A fair attempt at a fluffy love story. The chapters are very short, and everything after c46 is a side story, meaning that this whole novel is on par with ~15 normal chapters of another novel. The upshot of all that is that things are quick paced, details are scarce, and there's no time for any real climax or tension. (The whole ex-girlfriend subplot ends up being just a blip with no real impact on the core story.) It's still a decent read in my opinion, but just go into... more>> it knowing what it is. <<less

Ahem, oyakodon, *waggles eyebrows*

Now that everyone is aware of my bias let's get to the review.

Details: This, being a web novel, largely lacks detail. It's bad to the point where the only thing I know about the two female leads' appearance is the fact that they have big knockers. That's it.

Flow: There're points where it gets out of whack. Like, several instances where the current flow of the chapter is interrupted to have a conversation that happened before the chapter. It's pretty jarring and there's no separation or markers to... more>> isolate interruptions. Or better yet it jumps forward and I had no idea if the last sentence connects to the current one or not. Wait that sounds a lot like my reviews

Smut: Glossed over. Behind the curtain. Alluded to after the fact. Fade to end of chapter.

Ex-girlfriend: Doesn't really add anything to the story other than to set up the introduction to the oyakodon pair in an extremely roundabout way. I can't help but feel that there are a lot of ways this could've been achieved in a more productive and entertaining manner. <<less

So, have you ever read those breakup novels and MC gets fluff from others and the ex starts to regret and you're like "that's what you get." Yeah, this story is that kinda.

I can't say it's good because I've already read a few of these novels to the point that I find this to be too predictable. The troupe for their breakup was that.

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Spoiler

GF did the make BF jealous troupe. This time, she put her time into watching a streamer and she got hooked to the point of forgetting why she did that in the first place. Then, after the breakup she regrets it and cuts ties with the steamer and friends. She's s*upid and deserves that like anyone says.

For some reason, probably cuz I read this type of novels so much already, I find pity in her character. Who in the hell does that unless she's cursed by a super dimensional being that influenced her mind? That's the head canon I'm running with to explain her s*upidity.

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But... Oyakodon, amirite? Pretty sure that's the thing carrying the story.

Anyways, if you like stories about breaking up with s*upid gf and getting into a (yandereish) oyakodon relationship, this is the read for you. <<less

Finished it, its peak, I love me my classic saving yandere mom and daughter oyakadon novels. Its good man MC smashes, marries both, has a kid, becomes a house husband cause the girls are rich. What more could you want? Plus one major thing that set this apart from the rest for me was the MCs personality. When faced with ecchi situations he doesn't deny them, instead he thinks to himself how happy he is instead of denying it for the sake of being a virg*n type MC.