Ch. 1-20 had a bit, just a small bit, of creativity and then story went full ret*rd, face-smacking level ret*rd. The chapters are 1/3 or 1/4 the length of ordinary chapters. They are so short that it takes multiple chapters to finish just one scene of dialogue. You can clearly tell that the novel jut goes into full filler mode as soon as it starts. Events that happen are really unrealistic-We are talking about ret*rd level, no though put into, just write whatever unrealistic. MC goes pretty much from zero... more>> to infinity in like the first 20 chapters.

Waste of time. <<less