The Otherworldly Adventures of a Super Naive Girl

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A heroine character transmigrates and gets busy expanding her golden halo of MC-ness.

A villainess character transmigrates and gets busy changing her cannon-fodder fate.

A side character transmigrates and gets busy stuffing her bottomless stomach. She holds a divine sword in one hand and a little bun in the other. She’s obedient, adorable, incredibly clueless, and frustratingly tightfisted with her words. So what does she do when she spies a cute blond?

Feng Wu: “Please marry me!”

Ming Xi: …

A hilarious story about an overpowered airhead in a world reminiscent of Coiling Dragon. This particular tale has an interesting mash of tropes.

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An Oddette’s Otherworld Odyssey
OASNG
呆呆少女异世行
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Artorias
Artorias rated it
April 4, 2017
Status: c614
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Just finished reading the final chapter of the raws that came out recently so I decided to give my thoughts. This is definitely one of my favourite Xianxia/Xuanhuan stories, the MC is a very lovable character and the supporting characters are also great. The villains however are mostly braindead and all of them are pretty much cut from the same cloth. The writing style is very comical and the multiple reincarnated protagonist plot is very interesting. Unfortunately for some reason the author decided to end the story in a rush, the story seemed to only be about 1/2 to 2/3 finished when suddenly a couple hundred chapters worth of content were crammed into a 3 chapter summary and the novel ended with multiple unresolved plots. While extremely disappointing the rest of the novel is definitely a great read and would rate everything except the ending 5/5.

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Aeiru28
Aeiru28 rated it
May 19, 2017
Status: --
This story really make me smile, especially with our sprout dull naive MC, and when I said naive, she is really naive.

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And she always said Master said this... Master said that... It's make me want to pat the ML.

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The plot too is interesting with some likeable side characters.

But sadly, like the previous reviewer said, the ending is too abrupt. It is just summary of event... or maybe because the MC didn't participate its, but still...
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HesheFell
HesheFell
June 26, 2017
Status: c614
I finished reading this novel this morning, and I can honestly say that the reviewers before me did not lie. Rather than saying the ending is abrupt, it is more accurate to say there was alot of cramming in the last 6 chapters. I had read the reviews so I was expecting it. The cramming wasn't as bad as I feared though. So I give the ending 3/5. After all, it was still good and only left a few things unresolved.

As for the story, it took an unexpected direction. There... more>> were devils, demons, ghosts, and blood rituals. I was thinking cultivating schoolgirl plays in forest of magical beast. But I forgot that MC is a FORMER cultivator. She's living in a CD world now. It should have been obvious, but cultivating was out. Nonetheless the world setting was very well put together. The only thing that baffled me was those special chosen, world shattering individuals. This threw me for a loop at the end as well and I was left to wonder about power dynamics. For that, I'm taking 1pts. Story Setting 4/5

I actually liked all the characters. Even the villians were well handled. Reading this novel, I learned that there are better ways to handle annoying villians in CN. Up until now, most authors treated them two ways: drag it out or instant fodder. In this cn, all the vilians don't die. Some actually live until the end. And that's ok. Because they aren't hitting the MC's face every chapter. All the characters, good or bad, reappeared in multiple arcs. Allies and friends are treated the same as the villians, but with more development and screen time. Rarely do people just disappears.
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*shrugs* The few that did can only blame the ending

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Side Characters 4/5

This story revolved around the FL chasing the ML and making him her baby's father. I really liked the relationship between the FL and ML. Both characters were sincere and loyal. The MC is very pure. The ML has the ability to recognize the pure of heart. This becames pretty hilarious later on as he continuously worries about her being cheated. As for when she is chasing him, the entire pure-hearted characteristic leads to some pretty embarrassing situations for our male lead. Their allies and friends converge to help the MC get her man and dish out some pretty interesting advice. On the other hand, we are shown rather than told how much they like each other. However, I do wish the auther wore the FL transition in her feelings for ML as more than her baby's father. Main Couple & Plot 5/5 <<less
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Otwentyfirst
Otwentyfirst
August 10, 2018
Status: c25
Second translator here.

It's an easygoing story about a pretty simple and straightforward girl. There're bits of humor sprinkled throughout and the face slapping isn't too ridiculous. I feel like a fish where sometime the line slackens and I lose interest then out of nowhere I'm reeled back in and I can't help but be hooked again. It's a fun read with entertaining side characters. I especially enjoy little Tian Ke, he's such a mini grown-up! I'm really curious about the "Villainess" as she doesn't seem like a your stereotypical villain.... more>> The only downer is the large amount of names. Ugh.. So many names. It just kills me. <<less
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libraryrocker
libraryrocker rated it
April 10, 2018
Status: c4
I love this story with the fiery burning passion of 10, 000 suns! ! ! So I was super happy when someone picked it up again.

I adore the MC and the devil baby.
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koco2018
koco2018 rated it
February 15, 2021
Status: c211
I'm enjoying the novel, however the author really skims and skips on the finer details. People's appearance, their age, basic information about the individual----> it's all either not there, barely touched upon, or sprinkled over many chapters. Like, I want my bios pronto, if the character shows up I better have a description to imagine a character within a reasonable amount of chapters. I'd understand if the character is mysterious but they aren't. I'm serious when I say there is little to no information available.

Ming Xi has blonde hair and... more>> the appearance of a moon god..... okaaay?

The little bun has blonde hair (It was white in one description) and dark eyes.... okkaay?

Feng Wu has dark hair (It was light brown in one description) and dark eyes.... okaay?

Jier has red hair and red eyes.... tf do you understand? Even the main characters are summed up with a single hair and eye color.

To hell with ALL OTHER CHARACTERS. Even the characters that show up constantly. The most I know is an occasional rare hair color, a icy temperament, a curvacious body, flirtatious eyes.... I'm starting to doubt if this is normal? or.... I'm pretty sure this author is skimming on appearance descriptions.

Feng Wu is not so naive as she is pure. She understands animosity and won't tolerate it if the other party attacks with mu*derous intent. Naive people wouldn't understand and would be a pain in the ass to read about. She is holding her own and depends on herself as well as relying on those she trusts. I'm grateful she isn't like "kill people who insult me" or "I'll forgive you for trying to kill me". And instead deals out punishment appropriately as she deems fit. Her master truly raised her well, but without common sense... haah. thank god for Jier.

You know.... the plot is all over the place, truthfully it isn't a well-written story. I thought it was the translation at first, like mistranslating or cutting out bits of info deemed unnecessary, but you can't cut what isn't written in the first place.

It's a cultivation story? right? But besides listing off the "magician, swordsman, pharmacy, etc." sections, nothing else is talked about, no cultivation rankings, no qi-gathering training, no detailed lessons... She has a history class where she "listened intently" the teacher admired her student motivation, AND THAT WAS IT. WTF is she even attending that "AmAzInG" school for? It's a complete letdown, this isn't a cultivation novel.

Occasionally we read about a fireball, an earth wall, sword aura, god level artifacts, a contracted beast, necromancy, light magic, magic shields, spacial rings, inner qi... Like, this is a mix of SOO many different genres, am I wrong? Is the story not in an ancient Chinese setting with cultivators trying to become immortals and family clans that are ranked imperial officials? because I thought it was, but it's clashing with a westernized adventurers guild with saint magic and blonde princes... There are small worlds with ancient god tombs... but also virtual worlds with a vrmmo setting... The original FL is a transmigrator, the original female villain is a transmigrator, Feng Wu is a transmigrator......

.... This is what I honestly assume. The author was a novel addict, they liked these tropes; "I transmigrated into the villainess of a popular novel!", "Quick transmigration system: Female lead", "I fell into the game world of a VRMMO?!", "Powerful young miss and her little bun"....... No joke, I think the author was a novel addict who wanted to combine the tropes they loved and did so in a fashion that led to this "The Otherworldly Adventures of a Super Naive Girl" story. The tropes clash so much the world-building SUCKS, the characters' descriptions are neglected, the plot armor is god-awful. YET I STILL READ ON, BECAUSE IT ISN'T UNBEARABLE AND I LOVE FENG WU'S INTERACTIONS WITH JIER AND MING XI.

I'm only reading for Feng Wu, Jier, Ming Xi. I love and adore these hilarious characters, but the surrounding story is undeniably pathetic, so what the hell. I don't regret reading this, I regret tolerating the story just to see more of Feng Wu's character. WHY MAKE A SUB-PAR STORY AND PLACE A GOD-TIER CHARACTER IN IT.

If I haven't summarized this enough, the story is written to flow smoothly, but all the world-building details are left out. Sometimes a scene will be detailed enough to envision it, but most scenes give the bare minimum and your imagination must fill in the details and connect the dots.

I'm still waiting on Ming Xi and Jier's ages to be announced. All I know is that Feng Wu is 14 and Tian Ke is 6. Isn't that annoying, we don't even know the character's ages and their descriptions are lacking. How am I supposed to properly fantasize? <<less
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Foolish Mysteries
Foolish Mysteries rated it
January 31, 2022
Status: c1
This story would've been better if there weren't so many cannon fodders and villains. The females in this story have twisted personalities, imagine the FL just go to the bathroom and ta-da! A fight ensued.

For me, this story made so many female cannon fodder and villains just to highlight how innocent and pure the FL is. For the sake of plot, many of the females here were described as horrible people who have bad motives and schemes.
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autumnscarf
autumnscarf rated it
November 14, 2018
Status: Completed
This is a cute love story with a lot of adventure and mystery, but it's not a story with a power couple or a strong female lead. The real MC is the ML. Of the three female leads, we don't get much of Zi Cheng's (the original story's FL) perspective, and Ailin/Irene (the 'villainess') is a good problem solver but isn't on screen much. As for Feng Wu... she has a lot of cheats, but pretty much either can't or doesn't use them to win the high stakes fights. Hence... more>> the real MC being Ming Xi (the ML), especially in the latter half of the story.

The worldbuilding is great. It's a fun universe with a lot of magic and mystery built into it. But there's also a lot of slag family drama and vicious love rivals. A couple of these arcs were good... most involved your run-of-the-mill face slapping and plotting to bring down the FL.

There have been a few comments about the end of the novel. I didn't find it rushed so much as that Feng Wu pretty much stopped doing anything useful about halfway into the novel, so wrapping everything up the way it was wrapped up made sense. This story would have been better if it was written completely from Ailin's perspective. <<less
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Amatullah
Amatullah rated it
April 11, 2023
Status: c308
tldr: all the women in the novel are abominable, mu*derous, and senseless except the MC and the women that like the MC

I dislike stories where women are being represented as senseless, and I mean completely and utterly senseless. All the female antagonists hate the MC (who is female) for unreasonable reasons, they hate other women for being beautiful, they hate other women that get the ML's attention too, come on! Its the kind of story that keeps giving the antagonists screen time, I'm half way through the story and the... more>> antagonists are increasing, not decreasing. Not a single one of the antagonist have been permanently solved. And the author goes through so many hoops to keep the antagonists in the story that it doesn't even make sense anymore. Is the story enjoyable? Yes, it is, not because of the story itself, but because there aren't a lot of stories like it.
I really like the relationship between MC and Jaier, though, and I like cultivation stories that are more adventure based and kind of slice-of-life. But apart from that, I really wonder why it has such a high rating. Another thing I dislike is that the MC and her clique are okay killing other "mob" characters but the author doesn't allow them to kill even a single one of the antagonists
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Yifu, ZC, Yanran, Onleen and many more wouldn't have know how they died in other stories

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despite their destructive tendencies or killing intent. There were alot of places where some characters deserved to die but the author doesn't do it because that's how the plot is furthered, an antagonists does sth s*upid and the MC and her clique have to go and save them or they get dragged into trouble.

Few instances of female antagonists being senseless
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Earlier in the book, the MC meets some girls in the toilet and they accuse her of eavesdropping on them and they decide to kill her.
The MC meets that same toilet girl again in a once a chance entrance examination that has strict rules against violence, but they still decide to go against the MC.

One of the female antagonists decided to push the MC onto the path of deadly monster so that she can kill, in front of 2 witnesses from the same school

Theres also the arc where a woman knew the man she was married to was a blood sucking demon that had killed over a hundred young girls but she still didn't care because he loves her, despite the demon not actually being the person she fell in love with, her maid also knew about the demon but did nothing about it.
The same exact thing happened in another arc with a princess.
Im not saying there aren't senseless people, but there aren't only senseless women around.

One of the most abominable thing a female antagonist did in order to get rid of the MC is hire a bunch of bandits to kill every single person in the village the MC resided in in the beginning of the book. Only the MC, her son and a little boy survived. Im halfway through the novel and nothing was done about the incident

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Its very very clear the author does not respect women, just making your MC a woman and making her powerful doesnt mean its okay to make the rest of women utterly senseless. This was the problem that I had with Crossing Into The Future Im Now A Man, or whatever the hell the name is, it's only empowering when other women are on par with your female Mcs. Theres a scene where Jaier does sth very very scummy to one of the characters called Jasmine for saying bad things about the MC. <<less
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sassyzoe
sassyzoe rated it
April 12, 2019
Status: Completed
Finally completed this!

The ending was "summarised" so it may seem rushed. But just as well, I was pretty happy to know what happened without the minute details.

The romance was quite gentle and innocent. I was keen on continuing the story because of the unconventional personality of the main character, Feng Wu. She is naive and a little slow, because she's very pure at heart. I suppose the male lead couldn't help falling in love with her.

This novel is like a shoujo anime... complete with the school settings, friendships, petty rivalries,... more>> and even mannerisms (eg. when Feng Wu "blinks", the cute weird-looking wise-cracking animal sidekick who likes to sit in her hair etc)

I started with the translation (thank you translators for introducing such a cute story!) but it'll take at the least, a couple of months before the whole 614-chapter book can be completed. I can't read chinese very well so I installed "Read Aloud: A Text to Speech Voice Reader" chrome extension so I can have it read to me. The raws for those who are keen -

Enjoy! <<less
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Mino Micha
Mino Micha rated it
July 3, 2018
Status: c18
This is a very stress-free story, it's also very addicting! But even though it doesn't have any really heavy topics (in what I've read so far), it can frustrate you anyway! (a good kind of frustration, the one you make when you see someone make a s*upid decision and can't do anything to stop it)

You just can't help but adore the MC and her baby! I especially adore the baby! If only real babies are like that... It's a story that puts a smile on your face (because it's... more>> simply hilarious!)

I've only read until chap 18 (thank you translator-sama) and am currently planning to torture myself with mtl just to read more, that's how good it is! <<less
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solivagantsoul
solivagantsoul
August 30, 2020
Status: Completed
it was an okay read.

not too good nor too bad.

though, if I had another chance id have rather not gone to read the whole book-nothing memorable nor truly interesting goes on.

... more>> i went in expecting a lot but came out very, very disappointed.

warning ⚠ spoilers ahead.

yes, it does have a 'mash of tropes' but there is no point since it's not even well executed. It's not that the MTL is bad, but that the story is too plain. At the very least I would've expected it to at least be funny, but nope there is no humor involved-at all.

honestly im not even a fan of the main couple-like they didn't make me feel like there was even crazy love. im not even sure at what point they got together... like she just kept verbally proposing and he kept rejecting, they go fight together multiple times-not much romance at all then bam! suddenly they together.

there are plenty of plot holes and even weirder things that make absolute no sense. for one, why was the elf king in the body of the woman the MC transmigrates to? because yes, if it was the MC then yeah it would make sense since she has a very very pure soul and this aura around her that attracts plants/beasts and well duhhh elf king=king of the forest lol ? anyways id believe it then but why the original body? Also she can see a lot of things others cant like those spirits etc but why? why does she even have that aura that makes plants and animals like her? where did she even come from? her origin?

ngl IMHO the 4 star and 5 star ratings are exaggerated. <<less
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MidstNost
MidstNost rated it
August 4, 2020
Status: c89
I like how the title says the MC is a naive girl but really, she actually has more common sense than those generic female leads in other xuanhuan novels. She's also not those helpless damsel in distress just waiting for her ML to help her, even if she's described as 'innocent', 'clueless' or 'naive' she wouldn't hesitate to retaliate and even kill someone who tries to harm her.

MC does not have an annoying personality, +1. She reminds me of Shen Ying from MMDYA (because of her cluelessness towards xianxia) but... more>> less lazy and much kinder. And like Shen Ying, she acts more like a mob/background character rather than a true protagonist, as said by the synopsis. She still remains as OP as ever, though not many people can see it and only see her as a plain and silly young girl. She remains powerful throughout the novel, but we rarely see her get a chance to actually 'show off' since she doesn't really bother with fighting that much. Only if she gets actually harmed then she would fight back.

There would also be characters as special and unique as the MC, some would even be considered more amazing and cooler. All of them are transmigrators from different worlds with different experiences. But what does that have to with her? Her one true goal is to eat, eat, eat and live happily with her baby. It's a feel-good type of novel, and I absolutely love it. She really has no care and would treat every person equally, even if they are a powerful master with godlike powers or an old stranger.

It's more focused on adventure and childcare rather than just romance, which is a BIG plus. It's also a breathe of fresh air after reading all those xuanhuan novels with nothing but revenge and face slapping (although there's no problem with those and I actually like those tropes, it's still nice to find something new sometimes.)

Now to the problems:

-I'm not that satisfied with ML (?) Like I'm grateful he isn't the super cold iceblock type or the rap*st harasser type who can only show love through s*xual harassment.
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But that one incident where the MC having a baby got leaked and got her in a scandal, the ML didn't even try to defend her. Like I know he doesn't have to but he should've atleast tell his 'fans' to not bully the MC because his fans were angry at MC for confessing to him.

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-So many green tea btches like Alan duo, Fu Yi or Jasmine or whatever trying to provoke MC for shallow reasons. Really, it feels like the MC is much more of a heroine than the 'heroine' itself because she attracts so much aggro. I wish she stayed more like a side character, as the novel's synopsis stated and not be bothered with these witches.

-The mu*der/mystery arc has poor execution and pacing. It's like the author trying to milk it out. Some parts of the story also gets stale. I liked the virtual reality arc though.

-The heroine's personality is sooo fake yall. I actually like the villainess more than her.

-Ji er would've been a better ML. <<less
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Afm
Afm rated it
June 14, 2023
Status: Completed
It's a fun & rare novel!

The MC which is not like MC..

... more>> The best thing is.. our FL not such an airhead..
She's such thoroughly naive+lazy girl.. haha

Unlike those frm other novels, where their FL mostly like a 're*tard-monkey-clown'... Our FL here more like mind-her-own business & enjoy her self.

People might misunderstanding her as selfish.. but from my view.. she's more like "not over-reaching as knowing her own limit".

Too bad.. few chapters toward the ending.. the author skip some important scen (like.. how FL collect the material her master) and then summarize/lumpsum all-into-1chapter.

Hope the author could make some more improvement in his/her writing next time.

Not to forget... Big thanks for our translator for their hardwork.. *smile <<less
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rurimiya
rurimiya rated it
July 15, 2022
Status: c464
I really wanted to like this novel, I thought the premise was cute and I was excited to read about a cute pure protagonist.

But the amount of immature canon fodder female villains in this novel is baffling?? It felt like the author wanted to write super unrealistic/unreasonable female characters just to make the main character look better. Some of these female villains' actions/thoughts were so exaggerated and dumb it took me out of the book completely. I just didn't understand the need for them, it felt so antiquated and old.... more>> Can we move on from jealous and s*upid female villains? It only the females too, there are no male villains who are this /jealous/ and /unreasonable/ to the main character.

Throughout the novel, every time a new female character was introduced I made a mental game to see if they were going to immediately hate the MC or be chill with her. It was so extreme that I usually was right with either options. I just don't understand why characters can't be neutral about things? It's not even difficult to write normal characters. It takes way more effort to write dumb/exaggerated characters.

Otherwise, the novel is okay. It's entertaining and fun, nothing too heavy and it's easy to read. The MC is very cute and the male lead is also cool, he is a nice guy and their interactions are cute. <<less
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Saffari
Saffari rated it
January 19, 2022
Status: Completed
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This is such a lovable story and it's ultimate charm is its cast of characters, especially our inexperienced heroine, Feng Wu, who didn't get the memo that she's the main character at all!

Our Xiao Wu is such a great character to read because she is so blunt and unflappable without effort, her interactions with people are always so entertaining to read because she confuses everyone, friends and foes alike. She's really strong and capable, but looks too loli to intimidate anyone or clue anyone of her strength level, lol. Her fighting specialty is sword purification, she talks to plants, animals, and ghosts, Disney princesses got nothing on her, lmao. Hilariously enough, she is so lowkey, the only ones who know her and what she can do are the Big Bosses of the world, but she has no idea they're big bosses at all, just that they treat her and feed her well, lmao. What obligatory showing off scene? Our Xiao Wu only wants to eat, chase her Senior MingXi, and take care of her lil bun, ah! Her friends know her character well, other people aren't important! Most of the time she doesn't even know who these plotting flies are xD.

It's also amusing how her friends are all worrying about her all the time. They treat her like a kid who never got the stranger danger talk. Despite knowing how capable she is in fighting, they never fail to talk to her like a kid who is just about to do her first errand outside the house. Xiao Wu, don't take food from stangers, ah! Don't go to dark alleys with men you don't know! They all treat her either like their sister or their daughter despite how they're only a few years apart. The lil bun, who is an important reincarnator born from the OG Feng Wu eating a fertility fruit, is hilariously strung along the same note. This lil bun becomes everyone's temporary child, lol. He has a rotating cast of temporary dads and moms who have no idea how important lil bun actually is xD.

And the romance! Oh, this story has probably one of the purest relationship I've ever read. The ML is a prince charming type, quite literally, but without the unreasonable chivalry or nonsensical righteousness. Ming Xi is very rational and intelligent, perhaps so much so that it actually makes him and Feng Wu very compatible. But the most important part is that their romance develops naturally. MX starts off being very awkward and confused with Feng Wu (Like everyone else, lmao), but her straightforwardness and simple nature makes him fond of her as a junior and without knowing it, becomes one of the few allies he trusts without question. Their progress is amusing because for someone who he isn't interested in, boy sure does hold her hand and hug her a lot in missions, long before he even admits to himself that he adores her.

This story also has multiple transmigrated characters, the typical OP heroine with the cheat system, the canon fodder who tries to change her fate, and the reincarnator who wants to prevent the end of the world. And, well, our lil bun too.

It was actually interesting to see how the OP Heroine slowly gets corrupted because of her system. She actually starts off as a decent person with good morals, who is actually kind to others because she is truly nice. Ironically, her favorability system that's supposed to make her understand people better ends up making her treat people like pawns and she ends up just treating them like tools for her to use in order to further improve her reputation. Her system also allows her to exchange treasure for points, and then use those points to buy things from the system store. A good part of the conflict in the original plot is caused by her selfishly taking important treasures and artifacts, not caring about their feelings or importance in the world they exist in and just exchanging them for points for herself, making them actually cease to exist or even killing them. The irony is that she's the chosen child of the world, but she ends up being the harbringer of its destruction.

The canon fodder transmigrator and reincarnator are actually the types of main character you often get in good transmigration/second chances stories, they both have good characters, determination, and courage. Ai Lin, the transmigrator, has a good character development in the story, in which, from just caring about surviving and making sure the heroine doesn't get too OP, she starts actually living her life and doing things for other people and even finding someone to love. She becomes Xiao Wu's sister-in-law by the end.

While the plot in the last chapters does actually feel rushed and feel like a wasted potential for a whole arc, I don't personally really feel like it takes away the charm for the story. This is the kind of story you read for the characters. It could have been fleshed out more, and it would have been interesting to see Xiao Wu fight in the final battle, but in a sense, it is quite in character for her not to jump into conflicts just because she can.

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Nikko Anderson
Nikko Anderson rated it
November 13, 2021
Status: c614
The story was great. It was amazing. However although it has amazing start, good story telling, it often flopped at the puchline. Almost in every arc. The punchline felt weak most of the time, and although I was satisfied with the ending, I hope there would be more 'omph' to it. Still great overall. And I did not regret completed it.
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Makarla
Makarla rated it
June 28, 2021
Status: Completed
I've encountered the novel 2 days ago while looking for some novels to read. I rate this novel as 5 star. I don't know why it is only showing 4 stars. But this is definitely 5 stars. I've finished the novel mtled and I'm really satisfied with the flow of the story and how it ends. I'm into this kind of plot. The main leads are so loveable. How adorable the FL is... being naive and pure. The ML is sooo cute. I also love the other character. I really... more>> ship the supposed to be villainess of the real novel to the FL's brother and who would have thought that they will be the end game? I sooo love this novel. This is quite refreshing. I hope to encounter more wonderful novels like this. This novel is really amazing. Great job! <<less
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OfficePony
OfficePony
April 30, 2020
Status: c460
I was reading ahead with the raws.

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The mu*der/mystery arc is hard to swallow. The execution is poor, the set up nonsensical to a degree that pulls you out of the story because you see it coming from a mile away, and the build up is just meh because all the relevant clues are force fed to you through conversational exposition.

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HaruKoiUta
HaruKoiUta rated it
April 3, 2018
Status: c3
Thank you Justreads for translating the 3rd chapter ?

I really love the story so far and was really glad to see someone pick it up! I hope you can continue to translate the story even if the updates would be very slow ? I would comment on your site but didnt find a comment section so I will comment here instead! Thanks a lot for the update!! ?
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