After Marrying an Enemy General

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Zhou Mian, the God of War in the Glacier Empire, and his enemy, Admiral Cecil of the Earth Federation, fought on the battlefield for six years and lost.

What to do if you lose the battle?

Oh dear!

With a patriotic heart of generosity and righteousness, Zhou Mian gritted his teeth and prepared to accept the torture from the Federation, endure his fierce opponent , and live a life worse than death from then on, however…

Cecil: Madam Are you tired? Come here and I’ll give you **.

Cecil: Saturn’s tribute grapes, all for you to eat!

Cecil: Madam, the bed is warm! Come, let’s sleep /v\

Zhou Mian: …

um… what’s wrong?

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After Marrying an Enemy General [Interstellar]
嫁给敌国上将后 [星际]
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UsaYuki
UsaYuki rated it
March 28, 2022
Status: Completed
Great story! Finished it in one go hehe~ I think, the plot is not too heavy, quite a lot of romance (not that I mind~), very sweet and a light read ^-^) /~

And the mtl is readable ;)

Btw MianMian is so sweet ahh I thought he was cold as the tags said but ahhh he’s just so so sweet! Sweet and caring, even though not many know at first!

There are side CPs

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One is the Prince and another general. The other is a minor one, the this Zerg Prince and a ex federal soldier. I really didn’t understand properly, but I think the author was hinting on XiaoLe and MC and MLs child as a CP... But nothing‘s happening yet haha

(Why does almost every novel with children that I’ve read, give the children CPs QAQ I just want to enjoy the story ahhh why can’t the children just be friends/brothers (etc) !! Whyyyy !! Anyways... maybe I always mind, because I don’t like reading about side CPs ahdksjks Or maybe I do ask myself [in BL] why is each and every character gay O-O (why not, right? But why) and why are there SO MANY COUPLES!

Haha ;7;) /~

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So, all in all a good read~ Definitely recommended~ <<less
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AethIcamen
AethIcamen rated it
April 29, 2022
Status: Completed
It is fine. I read this because of child-smth tag becauseilovecutekidsinstories but I kinda don't feel 'em.

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•Xiaole. He's there since the beginning but his character is not that important ig? The story will still go on without him.

•The sister of MC. She's there in the beginning but she went missing towards the end. I mean, it is your brother's wedding them you're not there???

•Chris. He's from Glacier-smth and he was there to quarrel with ML for like 3 chapters combined??? Idk, the author did not focus on him that much. I feel like he likes the MC but sometimes it feels like a brotherly love so 🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️

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I also don't feel the fighting scenes because of the lack of narration (uhmm, there are times that the fighting scenes are okay), so if you prefer that, I don't recommend this.

All in all, the story's okay. <<less
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earlgreyt
earlgreyt rated it
February 29, 2024
Status: Completed
It's not bad. Pretty standard and cute interstellar style. There are Zerg (typical) but revolve around two countries (less typical).

I think the story could have benefited from better translation/editing. The grammar is incorrect, tenses change often, spacing is odd and there are strange line breaks all over. Furthermore, it's pretty literal. Sometimes difficult to understand unless I back-translate it in my head to Chinese lol

Here are some excerpts:

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"And two days later, the star network really... fried up." [Hint: It has nothing to do with cooking and the servers did not burn to a crisp or black out]

"#Support Admiral Zhou, anti-black and anti-violence." [Hint: The author isn't talking about racism]

"However, chickens talk like ducks and play the piano to cows." [Hint: There aren't any chickens or cows in the scene]

"The whole Erha was stunned." [Hint: No one named Erha and no dogs were at the scene]

"Chi Ying pushed the strands of hair that fell onto Zhou Mian's cheeks behind her ears with a gentle movement." [Hint: ZM is a man]

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yuukahhx
yuukahhx
March 6, 2024
Status: c71
If you’re looking for something to read without getting too emotionally invested, this may be a good read.

The story was light hearted, but there are moments where you would likely go ‘hm? What happened? How did they get here?’ - I am not sure if this was because of the original writing, or because of the translation. While I am thankful for the translators, the translation felt like an edited MTL (machine translation), and was very bumpy. Several character names were not kept consistent (e.g. Ellen, Aeron, Yi Lun were... more>> 3 names for the same person). There were some phrases that were clearly left as direct translations, with no explanation attached to them (I could only understand because I’ve come across these phrases before). Some paragraphs were confusing to understand.

Overall:

1. Enjoyment - 3.5/5

Good as a brainless read to simply pass time.

2. Storyline - 3/5

Some places were patchy at best, some characters were introduced without any real impact or significance to the story (or they appear for a bit then abruptly disappear). Some plot lines seemed significant but were never fully expanded on, or simply rushed through.

3. Translation - 2.5/5

For the reasons mentioned earlier, I have to give this a 2.5. It is not unreadable, but it is not easy to digest as well.

Thank you to the translators for the hard work though! <<less
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takame
takame
December 16, 2022
Status: Completed
While looking around for new reads I passed by and noticed that this has a pitiful amount of reviews. It isn't bad and stay true to it's trope so if you want to have a fill of your interstellar, go ahead. Romance readers will like this bcos there is less action and more love story. This is a pretty simple, short and sweet read without breaking your brain. TDLR; good for light reading.

As for the couple, I like how the MC is a legit brave fighter not unlike the usual... more>> stereotypical shous. He looked like a soldier, not a helpless princess. ML is similarly strong and I like how they fight alongside and protect each other. From Cooperation to love, their relationship progression is isn't too slow or too fast.

And there is another twist in their identity that kept me going. It's destiny. Their relationship is featured more than interstellar politics with fighting serving as backdrop. There's also some fun faceslap situations with scum people around. For people who are not satisfied with the summary and wanted to know more, open up my spoilers

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When "political prisoner" is mentioned, people would immediately fear that the relationship will start up as toxic but it's the opposite of this story. Yes, our couple are both high ranked military personnel of both opposing government but MC is in a tragic position. Even if the mass recognize him as the hero, the ruling family wanted to erase their family. So in this case, it would be better to go with the enemy who is more fair and just. But their relationship was never one-sided. Both have saved, protected and benefitted from each other so they had a good impression of this contractual marriage. ML fell inlove first and MC also did but was late to realize. Their past that was revealed later made their relationship more firm and sweeter. Also I wanted to mention: yes, there are an adopted child and this have an mpreg tag but it will not be focused on them. They will appear intermittently throughout the story but as I said before, the couple's romance is more prominent than other things.

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Pessineito
Pessineito rated it
March 1, 2024
Status: --
I hate to give bad reviews and this is not intented as an insult towards the author nor the translator. I found that this story was not doing it for me and it was pretty confusing. I tried for nearly third of the story but the story failed to keep my interest so I dropped it.

Here is my impression so far into the story.

I got to chapter 23 and I don't know if it's the author or the translator but the spacing is so weird and disjointed and the story... more>> doesn't really match the synopsis.

Everything happens so fast that it's pretty ridiculous and there is no build up to anything. Stuff just starts to happen out of nowhere and it doesn't even make any sense.

MC is supposed to be a general/admiral but he is so soft that it feels off. Sure he has his cool moments at the start but then he just turns into a vase.

ML is also very confusing, there wasn’t really any basis for his kind attitude towards MC (DISCLAIMER! THIS IS PURELY MY GUESS, I DON'T KNOW FOR SURE:
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though I can guess that MC and ML have met when they were kids and probably both were prisoners of the Dark Phoenix group or something and they cultivated their feelings then

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It also feels like the general public is so weird. The two countries have been at war for half a decade (first it was 6 years and then it was 4 years so I have no idea how long the war actually was) so how there wasn’t any real tension against MC felt really unrealistic for me. <<less
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KaelynC
KaelynC rated it
February 26, 2024
Status: Completed
It's ok. Sort of sweet but I found the ML really annoying towards the end. The characterization could use a bit of work, but it's not a serious work, so it works for this kind of light reading. Main couple is meant to be cute, so are the side couples, but I'll leave that up to someone who isn't as annoyed with the ML as I am right now to judge. (Not that he's a bad person. He's actually a really good one and generally treats the MC very well).... more>> Liked the MC a lot- he's skilled, quite cool and adorable at the same time, and not a Mary Sue. He's no complex character from a classic, but is well written enough that I enjoyed most of my read. <<less
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amikyun
amikyun rated it
February 28, 2024
Status: Completed
4.0 it's not without reason.. They had so many potential but idk why author/ maybe the editor? Idk whose fault it is. They make it like this.. It feel like pitch patches clothes, so rough but looks good, but not tidy, making u fail to capture the emotion it's like u read a long short story.. (I know it short) but why make it like this? Like a bunch of spice put on one soup but the final taste just so so.. :'''
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Vyathra
Vyathra rated it
August 14, 2024
Status: Completed
.....I'm sorry but the pacing is off.

The logic is also off.

The translator is also.... a bit off.

... more>> Almost like unedited-mtl novel without editor/proofreader.

Not to add that the story is flat af and riddled with many plotholes. Is this the author's first novel..?

In the later part the names are often incosistence. Ellen even has 3 names. Maybe bcs the translator got changed? And in some part, instead of using "he", became "she". Almost like signs for raw unedited mtl right.

Not to mention the storyline.

The romance also feels rushed.

After the true childhood sweetheart identity got exposed (damnit bro cecil, he has a long eye-catching blue hair and u still don't realize all this time????), then they get into court phase for maybe 5-7 chapters, then bam they snusnu in drunken state. Then bam, within first try they got a bun. Then bam, the MC realized his true feelings. Then bam, he stop being a tsundere completely. Eh...

I also remember, the first time ML see MC, he was fascinated. ML thus said that he never really see mc's face bcs they always just fighting with comanding their troops, hence from afar, from their own mother battle ship.

But later they said (not just once) that they often spar in the battlefield? Spar between 2 generals? Eh?

Haiyahhhh -_-

Basically there is no mistery. We can already guess what will happen within about next 5 chapters. What hidden abilities and functions which that special item have.

I really just skim the chapters, and I can understand the story with no problem (altho the translator... kinda gave me a headache).

It's so rare for CG to has somewhat unedited-mtl-like novel. Usually if it's a novel from CG, i'll trust them blindly. I even have a special tag for CG in my personal bookmark system haha.

I'm sorry, translator san, but thank you for your hard work! <<less
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mintflavored
mintflavored
August 11, 2024
Status: dropped
The translation was pretty rough, and honestly, the author's writing just didn't do it for me. Everything felt kind of flat, even the action scenes were boring. The main characters felt super generic, which was a bummer.

If you're looking for a captivating interstellar novel, this may not be the right choice.
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listlessreader
listlessreader rated it
July 2, 2024
Status: Completed
It's more like a 3.5 than just a 3. Fairly fun story that doesn't require a lot of thought. You might need to use some thinking power to connect the dots for the translation though. Names and genders aren't always consistent.

The 3.5 star has more to do with the characters and the plot than anything. Like I said, it's a fairly fun story, but it's not really notable. If you were to ask me for the two leads' names a week from now, I'm not sure I'd be able to... more>> answer you correctly. Introduction of new characters doesn't really have much of an impact, aside from the antagonist, but even he felt somewhat lackluster at times. But if you want a nonstressful story, then this would be pretty good, I think.

The thing that made me raise an eyebrow was Cecil (ML) 's wishy-washiness.
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He had a white moonlight, a childhood friend who he lost way back when, and he'd always been searching for him. When he grew to have feelings for Zhou Mian, he felt very conflicted and began distancing himself. That's fine and normal. But then it was revealed that Zhou Mian IS his white moonlight, so he no longer has any qualms about who he loves. He didn't really go through any development in this area. It was just very convenient for him, and felt kinda cheap.

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That's what I feel, anyway. I guess it's sweet he remembered him for so long and never gave up on him, even faced with a possibility of a new love.

The story overall was good. It had some impactful scenes that made a shiver go down my spine, thinking about how good it would look if it had MAPPA level animation 😆 and I never blindly hated any of the characters. None of them were shallow (unless you count the cannon fodder). There are a good number of sweet scenes! So if you want a nonstressful interstellar story, then this is a good read. <<less
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bluedrop
bluedrop rated it
March 5, 2024
Status: DNF
I was hesitant to give this a try because of the reviews, but I have a 10chapter-DNF rule and sometimes 3.8 stars and up aren't that bad lol depending on the story.

The first few chapters were confusing af, but improved a bit as things went on. Ngl, I couldn't help giggling at:

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An excerpt from Ch. 5

"But after coming out, Zhou Mian was stunned.

Omg... !

Five men in black in the room surrounded the air-raid shelter and were about to go forward."

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The random slang really caught me off guard, and I'm not sure if it was in an intentional way because it kept reoccurring.

The story isn't that bad. The idea of it is pretty much cat nip for me, so I can stand a few issues with the translations. It's the execution of the idea that's pretty lackluster.

The summary is both accurate and inaccurate lol so curb your expectations. There is Fake Marriage, but they're not really enemies to lovers. MC is pretty chill and there isn't any strong aggression between him and the ML in the beginning, so at least less chances of forced misunderstandings and prejudice.

Edit: March 8, 2024 - DNF Ch50. Not because it's bad. But because I'm already forcing myself to continue when I have yet to like any of the characters and story enough to continue reading <<less
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Qiaoyishanren
Qiaoyishanren rated it
February 26, 2024
Status: Completed
Honest rate : 4.5 so it's fine to rate as ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Well, I had fun reading this novel, there are ups and downs and twists and turns but at the end it's a H.E so those little bit of frustrations are bearable. This is MPreg so I'm glad that nothing happened to lil'lion or to Mianmian while he's pregnant and that Obsessive jerk didn't torture him when the jerk found out that he's pregnant so I'm so glad for that, well, BL novels with Omegaverse or mpreg tags could be... more>> much worse than that so thanks a lot!

Tbh it's kind of refreshing to read a novel like this where they're not actually forced to accept each other as lovers as soon as they got married, it took time for them to settle their own feelings so yup this is a good read, so pls don't hesitate and give this story a chance~ have fun, j'ya! <<less
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Fisukisuki
Fisukisuki rated it
February 24, 2024
Status: Completed
Great Story with Lovable Characters and Great Action scenes.

I LOVE all the Actions even when it was Intense and I was Super Worried. But it was Well Written Journey and truly Great!

But I won't call the novel a Perfect one. Nothing is bad, but I wish the author could describe a bit more of some important scenes. ... more>>
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The one I was really curious was the process of the Antidotes.

Both of MC and ML finally get the Antidotes they need and then they reunite, but that's.

I mean, ML's antidote proceed was not necessary to be written or even mentioned. BUT I think MC'S problem wa the Biggest one and should have been mentioned the proceed of the Parasite inside him of how it get out or killed or both. I mean... For heaven sake he was already pregnant when finally they get the Antidotes.

No one mentioned if it was dangerous or not having baby with parasite or is it okay to detoxing when there's baby. NONE!!!

Author... Why you skipped such thing. You could just make up such a Unrealistic Out of the world kind of Explanation, but at least it would still be an Explanation. ┐⁠ (⁠ ⁠˘⁠_⁠˘⁠) ⁠┌

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And the ending. It's usually normal to have this kind of end as the Main Text end, but then the story would have extras. That's what happen in many novel, but sadly not this one. So.... The ending kinda feel rushed. Only slightly at least.

Put aside those two 'Flaws', the rest of the Story was still Magnificent and delivered nicely so I'm still Absolutely LOVING this novel.

Like I said, all important characters are Lovable. The Villains was Annoying. So it was balanced I guess.

Love the side CP especially Love Ellen's proactiveness of how he could be so Determinate and all his Actions and Ideas. Definitely love him!

The Main CP was of course my main Fav. Both MC and ML was Amazing and Well written so I love their everything, flaws and all.

All in all I LOVE this Novel Soooo MUCH!!! <<less
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Klimintina
Klimintina
October 7, 2023
Status: Completed
Kinda have the same story with the "O Pretends to be B For The Violent Admiral". They have the same author. But I still prefer the latter than the former.
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