Disciple of Immortal


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The so-called 『Enjoy the Human Lives Show Humans Sent to Another World With a Cheat』was trending amongst the Gods. Kanbara Kanata, one of the chosen humans ended up incurring the Evil God’s wrath and as a result, was sent to the worst dungeon,《Cocytus》. But, in a place where he was supposed to lose his life, he met Lunaère, a self-proclaimed misanthropic immortal girl. He was saved by her, who then decided to train him ’till he could at least protect himself.

「Master, I think… I’ve become strong enough.」

「It’s Not enough! Erm, outside of this dungeon is a dangerous place you know!」

「Seriously!? More dangerous than this place…」

This is the story of Kanata who was trained by his master, who easily succumbed to loneliness, till he became the greatest hero of legend, and yet was unaware of it.

Associated Names
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Disciple of the Lich: Or How I Was Cursed by the Gods and Dropped Into the Abyss! (LN)
Fushisha no Deshi
Fushisha no Deshi ~Jashin no Fukyou wo Katte Naraku ni Otosareta Ore no Eiyuutan~
Fushisha no Deshi ~Jashin no Fukyō wo Katte Naraku ni Otosareta Ore no Eiyūtan~
The Disciple of Lich: This is Heroic Tale of Mine That I Incurred Evil God’s Displeasure and Droppes to the Abyss
不死者の弟子 ~邪神の不興を買って奈落に落とされた俺の英雄譚~
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scribbledoutname rated it
November 7, 2020
Status: v1c43
Hmm. Kanata is likeable overall, but he's too afraid of conflict/reluctant to use his strength for my tastes. I'm sure some people won't mind, but I don't like overly servile attitudes (i.e. "even though you just insulted me/tried to rob me, I'm sorry for inconveniencing you").

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The moment the MC leaves Cocytus, three people try to murder him for no reason whatsoever and he basically doesn't care. In fact, he's still worried about inconveniencing them when he gets them to show him to town. I was waiting for a smackdown and instead the opposite happens and he happily lets them go even though he even acknowledges that they're clearly bad people and he should probably hand them in.

Shortly after, when he sort of half-assedly intervenes in a half-elf girl's bullying, he still apologises to the party member who's bullying her for getting involved. It's just... what?

What am I supposed to feel when I'm reading this?


Pretty good overall, but yeah. <<less
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SproutlingUnderARoof rated it
May 21, 2021
Status: c40
It suffers from the same 'hurrdurr he's naive and dense so he doesn't realize he's strong' bullshit.

The MC is smart enough to learn magic and to figure out the b*llsh*t 'Twin Mind' skill only immortals have figured out to lean because they have so much time, but he can't even utilize HALF A BRAINCELL to figure out that his 4000+ level is greater than anyone else's level.

That 'god', who, by the way, is so unoriginal and one-dimensional that even his name is stolen to make him sound even a little... more>> bit interesting, tells him that the dungeon he was sent to was the WORST. The moron passed the DEEPEST Level of the WORST DUNGEON and he still thinks he's weak?

The best thing in this novel is Lunaire, despite her being a cookie-cutter tsundere character. Everyone loves tsunderes that are so obviously more dere than tsun. But that's it, the most entertaining segments is their interactions. <<less
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TurtleOfRainbow rated it
February 26, 2021
Status: v1c52
It started out well, the MC was fixing his naive behavior and gaining strength. Then, all of the sudden, he loses all his braincells and becomes a glue eater. It became so bad that I had to stop. It genuinely ruined it for me, especially since the character interactions and writing were above average for novels like this. I don't know if it gets better, but it really fell off once he regressed back to 7 year old levels of intelligence around chapter 40.

Edit: I understand that he is meant... more>> to be dense, but then don't make him somewhat competent at the start. It confuses me as to why he doesn't understand basic things for anyone in any world when he shows capability of much more than that earlier on. <<less
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Aknazer rated it
December 25, 2021
Status: v2c10
The story starts off reasonably enough. The MC is kidnapped from "peaceful Japan" by gods, unintentionally upsets them (because the gods are arrogant pricks), and is then sent to the "disposal dungeon" to die for their amus**ent. From here he is saved by a tsundere (which leads to obvious misunderstandings) and then trained to be able to survive in the world.

And here is where the ok story just goes downhill quick. Tsundere forces MC to leave the dungeon and then within 2 days of doing so starts the process of... more>> chasing after him. He, who has been killing things for over a month suddenly decides that he can't kill humanoids no matter how vile/evil they are as he came from a peaceful place (oh but he can kill goblins which are humanoids because they're viewed as monsters). He straight up fails to adjust to life outside the dungeon despite having no real issue adapting to life in the dungeon. And various other cringe worthy actions from both the MC and two heroines that make no real sense.

I kept reading hoping that it would get better but alas it never did. I even skimmed ahead and the one chapter that shows Miss Tsundere still has her being exceptionally dumb. The translation is well done but sadly the story itself is just... painful. <<less
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pandamonius rated it
February 6, 2021
Status: v1c56
While nothing new or groundbreaking, this series is a fun read. If you enjoy Isekai with OP characters, somewhat dense protagonists, and a bit more story than action, you may enjoy this.

First of all, the translation is pretty good. No headaches trying to get around poor grammar or odd word choice. That's always a biggie to me, since there has been more than one series I've had to quit just because I'd get migraines trying to mentally translate the translation so it made sense.

What really strikes me though, is the... more>> author's writing style. It's good. By that, I'm not talking about the plot or premise (though I do enjoy it), but rather that the style of writing.... the word choice, the inclusion of humor, the various perspectives.... is very well polished and gives the feel of someone who is used to writing stories rather than someone who is still a novice.

This has become one of my regular follows, and I'm looking forward to each new chapter. <<less
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Chaosrune rated it
August 11, 2022
Status: v2c14
Another classic JP MC that is basically a doormat in human shape, it doesn't matter if he is literally thousands of times stronger than most people, in his mind he is still the weakest person out there, and he really acts like that.

He will literally smile at the people insulting him in his face, and even if you try to kill him, he will let you go feeling sorry for fighting you.

Save your braincells, and don't read this

Edit: to the guy complaining that we are not telling the author that... more>> his novel is sh*t to his face, I don't care what he thinks or if he reads this, in writing this for the people looking for something to read, like you know, the whole purpose of this website or reviews here. <<less
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zozzythebeast rated it
May 8, 2022
Status: v2
it started out promising but its just another story with a pathetic excuse of a MC who has no place being a protag. I'm so sick of these stories that get marketed as light novels but are really just children's fantasy books.
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iriomote rated it
January 14, 2023
Status: v2
Sadly, as seems to have become increasingly common in Japanese light novels, the protagonist is a complete and utter imbecile to the point where it's incredible to me that he's even capable of eating without dribbling all over himself.

Let's give a few examples:

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After arriving in a new world and attaining an absurdly high level of 4000 something (because of course he does), he exits the dungeon he's been in and has no idea where civilization is. Rather than using the easy flight spell he's known for quite some time to look around from the air, he decides to walk around aimlessly in the woods for several days like an idiot.



Later he's attacked by level 200ish self-professed bandits, who state their intent (and then try) to torture and kill him for fun. He just exited what he was told was the highest-level dungeon in the world, and the monsters in the area are in the level 50-150 range. Drools-on-himself-kun handily defeats their leader and then lets the murderers go, because they're clearly just some harmless, low-level scamps who only joke about murdering and torturing complete strangers.



Yet later still, Dropped-on-his-head-kun nearly hands over all his belongings to a level 30 street thug because he, a level 4000 OP protagonist that's been fighting and killing literal demons, is reflexively terrified of confronting a guy taller than him.


1/5 stars. I would love to see stories with protagonists that aren't intellectual equals with garden tools. <<less
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Jesters Epilogue rated it
April 11, 2022
Status: v2c22
I really tried to to salvage this novel, forcing myself to read the story just for the heroine and adventure but all I got was anger issues. The novel was fun to read in the early part of the first volume. The level grinding along the tsundere lich master was cute in it's own way with the talkative noble mimic. Problem started popping out when the MC left the labyrinth.

Look, I know that I can't just dictate and push my opinions just to get my ideal character but oh come... more>> on! He let high level murderers get away. "I apologize" is synonymous to "Hello". He apologize to almost everyone he just met. I nearly lost it when they were bring guided to the Mythril Tower by that adventurer. He knew that they were being led just to be humiliated but goes along anyway. Being a p***y should also has a limit. I held on and continued reading just to be disappointed when he started apologizing again when he met the A-rank adventurer. He's clearly hostile to the MC and was planning on killing them but the MCs just spouting bullsh*t. <<less
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ilLUMIAnated rated it
August 18, 2021
Status: v2c15
This is just another isekai story that you may have read before. The prologue and subsequent chapters do a good job of hooking you in. However, it fails to carry on that momentum forward into anything significant, effectively failing in keeping the reader interested. Couple that with cookie cutter descriptions used for world building, you get an unimpressive title overall.
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Hantosh rated it
October 29, 2022
Status: --
This story repeats the same misunderstanding jokes ad nauseum. Pacing is pretty slow. Translation is understandable but not pleasant to read, especially noticeable in the dialogue.

MC is s*upid. He lets all the killers/rapists that attack him go. Not out of some sense of justice or anything (or he could turn them in to the authorities I guess), but because he's s*upid. His misunderstandings about his relative strength aren't funny and get annoying fast.

Only character I like is Gannet, the old man seems like the only competent/real character in the story,... more>> everyone else is an anime cliche/caricature. Oh, I guess the mimic is okay too. <<less
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crosszer rated it
October 14, 2022
Status: v2c44
this guy annoying as hell. Not having common sense or have no awareness is two different thing. I can't help feel annoyed of this spineless OP man. The running gag even make it more annoying as ever. It was not misunderstanding at all it was running from problem you create he was not supposed to be that naive but just for sake off story his IQ lower on certain moment make him ret*rded.
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arifureta rated it
July 9, 2022
Status: c50
First of all I'd like to say I wanted to love this series the cover was amazing the heroine looks cute asf and it seemed like the series might be a decent Isekai based on the synopsis.

But unfortunately whatever potential this series had died when the author decided to make Kanata the protagonist. He is extremely strong to the point of being overpowered but can't really seem to get the idea in his head he thinks everyone he encounters is somehow as strong or stronger than him and as a... more>> result he's too afraid to engage anyone it would be fine to some degree if he eventually realizes he's out of the norm but no he's too dumb to figure this out somehow.

Kanata is denser which as you can guess makes his progress with the heroine the only decent part of this novel due to her being cute 0 he's the type of guy who can speed run getting NTR'd of this was that type of series. On top of that he's not capable of killing anyone no matter how bad they are which is just s*upid hell you can murder 20 children in front of him and he still wouldn't kill you. This MC gets transported into a violent world and once he's outside the dungeon he just fails to adapt in any way shape or form due to being s*upid and lacking any form of common sense in general hell even in the dungeon he was pathetic. This guy is practically villager A trying to be a protagonist. If he at least grew as a character I would be willing to wait but it just doesn't happen.

Please if you value your time skip this <<less
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SonicWizard rated it
June 30, 2022
Status: --
Starts off as a cliched isekai where the MC gets dropped in the nastiest most brutal dungeon, and subsequently gets strong before being loosed into the yet unsuspecting world. In this case by being mentored by the strongest being in this ultra dungeon. Honestly up to here its not that bad despite it's lacking in originality.

The issue is after the MC gets out of the dungeon he just becomes the biggest coward, somehow convinced everything is on his level or stronger, despite fully showing he's capable of measuring a foe's... more>> relative threat or lack thereof. If the enemy is weak "well he must have some item that could be dangerous" regardless of the fact he himself overturned this idea in the mega dungeon after fully realizing an item isn't going to be able to do sh!t to overturn a gap in level that's more than a 1000, and at the time of escaping he was well over lvl 4000.

To make this worse the MC of course is the beyond typical doormat-kun shounen protag that for some reason still gets unironically used as a protagonist archetype in Japanese LNs. Which in effect has our walking WMD main character p*%&yfooting around all the time, for the sake of some super tired comedy shtick that isn't even funny.

It's difficult to enjoy anything with the MCs colossal s*upidity tainting everything. Seriously this dude is so f@#%ing s*upid that it can be almost physically painful at times. <<less
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Dobber1k rated it
February 3, 2022
Status: v2c36
I wanted to like it. I really did. But constantly he’s saying information and near in the future just forgetting it. He starts off scared. Understandable. Then grovels also understandable. Finally becomes confident and eventually courageous then cowardly until finally he just becomes full on coward. He even says he realizes that he has misconceptions but suspects every single person. Acts so ignorant. It’s infuriating. Not to mention he stutters for over 100 chapters... and it’s still never stopped. Oh wait. Yea yea it did then it came less than... more>> 10 chapters later! I could handle 3/4 of a chapter with just reading about information or long pauses in dialogue just to see a character spew a 3 word sentence. But I can’t handle contradictions at every turn. Story is interesting, and characters have the ability to be very interesting, but you’ll spend 3/4 of a chapter learning useless information instead of progressing the story. I believe it’s worth a read but by no means is it a top seller. <<less
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kyoucha_ rated it
December 19, 2020
Status: v1c49
I thought this was an enjoyable, comfy read, as far as web novels go. It remains to be seen how it will do now that we've left the dungeon (this seem to be the stumbling block for most novels, getting past the initial premise and creating a real plot). I like that

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the MC isn't the only overpowered person (though how the other transported compare to him we don't know yet), and that the other transported are viewed as terrifying, aberrant existence... meaning MC can't just go wild if he wants to live in human society.

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January 19, 2023
Status: --
Well finished reading until today chapter., 4/5; ⭐ the story is great and really interesting, but my only concerned is there's many words or sentence are being repeated, like a copy and paste, just to increase the chapter, like for example in chapter 1 the dialogue of the some character when the MC remember it said. It literally repeat that's cluster of sentences in the next chapter, and it's not once of course, and there's another one this novel will repeat the information about the gold to yen. 🤣 Over all... more>> it good novel. Even have a little quirky how it novel was written..

And lastly I advice when looking a novel to read don't just scrolled down to the comment section to see if the novel are good or bad. On every section or genre of a novel you can see a negative comment, due to we have our own preference. Just explore and drop it if you didn't liken it.. Ciao~ <<less
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l2aYz rated it
September 6, 2021
Status: --
It's very generic Isekai with OP MC that you can see everywhere. Well, what would like to know more? There is none to talk to. MC is dense as a rock as well. If you like this genre you will enjoy it. If you don't this kind of novel you will find it boring.
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rcpsycho rated it
August 5, 2020
Status: v1c30
The idea is nice, but the execution doesn't quite work because the MC is aware that she's a tsundere, but for some reason he still doesn't get that she wants him to stay and that everything she says and all the training she has him do is just another way of prolonging their time together. In addition, it would have been cuter if there really hadn't been a real reason for her to shut herself away in the first place, and it seems a bit strange how she's supposedly extremely... more>> powerful but apparently can't do anything about that at all.

Other than the training, not much has happened so far and he still hasn't been outside the dungeon, so it remains to be seen how the plot goes on once he manages to leave.

One of the strong points of novels with MCs who lose their common sense because of training like this is usually the interaction with people who do have common sense (and possibly at the same time with others who never had common sense in the first place), but since the story hasn't left the dungeon, that hasn't happened yet. <<less
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