so the villainess is the og fl. And she has a system that collects energy by harming people. And obviously, the first 2 or 3 times I didn't want her to win but after a while, I also wanted to see her do something.

see, her role in the book is basically to be contrasted with the MC so that the MC can shine brighter. It's so much that they are literally the same person with the same things and moving towards the same purpose.

Not only do the both of them have systems, have the same love interests and have systems with a similar target, they literally look alike.

and of course you're going to hear things like- but the MC is more beautiful and more refreshing. Or- they put on the same dress but the whole room feel silent when they saw MC.

The worst part was that the villainess and MC used the same methods to approach the ML but for some reason (plot armor) the ML constantly rejected the villainess.

It would have been fine for him to reject her because the method of approach was really s*upid- but the FL uses the same approach and is literally more willful in an unpleasant way and the ML suddenly losses all his senses- saying things like "he couldn't understand it but there was something that blah blah" In short he couldn't resist her.

if she isn't using a cheat we don't know about, then she's definitely using a cheat. Her system is just stronger than the villainess', literally. That's all.

at first, that plot armor wasn't so obvious until the ML became a teenager.

like literally, girls would send him letters and try to approach him but he would purposely isolate himself. Which would have been fine if the author included things like, he didn't believe in people anymore. Or maybe he went along and was humiliated but nope! He directly rejected everyone and automatically accepted fl.

Because every time the MC said that only he could see her, he would say something like, "something that belongs to only me."

I think the ML just wanted to isolate himself for the MC.

I'm not the kind of person to let the truth get in the way of a good story but seriously- the real world doesn't have so much stigmatization against the disabled.

and I was thinking- it's okay- it's all good, as long as the plot of the world aligns. But even in the world, there were laws against stigmatizing disabled people- mark you, these are modern educated people but- everyone has this thing against the lame. Like the moment someone can't walk- they are automatically useless and can't even have a romantic relationship- and I'm thinking- what?!

it would have been fine had the world been set in ancient China or the republican time or at least if the setting of the modern world matched the stigmatization but goodness.

What killed me was how everyone kept referring to the ML and Ji Tui (a lovely character- I was almost going to ask MC to open a harem) as useless people. Even the characters saw themselves that way. Apparently only if they could walk would they be worthy of love and affection.

and I'm thinking- what's wrong with you?

I can blame that on the years of stigmatization they had to go through.

but what kills me is the fact that MC refuses to introduce ML to her parents until he can walk. Like the f*ck! Would she never show him to her parents if he could never walk?

so the grandfather takes ML to beat the mandarin ducks. Yes!

he is taken to a heavily guarded remote villa where MC obviously finds ml. And I think this is where the setting starts to collapse.

the people who protect the ML suddenly become dumb as f*ck and forget their work ethic. They don't even report to the grandfather that the ML is seeing someone.

they are so gullible in front of the MC that she also rolls her eyes at them at some point.

See? She clearly has a cheat that the author has refused to tell us about.

the author emphasized so much on their skinship. Whether its FL touching ML's tail, or kissing, it gets old since they all are 2nd base act that were REPEATED only on different locations. What am I reading, soft p*rn? It's not even that good

ML and FL is too perfect here. The Halo is too strong, typical cnovel

at first he is such a cutie innocent type but slowly will be a big wolf (͡° ͜ʖ ͡°). Character development of the ML is good, you can see it slowly he change in a good way. Not change so much, still in the line with his previous characters. I like him so much. Well there is still a but, he is too perfect.. I meant he can do anything, ANYTHING!! Too inhuman, at least I hope he have something he can't do to makes him more human.

she's bold and cus of that the relationship between both ML&FL is good. You know in relationship one of the two have to take the initiative first, and here FL who did that job. Yet I agree with the other review who said she have no character development, tho I like her boldness

kissu kissu scene

he's too old-fashioned.. All that makes ML blackened one of the big reason is his Grandpa. He is too believing in other people word and treating ML unfairly too much. I think he have a mental illness cus however bad child do, it's not possible to always lock the child alone and never give even a bit of warm. Moreover, ML didn't do anything bad here!! He is too much..

the FL has a system and with the points she can go back to the past to help ML deal with his grievances

ML grandpa had to more or less imprison him? I mean he cannot go outside at will, even go to the university???

moreover, really, I hate his cousin brother really a real bully

Due to some evil people's schemings, he was branded as a harbinger of misfortune since he was born. He is also half-mermaid and couldn't walk nor use his tail due to him being slowly blackened from a young age. He was bullied for being lame, isolated, wasn't given any hint of love, and was treated like a monster. He grew inferior and savage, not letting anyone near him. Of course, FL won't listen and is still stuck by his side every day.