Comic System in Naruto’s World

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I, Akabane was graduated from the university of arts & design in the 21st century then suddenly traversed into the Naruto’s world, by bringing my knowledge of arts and my love of Naruto comic I decided to recreate Naruto comic here… [Ding! Comic System has been activated!] Great! Ninjutsu? Kekkei Genkai? As long as I can draw more comics, I would be unmatched! …Or am I?

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Creating The Manga Of Naruto On Naruto World Become My Ultimate Goal!
我在火影画漫画
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Latest Release

Date Group Release
01/26/23 System Translation c378
01/24/23 System Translation c377
01/22/23 System Translation c376
01/19/23 System Translation c375
01/17/23 System Translation c374
01/17/23 System Translation c373
01/17/23 System Translation c372
01/17/23 System Translation c371
12/27/22 System Translation c370
12/27/22 System Translation c369
12/27/22 System Translation c368
12/27/22 System Translation c367
12/27/22 System Translation c366
12/27/22 System Translation c365
12/26/22 System Translation c364
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Review
9 Reviews


Heartless
Heartless
Oct 02, 2020
Status: -
Nice! The story has been quite intriguing so far (as of chapter 7).

The MC has a very interesting power and the premise is set up quite well.

The only thing bad would be the language. The translation needs an editor and a proof-reader. It's not bad to the point that it becomes unreadable, but it's clear that it's not translated by someone native to english.

I'll leave my review at 5 stars for now, in hopes of attracting editors. I might update this at a later time.
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moneng85
moneng85
Feb 12, 2021
Status: Completed
4.1-4.2

deserve its current rating

MC is not scared to change the plot (some worse fanfic make the character passive until they are only a spectator)

the relationship between the MC and the characters are also well made

no romance

almost made me think there might be a future like that because the characters are true to their characterization/original work

a small downside is everything progress too fast, but other than that, everything is perfect, a well spend time and reading
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Foolish Mysteries
Foolish Myst
Apr 12, 2022
Status: --
It was an entertaining story to read. Although, the MC is quite OP with the system, at the very least, it wasn't as absurd as other fanfic where the anime's characters were all messed up and was downgraded.

Spoiler

In the story, the MC tried to use his power to save the Village and change the fate of several villain and tragic character. Although, the Naruto's world plot was deviated and was changed, I wasn't upset because the character's weren't dead and didn't turn black.

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ssj4 shi hao
ssj4 shi hao
Jul 09, 2022
Status: c378
Amazing book. Among the best naruto fanfictions. It does drag in some places and the story is missing some details, but it still very good and there are none of the lame tropes we see over and over.
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rezaxzxzd
rezaxzxzd
Sep 06, 2022
Status: c300
This fanfic is not bad and quite worth reading. MC OP is like most fanfics, but it doesn't make the story bland like most out there. The interaction between the characters is also good, and the dialogue is quite lively. And what I like about it is that there are not too many battles that the MC goes through like most other fanfics which only contain monotonous and boring battles, MC is lazy and doesn't like troublesome things and this is what I rarely find in Naruto fanfics, most of... more>> which are bloody MCs. Heat that just fights wherever the plot goes. I recommend this👍 <<less
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Class Heaven
Class Heaven
Jul 18, 2021
Status: Completed
An interesting take on the Fan-fiction, moreover it's a well developed plot.

The one problem is that, the rushing releases of manga in the novel and also the ending was subpar. It could've been lot better.
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Alfha Robby
Alfha Robby
Dec 10, 2020
Status: c378
a typical transmigrator MC with System, more point = more power, MC literally have system that sell him item MC draw on his comic, only after other people beside MC read that chapter of comic could MC purchase that power, for example if MC draw the skypeia arc about Logia Fruit Rumble (Enel) One Piece, MC could purchase thunder thunder fruit / Goro Goro no mi.

MC transmigrate into Kurama Clan right after the first great shinobi war end, he write Naruto & One Piece Manga, MC open Manga Cafe &... more>> spread Devil Fruit on the sea in order to avoid other people find out that MC could materialize devil fruit.

the first 270 Chapter were 5 star but chapter 271 until the end were meh 3 star.

also there's lots of certain clan reaction toward depiction of uchiha massacre & Hyuga Bird Cage Seal etc etc.

only read this if you have free time.

edit: forget to mention it but there's no nonsense Mission system so don't worry about Ens*aver System where MC obey it.

basically this fanfic is about how MC draw comic to get point after other people read it, more reaction from other people regarding the plot, more people recreate the jutsu & technique from comic, & stop Kaguya from being ressurected. <<less
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deviatesfish
deviatesfish
Mar 26, 2021
Status: c379
The actual content is okay, fine, probably 3.5/5.0 or around there, when I read it in Chinese or when I read it in machine translation. However, the group who translated this either used a really shitty machine translator or they didn't even bother trying to make the passages readable, because there were a lot of grammatical and consistency errors.

How you gonna interchangeably use "Control of Five Senses" with "Five Senses of Control" in chapters one and two like that? Or refer to Tsunade as a "he"? Or swap between "Chakra"... more>> and "Mental Power"? Or sometimes the character "Ryuu" is referred to as "Ryo"? Look, this is just what I remember from the first, like, ten chapters off of the top of my head, but there's a lot more.

It's not so bad that it's unreadable, but it'll give you a headache like it's some machine translation from ten years ago. Maybe what rubbed me wrong was that even with this poor quality, they're asking for patreon donations to read 45 chapters ahead. At this point, it sounds like some kid thinking they could pass off bad machine translation for manual work. You can get something more comprehensible from a MTL site. <<less
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Zeikfried
Zeikfried
Jun 09, 2021
Status: c110
It's very well done. In terms of action, Naruto-lore, character development, and style, it's all there. However, by chapter 90 I started skimming, partly because I wanted to read ahead and partly because I was bored of the status quo in the setting at that point.

There's not a huge diversity of characters despite valiant efforts to add in more OCs. So while the characters we have are great, you don't have the "Naruto" feel of bouncing from character arc to character arc. But the set up is there. It's worth... more>> following.

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2023
What the hell am I talking about? Was I that forgiving with the grammar? 5 star => 3 Stars <<less
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