also Cha zhe ! Dude not to be heartless but he should have been buried for what he did. Also he knows everything about your witch power, healing ect and you just let him go illogical! Also a Primitive man just let him go ???eyebrow raised , well whatever its all made up but seriously 😐aside from that I like the novel and give it 3.5 for now

I still don’t understand how no one from Matai saw the kidnapping but the person from the three big tribes spying on them clearly saw the kidnapping. And I do think Cha Zhe got off way too easy, it just felt unsatisfying letting him go without any punishment. He literally only got punched once by the MC when MC escaped and that’s it. Clearly this wasn’t enough to make him regret his actions as when he appears in front of MC again later on he threatens to kidnap/force himself on MC again.

But Le Shui, a Matai tribe person was stated multiple times to have a wife, the ML even went to him for advice on how to court someone because of that. Here is the literal paragraph from the novel:

Tai Lie found Le Shui, who was married, and asked with a serious expression, “How did you get Xia Hua to agree to marry you?”

But later on this Xia Hua is suddenly the partner of Shan Pu who has not yet agreed to marry him??? So Author literally forgot that they made her the wife of someone else and just decided to make her Shan Pu's partner while the previously married Le Shui is single because she wants him to get together with Er Dai, the s*ave who helped MC escape the kidnapping. Sorry but this just frustrated me every time I saw intimate scenes between the second couple

There's not much to say except it being way too short and abrupt, the big boss who's behind the slaughter of the Matai tribe and the slaughter of Cha Zhe's tribe, is the witch of the three tribes (No surprise here) but guess what he was literally defeated in less than half a chapter with one to two paragraphs explaining his cheat and that’s it.

If you thought that after that they at least wrapped up nicely then be prepared to be disappointed. It isn’t even clear what happened to the witch, only hinted that he was possibly killed by them. What happens to the three tribe's territory now that the witch is dead? What happens to Cha Zhe? What about Le Shui and Er Dai? And most importantly what about the lifespans difference between the MC and ML, they still haven’t found the lifespan increasing potion if it even exists. We don’t even see them get married let alone their life after marriage.

The village building stopped a little over halfway through the book and was mostly skimmed through. Afterward, it was focused on dream training, exploring islands, and the ten thousand beast city (it's called something similar to that, I can't remember).

The food, item gathering, and even production of the red medicine were thrown to the wind and were vaguely mentioned every once in a while.

There was a potential ship with one of the Matai warriors and the boy from the evolution race that failed to evolve, but that was quickly forgotten and nothing was developed out of it.

Also, the big conflict that had been looming over their heads was solved in like a chapter or two, which is very disappointing as it felt that the author was impatient. There were a lot of points that were clearly rushed and the villain had like half a chapter of screen time. The build-up of the villain was all for naught as he seemed more like a minor villain than Cha Zhe, who seemed more like the big boss.

Their relationship proceeds at a steady pace and there's no magical "love at first sight" between them. The ML didn't realize he'd fallen in love at first and the MC is even more oblivious. They start becoming more intimate when the MC had to gain "favorability value" from "special characters" in order to upgrade his system (not sure if these terms are correct).