I've only read the two chapters posted so far so I can't say all that much, but this writing/translation style conveys what is happening very clear and concisely. In just two short chapters you easily understand the situation and the background. There are not many stories on NU that are this cleanly written/translated and so I've given it 4 stars in anticipation of its future potential. 3 star (average, neither good nor bad) for the story so far + 1 star for the quality of the writing/translation itself.

First of all, kudos to the translator. It is refreshing to read a coherent translation once in a while.

Now, I have some problems with this novel. But since there are only 17 short chapters, I will give it the benefit of the doubt and continue reading as it gets translated.

The characters are empty. I honestly can't understand their motivations and their feelings most of the time, specifically, the actions of the FL (Sonia) is quite mysterious for me. The relationship between the MC and the FL is at this point... more>> very strange. They care for each other but they only met a few days ago.

At some point, something happens to one of the prominent characters but that doesn't make me feel worried since I am not attached to the character at all. The only slight attachment I have is towards the MC but that is all.

The good things? Well, at this point I don't have any.

I will update this review once the story progresses. <<less