After Transformation, Mine and Her Wild Fantasy

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When other people experience a body transformation, it is inevitably either male to female or female to male.

Me? I wake up to find myself transformed into two different bodies.

Both a male body and a female body, one conscience operating two bodies, all sorts of embarrassing moments.

Walking together normally makes other people think that I am sweethearts with my other-self, such sadness.

Also, the entire business of a hero rescuing the beautiful maiden, I call Bull.

I get slashed by a sword and my female body gets abducted, and he wants me to thank him?!?! Can it be less of a tragedy?

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ATF
变身之后我与她的狂想曲
变身之后,我与她的狂想曲
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Twilight Reverie
Twilight Reverie rated it
September 24, 2016
Status: c30
The premise for this series is fairly unique. That being said, it seems as if the author loses sight of the characteristics that define the premise almost immediately.

Rather than spend time exploring the unique situation that protagonist is in, and show him come to terms with being a single mind in control of two separate bodies, the author dismisses the entire situation; the protagonist is able to overcome any potential difficulties instantly do to a convenient natural ability to simultaneously split his awareness. Additionally the two bodies are almost immediately... more>> separated, after which point the author begins developing them as distinct individual characters. The only time the author seems to remember the two bodies are actually a single personality is when it is convenient for the plot's progression.

The plot itself is illogical and rather broken. The author altogether ignores simple solutions to various conflicts in order to drive the story in a specific direction, often leaving those conflicts unsolved and forgotten. The result is a work that is more frustrating to read that it is enjoyable. <<less
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victicdin
victicdin rated it
March 21, 2016
Status: --
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The editor for this series constantly disrupts the story to interject an opinion that looks like a teenager’s AIM roleplay, or literally just to say, “Hi.” (Literally just that.) The plot is forced and full of holes, the dialogue is dry, and other than the basic premise of the plot it firmly locks itself into generic tropes. The initial logic and rules for the MC’s 2-body skill takes a total gainer to adopt a generic KYAAA situation where both sides of the consciousness suddenly act like two different people in order to force a mistaken pervert route whereby the MC’s male half gets framed as a rapist and attacked.

After 15 chapters the female half of the story, despite being the same person as the male half and MENTALLY MALE, has made no effort to correct the situation that caused the male half to be mistaken for a rapist. She’s a weak 1-dimensional sock puppet who exists solely to force a pervert route and be lead around by people that do all of her thinking for her while inserting exposition and backstory for everything. The male half is off doing his own training thing by a “coincidentally” met several-thousand years old crab demon... but basically doesn’t exist either. He’s rarely made any appearance and is now incredibly thick-headed. What Smart Male Lead? He’s an idiot. Only an idiot thinks that asking a knight that responded to a woman’s (your) scream for help for his sword so you can cut through her clothes isn’t an insane thing to do that will certainly cause a misunderstanding.

After the initial contrived plot it’s pretty boring. I don’t recommend it unless you’re a teenager with a limited attention span that lets every situation seem new and funny and the lack of plot seem like a sound foundation. The story is entirely contrived to force a pervert route by the most heavy handed of methods. The author isn’t going to justify it and you’ll be left wondering why the entire situation that got them in this mess was dropped like nothing happened.

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DevilScarlet
DevilScarlet rated it
March 24, 2016
Status: --
@victicdin I think you are a bit harsh here...

TL or ED aren’t just some machine that exist for the sake of leechers who want to read novel. Even if it’s not your cup of tea without them this chapter wouldn’t be here. And please it’s a review so don’t spoil everything here or at least use a spoiler...

Lastly son' just casually put ppl that read this novel in the "teenager with limited attention span" category, calm down man.

Well then about the story, quite strange and hard to imagine.... more>> I mean hey did you already try to walk while playing a racing game on phone? Hard to turn on the game while trying to not IRL

Here this guy have to control 2 different body, even 2 different s*x.

At start it’s a bit strange then for the female part to be scared of the male part since there is only one mind controlling both...

Well after that we have some template things happening to both body but since the settings is like this maybe if the author make both body reuniting we will have some interesting things...

But I don’t think it will be the case soon even the MC don’t want this to happen...

5/5 for the original setting but 4/5 for how the author write it. <<less
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Docnox
Docnox rated it
June 3, 2016
Status: --
Fun idea, poor start.... horrible start actually.

The first chapter alone is like an easter egg hunt of plot holes. the entire beginning is kicked off with a huge misunderstanding. which nevermind fixing, even after several opportunities to correct the situation for the best out come the MC still lets it slide as if being viewed as a rapist is no big deal, and the possibility of never reuniting with his other half is simply a minor issue.

tons of important world building points are spat out rapid fire as if they're... more>> just common sense terms and commonly found in the genre of writing. granted, they are, but if you expect me to believe the amnesiac MC has such knowledge I call bull.

televisions built from beast parts... random, out of character, completely nonsense yuri scene... human learning martial arts from a non humanoid character... fantasy characters in another world using modern internet and tech culture references... the plot holes go on and on at a basically non stop rate.

the potential fight scenes, MC has a sword on the cover so its no spoiler there is combat. I sh*t you not: The bear attacks, but now its dead. is literally the fight scene with the most writing in the story so far.

Lastly to the TL, I appreciate your work but the mid chapter comment gallery is super annoying <<less
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Zathura
Zathura rated it
February 21, 2016
Status: --
The idea's fun and more interesting than the usual reincarnation plot, but after 13 chapters the female body of the mentally male MC still does nothing to correct everyone's belief that his other body is a suspicious rapist, and it's such a tremendous loss of face that no one in any culture would tolerate it. Basically the characters behavior is insane due to the author failing to justify the plot.
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ththth12
ththth12 rated it
February 21, 2016
Status: --
This story has very original idea of main character having two bodies but a single mind. So far, story has been funny, and there has been even bit of yuri development. Also, a person who wrote previous review seems to have misunderstood that scene. Main character has a single mind in two bodies, so he/she would not work against oneself. When he was screaming about shame, he meant shame of wetting his female body. Clothes on female body got stuck, and he was trying to use both of his bodies... more>> to remove them. There is no 'male' or 'female' mind here, only a single male mind in two bodies. <<less
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Akciel
Akciel rated it
March 24, 2016
Status: --
Good novel. I already read so many of this stuff, that now its quite hard for me to find somethings more or less unique, and this novel has it.

Well, I also seen many, that had a good idea but very bad realisation. This novel has a rough start (plot-vise), but I see good potential in this story and there is currently over 500 chaps in chinese and still going, so we can expect that author improved through this work, a lot of very good stories and authors made it through... more>> this path.

So lets believe in author and support translators hard work for us, that gives us chance to travel this journey with novel's MC.

Im sorry for bad english, not my native, so pls deal with it. <<less
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Love4NovelGuy
Love4NovelGuy rated it
January 14, 2016
Status: --
Made me laugh like crazy! I wish there were more chapters of this because of how hilarious the events and jokes are.
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123jbster
123jbster rated it
May 28, 2017
Status: c109
I'm tired, so I'll keep it short.

Initial start : 5/5
A bit past the start : 4/5
Mid-way to the current chapter : 3/5 and still going down.

Potential : still a 5/5 but you'd have to be pretty hopeful for that at this point.

This series took an interesting and unique idea, and had the inkling of taking it in an exciting direction -- only to dash those hopes shortly after. Do not get me wrong, this series definitely isn't "bad" or "terrible", but it quickly became "generic" and "nothing we... more>> haven't seen before."

If I were to describe this series in a single line it would be thus: "A promising start that ended up falling flat soon after."

Edit having caught up : So, I said you'd have to be pretty hopeful for this series to come back. Well, it did. It very much so did. The main character is shaping up to be quite interesting (Tyre). His counterpart (Lunaria) still needs some work but overall still enjoyable. I am happy to say this is sitting at the low end of a 4/5 as of the current chapters. <<less
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Wing0
Wing0 rated it
May 14, 2016
Status: --
The idea is great, with excellent potential, but implementatIon was horrible.

The MC (originaly male), gets transported into a new world and is now in control of two human bodies, a boy and a girl.

There’ s been a misunderstanding that MC (boy) tried to rape MC (girl), and the female body of the MC does nothing to correct everyone’s belief that his male body is a rapist.
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Shiroikaze42
Shiroikaze42 rated it
March 12, 2017
Status: c65
Love the idea, but the execution so far has been poor. The author begins by exploring the concept of one person in two bodies, but essentially it doesn't matter a few chapters in, when the two of them are separated. At that point the initial hook is gone. After that...

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The story essentially becomes a very generic "protagonist has massive inborn talent, and gets trained by the best of the best" but with both bodies; one in martial arts, and the other in magic. The protagonist doesn't have a very distinct personality, and none of the other characters stand out as much more than cardboard cutouts. At the point where I'm at in the novel, there is also very little happening from chapter to chapter. I'm still reading, hoping that the author will bring this somewhere good, but I'm also feeling that I may be wasting my time.

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Astaroth
Astaroth rated it
January 10, 2016
Status: --
This seems interesting, having two bodies is pretty novel idea alright, and I can already see how there’s going to be many different options for the author to create new types of scenarios (Kind of like how gender bender can automatically create these comedic scenes without even trying at times.) which I’m looking forward to find out how well the Author uses it.

However there’s a still a bit too few chapters for me to begin reading unless another reviewer heavily recommends it after at least decent critique.

Based on the... more>> idea alone I’d give this a 4 just to get going, because even if a novel isn’t great per se if they’re just different there’s still something to new to learn from them and I personally think experimentation should be encouraged.

Edit: In the end I just read it and god this is hilarious... Very promising. I'm going to change it to a 5 even though it's honestly a bit too premature to rate the novel this early. <<less
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Cupcake Ninja
Cupcake Ninja rated it
January 10, 2016
Status: --
I'm putting this after Edit 2.0: I rate this a 5/5.

usually I dont go for gender bender stuff. But, well this one has a pretty interesting concept. Honestly I hope the two can develope their own independant consciousness so we can get a bit of a romance aspect in there. Now that would be interesting, hehe. I havent read it yet but from the synopsis im expecting a good read. And maybe its just me, but the tone of the synopsis seemed more from the male side. Maybe the... more>> male is dominant?

His male body looks cool by the way. Heh, that sword and jacket are pretty stylish no? Im assuming it was originally a male who woke up with a seperate female body. That is what its saying right?

Well, anyway, im expecting the novels to be interesting. I hope this is a serious translation instead of a teaser or side project. Well, im off to read. I may edit this later.

Edit: Okay I read a bit. Seriously why do they always make the MC look ordinary? I mean the girl body is descrbed as a beautiful goddess but the boy is normal looking? bullsh*t. Why, just why?

Its just that it gets annoying that they make the MC's male body ordinary. Dammit if you are gonna do that make the female plain too.

But thats probably just his opinion of himself I think. Though its still annoying. I mean from the cover the guy doesnt look ordinary. objectively speaking, isnt he pretty good looking? And im only complaining because its annoying to me by now. The whole ordinary, plain male MC thing. Also now im thinking that they were originally two people who were kidnapped and their consciousness was fused. Well, im probbably wrong. Havent even read the entire first chapter so... im not in a position to make assumptions like that.

Edit 2.0: Read 'em all now. this is pretty damn good I have to say. I dont expect many chapters of this, the guy has like three other projects. I dont know if he has a whole team, I am assuming he is doing them all by himself. If im correct in assuming that, then uless he gets help or something then I dont think this will be getting regular updatess. Shame since its pretty interesting andunique, in my opinion at least.

Well, the other translations he is doing are pretty unique too though.

P.S I dont like that knight guy. Unless he becomes best buds with the male MC. And he doesnt start having feelings for the female body. Although that might get interesting if he learns they are the same person, but still. Then I would like him. Maybe. <<less
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Locke02
Locke02 rated it
February 17, 2018
Status: c129
The story starts off a bit rough and a little forced, but the series is pretty good overall.

The core, recurring characters do have their own personalities, but some of the other characters do seem to just blend into one generic "side character".

As with most Chinese fantasy novels, the main character is both extremely lucky and naturally gifted. A good example is that he starts to figure out how to do "parallel processing" and becomes proficient in it within the first day. Also, he just happens to find an OP master... more>> who teaches him OP skills... which he masters in just a couple of days. (I know that he hasn't fully mastered them, but he is proficient enough to steamroll through almost everyone, so yeah).

As to the negative reviews, I'd like to address some of the issues that people had.

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  1. The generic "kyaa" moment that gets him mistaken as a rapist. Keep in mind that the MC was practicing moving both bodies independently. The story has also had one body venting the emotions generated by what the other body is experiencing. So, the whole "kyaa" situation comes from the female body venting the emotions of panic from him not wanting to wet himself.
  2. The female half does nothing to correct the misunderstanding. Well, at first, there wasn't any need or opportunity to do so. By the time she event wakes up, the male half can't be found and he is busy training. By the time that the misunderstanding could become an issue, it is already too late to change things. Plus, the MC is afraid to upset things for the female half because he doesn't want er to be killed and he doesn't want to expose his "condition".
  3. The fight scenes suck. Well, they get a lot better later. The author just doesn't dwell on boring fights.
  4. The author doesn't explore the potential of having 2 bodies and starts to developer the 2 halves as separate individuals. Honestly, I don't want to read 20 chapters of the MC stunning his toes as he learns how to walk. Also, each half developing their own personality is a pretty good plot development, when you think about it. Even though it is one consciousness, the differing bodies and environments basically gave birth to 2 different people.
  5. The separate bodies is just as a convenient gimmick to move the story, but is forgotten most of the time. The bodies do act independently, but they are constantly sharing info, so I don't really see this point.
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All in all, I'd say that you should give this story a shot. Just don't expect some big epic and keep in mind that it gets better as it goes. <<less
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Clouxd
Clouxd rated it
May 18, 2018
Status: v2c27
First of all, Thank you so much translators and editors of this novel. You guy release quickly and have stuck with translating the whole thing unlike most novels. (Please translate all and I'll love you forever!)

  1. Even though the grammar gets a little jumbled often and the population of the world and cities are ridiculous, it can be completely overlooked because this story has yet to become boring! Everything is interesting and exciting since the beginning even after so many chapters in. I don't think I've come across a novel that hasn't had boring parts! Its probably because it's two sides of the story and both tell the worlds history and background without everything awkwardly jumbled in one chunk of dialogue that isn't realistic for someone to say.
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    For example, a huge chunk of background was the famous and legendary Lao jerry acting as a historic story telling during a huge event, like the halftime show of the Super Bowl lol

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    And that each sides have their own little love triangles and small surprises each time the perspective switches.
I'm actually shocked by so many negative reviews on this novel!! Please give it a try until
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You finish the ogre king part

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and then judge the novel!

  1. Also I messed up and slipped my finger so I might have voted for 4 stars when I tried to put 5 : (
  2. Please give this novel a try everyone!!
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Ranji-chan
Ranji-chan rated it
August 10, 2016
Status: c37
My god! this is the very original gender bender I have ever read before. The story was great, though I hope the release to be faster. Read it and you will trashed all the cliche gender bender!

Note: trash the bad ones only.... some are still cliche but cute :)
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Xeanx13
Xeanx13 rated it
January 11, 2016
Status: --
Currently at 4 chapters.

This is actually a interesting unique twist on the Body swap and gender bender genre for now I shall rate it 5 for that reason alone will update when more chapters appear.
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Tenacle
Tenacle rated it
July 31, 2018
Status: --
The potential for an amazing novel is sky high. The concept is unique and I outright fell in love with it. Reading the first few pages I immediately thought that this would be one of my favorites. I was excited of how it'll all go. But, disappointment.

The main character feels like he's disconnected. His curiosity is all over the place. Conveniently to where the author would point the story to. He seems like he is suicidal. I mean, does he not care about his own? He makes no effort to... more>> clear misunderstandings and just goes with the flow. Even outright insinuating and reinforcing that his other half, his own, is an evil person. Is this the character's true personality? Or is this just the author forcing his own ideas? Bending the character's decisions and situations for convenience. It's infuriating. Unless the main character is a deviant from the start, that is not how one should react to things. I am sad. The potential ruined by forced story telling.

It was but a short while. But I loved this. I could've loved it more. Now I'm just left heartbroken : ( <<less
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amimai
amimai rated it
November 21, 2016
Status: c60
This has high translation quality, and does well to keep readers interested. The central premise of the story is curious, tut is only now starting to get explored in any depth. I am looking forward to more chapters soon!

It starts of... while by no means generic, not unique in its settings and feel. After a few chapters it devolves from its generic OP protag LN into a interesting world building novel.

Well worth a read.
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Hamsta
Hamsta rated it
September 12, 2016
Status: c43
4/5 Going to be lenient & hope things improve. Might as well give it a shot if you've got the free time.

Started off with a unique gimmick (MC starts off being split into a boy & girl body that shares the same mind/soul). Unfortunately author implements it quite poorly. Seriously, all the MC had to do is claim his male body was his brother/boyfriend and he'd have no problems. Really indecisive and dumb for a guy with supposedly godlike parallel processing powers.

Utilizes the generic "one half covers all the weaknesses... more>> of the other" cliche while both sides are currently on separate adventures. But oddly the MC lost all his memories prior to splitting into two bodies.
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In this case the male half is a skilled sword/melee fighter while the female half is skilled in almost all magic except "space" magic (presumably they'll link up to fight together later and the dude half will cover that weakness).

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