I wrote that this book is pretty much unreasonable but was good bc I love yandere and etc humnn okay

And I also wrote that MC is a bit too annoying (and she is)

And also I wrote that the villain is braindead one (and they are)

p.s don't expect so much from the villain bc they did not have a brain. Can be easly swept bt ML breath lol.

After MC dIeD again, ML capture the system and then he took the lead of the system, and become the god of three thousands world

Bc he is a God, he could change human 'code' so everyone including in MC world

he could change their 'code' I think it was like this

so if this A guy annoy ML, he could change his code like his personality or brain (?) or his body I think..

BC He Is a God THEIR KIDS HAS SUPERHUMAN POWERRR THEY COULD FLYINGGYG OMGG but don't worry they will grow up in normal way bc ML seal their power thro their code..

too pushy. And not likeable :) I will say that she didnt deserve ML, I respect anyone opinion on her but for me she's useless. Apart from saving ML in his childhood, and shielding him from danger. She literally didn't do anything else (passive) Crying, act baby, and fussing around. Basically she's your typically chinese Female lead marry sue in shojo manga who have a great halo circle in her head

Srsly kinda make me pissed.

And the most annoying part is where she want a baby.

Dont get me wrong here gurls, I do like something end with baby there, but this lil shIeT really want a baby when ML is a bit uncomfortable. They barely had a moments of breath bc what happend the last time but FL already Act like "nO No nO I wAnT a bAbYyY I wAntT a bAbyYY!! YOu dOn'T wAnt To have a bAbY?? DO YOu HaTe Me??"

Okay she's 2/5

However, the plot turned completely crap after the ML turned 27 and FL returned, this time determined to have a life with him, and also save him. After they got married, the whole story turned as stale as an old bread. Author mentioned at the beginning chapters that she likes 1V1, so expect no little three to spoil the couple and create dramatic misunderstandings. I have no beef with that, but... come on! Just because there is no little three doesn’t mean you’ll write dozens of chapters about the game FL is playing right? I even thought that the game might be something important, since SEVERAL CHAPTERS WERE WRITTEN WITH FL AND ML JUST PLAYING A GAME. I kid you not. But then came several chapters about FL filling paragraphs about blackholes, what she thinks about robots, what should the future of VR technology be, and then scenes of various cannon fodders in several paragraphs that have no relevance in the story...

the suspense of this story mostly comes from the fact that the ML is a two dimensional novel character and the FML is from the real world. I was honestly expecting a more amazing plotline with this idea. Then the writer spent almost all the chaps by making it a slice of life then in the end all the mystery was solved so easily by making the ML extremely op. Like what the hell. And there were a lot of plot holes that it will give me a headache if I say it. Anyway the ML turned into a god who controls the worlds now and they had a child who can fly since birth. can this get anymore ridiculous. There should be a limit.

She’s a brave little 5-year-old saving the child hero from the children traffickers, sacrificing herself in a way that’s heartwarming and tragic. A+ start.

She comes back as the high school girl and queen of clingy chaos, pestering the male lead to no end. Poking him when he wants to be alone, using cheesy pick up lines...

Don’t blink, or you’ll miss her grand return—only to immediately drop dead again. She saves him from being stabbed, sure, but it’s so fleeting that you can’t help but wonder: was her goal to rescue him or to fast-track his descent into total emotional darkness? It’s like her life purpose is to sprinkle in some hope, then rip it away for maximum heartbreak.

Ah, the drama hits new heights.

The system said: because you keep dying in front of the villain, he blackened even more... so do you want to come back one last time?

Of course! But she kicks things off by lying about her identity, pretending to be someone entirely new.

Then, when the truth finally comes out—that she’s the girl from his past who saved him—he goes full-on indulgent mode, spoiling her to the moon and back.

And what does she do with this second chance? Absolutely derail her own mission to redeem him. Instead, she dives headfirst into emotional manipulation: hiding secrets, playing on his worst fears by threatening to disappear, and turning their relationship into a dizzying whirlwind of toxic push-and-pull that left me questioning my life choices.

And let’s talk about the romance. The male lead is the cute one, possessive but very caring.

But her? One second, she’s mad that he won’t sleep with her. The next, she’s throwing a fit because he’s too passionate. Cue the cold wars, the emotional tantrums, and the endless crying sessions full of self-inflicted grievances that she performs.

Oh, and did I mention she’s traumatized this poor man by dying in front of him THREE TIMES? Like, sis, haven’t you done enough damage? Don’t forget that your role is too appease and give him the love he never had while growing up... it’s not for you to indulge into his pampering and forget about the rest!

Honestly? The worst ick I got is when the system started to realise its mistake in full and kinda decided to abandon the world and the FL protested so vehemently without any kind of plan when she'd already known that her death had detrimental effect on the ML. That showed me the FL is incredulously against using her brain, inconsiderate, and childish, unlike what was being described in the text.

You also have to keep in mind that the relationship between FL and ML is based on almost next to nothing. FL is somehow a fan of a villain in novel (to the point that she would drool over a teenage boy ML, seriously??) and ML gets attached to FL after very, very brief encounters that last like a week and a couple of days? The novel would progress on the basis that they're deeply into each other of which I wasn't convinced at all.

Chapter 22.8

It’s just that the anger has not been let go, she heard Shen Liuchen said again: “But we will definitely be together in the future.”

“What did you say?” Zhang Meigui frowned and looked at him.

“I will chase her when I get into University, and we’ll get married when we graduate from University.” He didn’t hesitate at all. He seemed to have made up his mind.