Commercial Marriage [Rebirth]

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He was reborn again to fifteen years in the past. Unexpectedly, he became the He family’s third-shao, He Jian, who had bad reputation but tough background.

He decided to go back to Quanlin City once again, just to find his “self” when he was young and protect his “self” from repeating the same mistakes.

Unexpectedly, the misunderstanding resulted in the commercial marriage of the two….

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商业婚姻(重生)
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Arrange
Arrange
Jul 17, 2020
Status: Completed
It's ok... I guess. The whole MC x ML (MC) kinda gave me the wtf vibes. But honestly, I have read worse, so this is decent. 3.5 but I'll give 4.

How to describe this novel?

Narcissus wet dream...?
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maecasano
maecasano
Feb 22, 2020
Status: Completed
The ML's old grudges were resolved well, and he fulfilled his wish to keep his young self away from harm. If you can go past the entanglement of ML and MC being the "same person" in essence, and yet are married to each other/doing papapa with each other, then this should be a fun short read for you.
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Meow4meow
Meow4meow
Mar 19, 2020
Status: Completed
I have one word for this, weird. I cant even describe how weird this concept is, to fall in love with yourself. But it was all consensual, no r*pe and the plot was ok so worth a read.
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Qwex
Qwex
Jul 13, 2022
Status: Completed
This started OK but very soon problems with this novel became apparent.

I've read this story only for the selfcest. The market for this type of stories is small, so beggars can't be choosers. But I kind of regret reading it nevertheless. It was not good written and boring. Also, MC is a bastard to ML. (For the purpose of clarity I will refer to MC and ML as if they were different people). Yeah, MC did not r*pe ML, but he treats him like a child who cannot resolve his... more>> problems, even if he asks to resolve it by himself.

So believe me you will absolutely not regret it if you drop this one. If you are here for selfcest like me, it is not fun here. If you want to read it for other reasons? Don't. Whatever you hope to find in this story, it is not here.

So, about MC. He does not tell sh*t to ML. Really, he never tells him any important information.

Spoiler

MC's relative takes a fancy to ML, started sending him harassing phone calls and messages? MC sends him into a blacklist on ML's phone and not tells ML about is. So when that relative came in person MC is non the wiser. (While we on the topic of this relative - he is 17 years old and this behaviour later is explained as him being a child. My disgust at this "explanation" and at this character is immeasurable. He also has a CP with MC's assistant, who is much older than him.)

ML is kidnapped and nearly r*ped. This was orchestrated by ML's brother. MC knew that. Does he tell ML though? No, he doesn't. He stays on the sidelines gnashing his teeth while MC has dinner with a person who wants him killed. Thankfully other MC's relative tells ML about it. If you are asking why Brother was not imprisoned for this if MC has proof of him being involved and the person who did the kidnapping has no intention of helping him? Good f*cking question. My only explanation is that it would've being awkward if the main villain was taken out after his first try to harm ML. A good written novel right here.

Apparently ML is not a biological child of his parents. The brother wanted to expose this to the media. MC learned about it. Does he tell ML about it? No, he puts documents on a table where ML is sure will find them and, I sh*t you not, *hides in the next room*. What the actual f*ck?

When ML went to his family home for the last time, he wanted to deal with them himself. He even asked MC not to get involved. Guess who did all the talking? I don't think ML said even one word in this conversation.

It was spoiled by other people that MC came clean about his real identity. I thought at least this time he was the one to share information. Lol, nope. The brother (who is also reborn) guessed the truth and told ML everything. After that ML went home and asked himself. From his demeanor MC quessed that something is not right and spilled the beans. If not for the brother putting pressure MC would've kept mum.

There were other smaller examples of MC's lack of basic respect to ML, but these are the main ones.

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Villains all have IQ of a brick. Most of the villains are there only for a couple of chapters, but there is a main villain:

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ML's brother. Before I say more on this topic, a word about MC's and ML's families. MC's family is the top of the crop in the capital. They are the creme de la creme. They are rich and influential. ML's family are not that big even in their city. They have Nothing compared to what have MC's family. Despite the novel titled "Commercial Marriage", the only one benefiting from it is ML. It was a pity gesture from MC. ML's parents think that they marry for love so the do not object. Because as a buisiness marriage ML is useless. Now that you have the idea of the disparity between MC and our Big villain, can you explain who give the brother the courage to jump in front of MC time and time again? Ok, the first time was (somewhat) understandable: MC's body original owner had a certain reputation, so Brother did not expect that MC will react as he did for ML's kidnapping. But afrer that? If Brother was a smart person, after he learned how much trouble MC stirred to resque ML, he would've quietly hoped that MC would not retaliate. Instead he tried again. And failed again. To try and fail again, harming himself in the process. His last attempt to harm MC was telling the media that MC is not really the He family's third-shao. Who could've quessed that he failed again?

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Also, this novel is just 41 chapters long, but the author used "MC was drunk, some actor jumped into his arms, and before he reacted, ML came in and misunderstood the situation" not once, but twice. A good written novel right here.

This would be a point where I tell positive things about this novel, but I struggle to think of anything. MC does not r*pe ML? The novel was not awful? It was boring for sure, but not awful?

Anyway, don't waste your time on this novel. There is nothing good about it. <<less
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Hmntlzn
Hmntlzn
Feb 20, 2020
Status: Completed
Omg... This is so "unique" haha

The story is cute, sweet without too much drama. And its not a long story.

I recommend this novel, but there is some disturbing part, its...

Spoiler

the kidnapping + "almost-got-raped" part

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+Mtling this novel isnt hard

Note : I didnt know that I give this novel 3 Star. Its 5/5 for me
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summerspring
summerspring
Jun 21, 2020
Status: Completed
I dont know why im digging these types of stories now. Its just so yummy. Not a lot of snu snu bc CRABS but its still a nice funny love story with a bit of drama that isn't too stressful. The twists are unexpected but the romantic ones are delightful
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numba1nobody
numba1nobody
Apr 25, 2020
Status: Completed
Story is so short but it’s pretty good. It doesn’t have that much fluff and the type of sweetness that can make you end up to the dentist.

Anyways I don’t get why this doesn’t have a good rating and I thought it was because it is self v self and like c’mon let’s be real this is fictitious and that’s what makes it special and interesting than most novels.

The Translation is very good and I gotta admit that it is probably the translation that made this interesting but oh well... more>> I mean like if we use our common sense it probably still relates to the way of the author write.

Just real the MTL ver. If you are impatient.

Sigh the ML’s brother (antagonist) is such a hypocrite and like really let’s be true to ourselves about the fact nobody likes the ML’s brother. <<less
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Accellia
Accellia
Apr 07, 2023
Status: Completed
Translator 1: 5/5 Foxaholic did a good job as always | Translator 2: 2/5, I feel like reading an MTL; a total headache

Story: between 2-4, let's give it 3+0.5 for author trying to make this okay enough

I jumped into this without reading synopsis. I need fast recovery from long heavy novels, and this one is quite short... so the selfcest part is truly a surprise ⊙.☉ but ive read a bunch of weirder fiction, I've read them just fine, so I just went through... more>> this till end

Spoiler

y'know, in KnB fandom, Akashi and selfcest is just a common tag to be together lol. and probably other fandom that have characters with DID has similar situation 🤔

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I did frowning everytime it's papapa time (this time I thank Crab 🙏) or how his future self (FS/HJ) is attracted to his past self (PS/QYR), because that's the thickest selfcest part. I mean, PS can be attracted to FS as they have different "shell", aka not truly looking at your own face. but FS... in other hand... got reaction while looking at PS... that's the pinnacle of self-love, fr 😌

another surprise: I quite like it? 🤔I mean, it's okay enough. this is not worse than other weirder fiction--or maybe better as some other fiction I've read is just... blasphemy 🙈 so yeah, 3.5

I even got a... philosophical/learning points (?) from this, lmao.

Spoiler

1st: as you see, what makes a person is his life experience. just change one small thing and you can be a whole different person. don't wait for other person to change your life, starts from yourselves because you know yourselves best. starts from small things to make big changes! 2nd: it's contradictory with 1st, but sometimes, you aren't the one who can understand yourselves the best, or maybe the worst one to know yourselves (even QYR has trouble in understanding "himself" right 🤣) so asks everyone around you for help when you need. 3rd, find someone who can make you a better, or even best version of you.

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IsaacaHawke
IsaacaHawke
Mar 27, 2023
Status: c35
Novel rating - 3.5

Translation rating - 1st translation - 4/second translation -1

The story itself is like a weird fever dream, but it's not a bad read. The whole concept of selfcest was explored in an intriguing manner. Not the greatest read, but it was funny enough to be enjoyable.

What completely ruined it for me was the horrible, barely edited (if at all) mtl translation by the 2nd tl group. The names are wrong, the genders are wrong, and the sentence structures are wrong. It was headache-inducing. It's a shame because... more>> I really would have enjoyed the novel a lot more if it had been readable. <<less
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cocoajuppie
cocoajuppie
Mar 27, 2023
Status: Completed
After the first 20 chapters, finished with MTL.

  • Easy read with little drama
  • MC and ML are both affectionate to each other
  • Sweet mostly (up to c35)
I think the ending (post c35) could've been handled better. MC and ML couldn't catch a break until the last few lines of the last chapter, so it wasn't all that satisfying to me. Overall, not a bad read to relax a little and pass the time.
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erialolita
erialolita
Mar 09, 2022
Status: Completed
Kudos to the author for trying something different, but not sure it worked. I really don't know how I feel about this story. Sometimes it's a 4 stars other times 2 stars so split the difference 🤣

This story is really weird and I just couldn't get completely onboard with him being in love with himself. There are some smexy scenes which are good until you think about how he is doing himself.

Think it would have been a little better if someone else was reborn into his old body or that... more>> it was a book world/parallel world so it's like him but not him? Or you know not have him love himself?

Spoiler

if anyone wants to know, he does tell his younger self the truth because his older brother is also reborn and tries to sow discord

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If this was a normal transmigration or rebirth story I think it would have been better. On a positive note it was a really easy story to MTL, there weren't any parts the were unreadable and sometimes I forgot it was MTL.

Spoiler

also did anyone else get bro love vibes from xia family brothers 😈 (think that's their name, Im horrible with names)

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Irissska O_o
Irissska O_o
Apr 20, 2023
Status: c21
It is quite unusual and not that bad so far. Funny fact - I started ch 21 where the new translator took over and it was so bad that I switched to mtl and it was easier to understand, haha.

Just a few examples:

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Spoiler

New translator:Although Lu Zhuoyi was not very afraid of his parents, most of his parents spoiled him. However, he was still a little obedient to Lu Yuhan’s cousin. Seeing that the landing language came over, he swallowed his mouth and stopped talking, and at this time he was a bit of a minor and walked away.

Mtl: Although Lu Zhuoyi was not very afraid of his parents, most of them spoiled him. But towards Lu Yuhan, his cousin, he still has a somewhat obedient attitude. Seeing Lu Yuhan coming over, he swallowed dryly and stopped talking. At this moment, he looked like a minor and walked away on his own.

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Spoiler

NT: Qi Yuexin was picked up by the maid from the doctor, and he heard that a few maids said that he would arrange things for the three young masters and the young master Qi, and he was going to leave tomorrow.
He burst into his heart, beckoned someone to come over, and asked, “Where is San Shao going?”
The servant said, “Listen to the wife, San Shao and Qi Er Shao will be ready to go all tomorrow.”
Qi Yuexin couldn’t help frowning, thinking he hadn’t heard Qi Yueran talk about it. Could he not have planned to bring himself back to the whole place, and threw him here?

Mtl: Qi Yuexin was picked up from the doctor by his servants, and he heard a few servants say that they were going to tidy things up for Third Young Master and Young Master Qi, and they were going to leave tomorrow.

Suddenly, he beckoned someone to come over and asked, "Where is the third young master going?"

The servant said, "I heard from my wife that the third young master and the second young master Qi are going to Quanlin tomorrow."

Qi Yuexin couldn't help but frowned. He frowned, thinking that he hadn't heard Qi Yueran talk about this matter, could it be possible that he planned to bring him back to Quanlin and leave him here?

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Pavetta
Pavetta
May 09, 2020
Status: c7
Very nice. It's a 4.5 for me but I rounded it up. The 0.5 is because there are a few rare mistakes in the text. Maybe one or two per chapter. It's not much and not distracting, but it's there.

I like the way the plot is handled. The author took a weird premise and wrote it seriously. The relationship between the MC and ML isn't immediate, and the development feels natural.

I can't wait for more.
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night18light
night18light
Mar 03, 2020
Status: Completed
seriously this is a good novel, sweet, cute, n funny. the fact that MC and ML are "the same person" is one of the reason that makes this story exciting. argh believe me you will regret it if you drop this one...

Spoiler

the main villain is the older brother that MC/ML loved, n that older brother was also reborn

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