost no cute moments, at least we see a harem-like development around the MC who's already dating with a girl. As for the heroine, I can't wait to see her confront the other girls. She really loves our MC, but currently she's like a wife who found his husband cheating.

The chapters are long too with some multiple POV. It is a story really worth to read.

Mamiko (girlfriend of the MC) breaks up with the MC because he talks to other girls and she ends up losing confidence in herself. All he did was barely talk to them and she would lose her mind. They haven't gotten back together yet because you know that's going to happen at the end but they did eventually meet coincidentally while he was holding the hands of his editor so he can try to escape from being spotted by Mamiko.

Mamiko (popular girl) likes him because of a misunderstanding from when the MC (10yrs ago) asked her to go out with him and has been "dating" him since. The little sister is a bro-con (not particularly dissing it because it's pretty common in stories like this. And the co-worker is in love with his game character. Who she finds out is him and almost immediately falls in love.

stereotypical shoujo manga where the couple is lovey dovey together forever happily ever after, but the problem is that it does basically follow that plot. The humor was terrible, the conflict was expected (read enough shoujo in this lifetime that there was nothing out of expectations), the biggest plot twist was that the girlfriend actually shaped up after dumping the MC somehow without maturing at all (she became a caricature of what I'm guessing the author thought should be "best girl" after getting back together with the MC, beautiful and dotingly clingy, with no layers beyond some jealousy and wanting to be spoiled)

If you break up, stay broken up, don't go "but I love him/her", you will get over it in time. Spare yourself the emotional exhaustion, please. The characters are in high school, so it's still excusable, but if you're older than them and think this is #goals, please don't date someone who fits this story, you won't learn anything from it besides how to waste your energy making yourself more exhausted. Or die! That female lead is definitely a yandere, and while that lends an interesting twist, it didn't amount to much. Do you actually want anyone to die? No, but if this story turned to her life after trying to make a move on someone else's in the name of jealousy, it would have been more interesting.

Guess what, the MC also likes to write Romantic comedy novels and has ranked #1 before (I mean common man, the author's writing isn't the worst but he's not ranking first in anything. He needs to stop jerking himself off). But People gave him bad reviews at the end because the love interests split and that wasn't properly built up at in anyway... Remind you of anything? Is this even foreshadowing at this point?

Ever liked retarded soap opera dramas? Well here it is at Chapter 33-34, Basically main heroine get super jealous due to ridiculous reason of MC talking to his first love at middle school, his co-worker or other girls (note that MC and main heroine are already dating, also 'first love of MC' has a boyfriend already. They were technically both in love one-sidedly to each other before but aftaid to confess, until they got apart and their feelings changed). So then, MC apologized once but when main heroine saw the MC talking to his co-worker (co-worker's feelings for the MC is one hell of a very forced development btw) and seeing that the co-worker looks like she's in love, the main heroine thought "he doesn't need someone like me cause he has other girls". Do note that THE MC AND CO-WORKER WERE SIMPLY TALKING. There has also been no evidence whatsoever that the MC does not cherish the main heroine, he did fell in love with her and even argued with the heroine's mother and announced that he'll marry the main heroine. Bruh what the f**k is with this chick's brain? Afterwards she decided that they should break up, to which the MC was ofc sad and thought that it was his fault for making the main heroine jealous EVEN THOUGH it was because of the utter stupidity of the heroine. I feel like it was so forced considering that the scene about arguing with the heroine's mother about marrying the heroine just happened a few chapters before, and very coincidentally after the forced romantic feelings development of the co-worker. Judging by the current development, there's no doubt that the author will push the co-worker to the MC to which some sh*tty drama will happen and then at the end the heroine will come back to the MC, only to have another sh*tty forced development to happen that will once again break them apart only to get back again. I don't want another sh*tty Domestic na Kanojo roller-coaster development.

But after chapter 10 it become unreadable. MC is an idiot, characters are shallow and plot is stupid. Prettiest girl in school being in love with a nobody is not weird but she think she's been dating him for 10 years and only talk to him after 10 years is another thing.

Normally when you date someone you would be lovely-dovey with each other but she only sit near him AFTER 10 years.

But thats not something that you can't ignore, I said it once and I say it again. MC is an idiot, he is stupid to the point that it made me drop this novel. Non of his actions are like humans at all, while reading this novel I thought I'm reading about an AI in human form.

When you start dating its normal to pay attention to your phone, its normal to think about her and call her, but our dear MC silence his phone, go to school normally and tell people he is dating. Thats all.-.

MC-kun is not an MC-kun (dense as f**k), but also not a seinen MC-kun (i.e blatant s*x). Initially there is the classical misunderstanding, but that is easily resolved and he is thereafter a proper boyfriend. His only fault perhaps is letting the yandere grow.

The female lead is completely yandere, but without violence, and she eventually realizes this, and breaks up with him for the sake of both of them. Very mature, realistic, and different from the classical yandere.

Brocon grows and doesn't let those tendencies out of hand.

While the tsundere didn't get justice (as this is MC-kun's story) she is able to reflect the feelings of those in her position, and thankfully isn't cringey with the tsun (more kuu than tsun).