A Smile from the Villain

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As a person who transmigrated into a novel written by himself, Qin Kaiyi experiences a huge pressure and burden.

Even more so, he transmigrated as the villain and is forced to follow the plot. Qin Kaiyi expresses that he doesn’t want to write novels anymore.

Qin Kaiyi: “WTF. transmigrating into the villain and being forced to follow the plot. Just let it be. Shen Feixiao, can you get the f*ck down from my body???”

Shen Feixiao: “Shixiong, I won’t.”

Alright, actually this is just a s*upid story about transmigrating into his own novel as the villain and getting pushed down by his own protagonist.

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反派邪魅一笑
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Gkii
Gkii
April 17, 2021
Status: --
Like others around here, I didn't check the tags before starting this so from time to time I keep remembering how much I disliked the second half of the story and how much I hated the ending. Tho I did like to until the point where ML grow up, thats where it starts to go down hill.

At least I learned a lesson or two:

1) always take a loop at the tags and reviews;

2) if I see the yandere tag then most probably it's not my cup of tea;
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thisaintmei
thisaintmei rated it
October 4, 2020
Status: Completed
I have mixed feelings.

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Throughout the later half of the novel, I was shipping MC with Ziyang Pei. So when I found out that MC still ended up with ML (who did some really shitty stuff to MC) in the end, I was kinda mad. It was more of a BE than HE. The end, to me, feels like the MC finally broke down and gives himself up. He never really had a choice, as ML would always find a way to force MC to return to him. The ending seems a bit tragic to me as the MC isn't able to escape the ML and the actual good characters don't really have a HE either.

Also, the ML is basically the villain of this story.

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Sayonarakeym
Sayonarakeym rated it
October 2, 2020
Status: Completed
Hello to the people who was planning to read this novel but decided to check the comments first UwU

So okay first thing first READ the tags before reading this novel :)

Second ML is Yandare and is really obsessed to MC (you will see it when ML got older)

... more>> 3rd I MTL it because I cannot wait anymore! QAQ it's kind of confusing but my heart is contented on what happened at the end!

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WARNING SPOILER: SKIP THIS IF YOU DON'T WANNA READ SPOILER

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(I dunno how to write on that spoiler hider so I'M SORRY QAQ)

So if MC got transmigrated to the novel he wrote... Well at the end ML who actually exist on MC's world got on a car accident and dreamed about his past life! (MC is actually working on their family's company!) ML is a Rich second generation and hey! ML is more mature and gentle now! So when he was able to pursue MC this time when they did it MC wants it! :) They got married (written as a Chapter title) and they adopted a baby :)

AND also before ML died on his world

ML wanted to go to MC's World before he died QAQ

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5TH I actually kind of felt bad to Ziyang when I read the chapter 96 : (Hoping he will find a person he will love and will love him back❤️

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After ML and MC died on the novel Ziyang wanted to go back to the time where he first met MC : (

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Review:

This is a story I just found earlier this morning and I was able to finish it tonight! Well yes I skipped some but bruh this novel gave me that interest and surprisingly I didn't dropped it! (you see I'm kind of picky when it comes to novel) and it's a story that I actually MTL because I couldn't wait at all! (I'm not a fan of MTL so this is a blast)

To end my nonsense 😂 just read the tags before actually reading the story! ^^

ENJOYYYYYY!❤️ <<less
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neenee
neenee rated it
September 26, 2020
Status: Completed
First of all, please read the tags before reading this. I really enjoyed the story, MC is timid but damn that ML is crazy. While reading it, literally had goosebumps. Overall I give it full, this is my first time reading a yandere ML, wasn't disappointed.... except that now I have a fear that what MC went through might happen to me >.< So Scaarrryyyy. 5/5.
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K1910
K1910 rated it
June 12, 2020
Status: c30
I haven't finished it, the beginning of the story sounds really interesting but midway, I felt like it was more and more cliché and didn't feel motivated enough to continue to read it... :/

Overall the story is still good and the translators did a great job.
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Sumer Sun
Sumer Sun rated it
December 3, 2023
Status: Completed
So I vomited 2litres of blood reading this, which was what I asked for actually.

There's not much to say, I will mention that there's no pure love or even Stockholm love, but (as far as I understand) entangled feeling of obsession, interdependence, wanting to control, insanity, guilt etc mixed. Physical desire is there tho.

Firstly the main cast of characters, about 5 of them, have a particular fixed thing/person they are obsessed with. These guide their decisions, their character traits.

None of the characters get any improvements at all, at worst, they... more>> become worse because of their obsessions.

ML too.... doesn't actually become better or get any redemption. He just becomes better at cloaking his true nature and enduring a bit more.

Also there seems to be 2 endings actually? I couldnt understand that divergence.

All in all, it was correctly said, "many things were doomed from the very beginning" the characters were victims of their own circumstances, choices and misfortune that they came across each other. Swallowing a bitter pill type ending for main couple, sad endings for others.

3/5 for the writing; I feel the messy- quick but slow plot and overusage of words couldve been written better. Few plot holes, weirdly disposable side characters, not a single proper female character, cast is too limited, Yan gu and Xiu Xian (?) history not explained.

Extra points for the author for not romanticising imprisonment, r*pe and torture :))

Mc's mind's shadow also didn't heal magically by love, nor did his resolve break.

Some personal feelings: my first time reading such dog blood dog sh*t novel, coughing blood and I feel horrible. But this torture was self inflicted I can't blame others. Will go read legendary master's wife for some healing ah. <<less
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IvaAres
IvaAres rated it
October 9, 2023
Status: Completed
This was really interesting. It kept me hooked til the end which is surprising since I usually lose interest half way through novels lol. The ML was obsessed with the MC. It didn't even feel like love. Just obsession. And the entire time the MC just wanted to go back home or leave the ML. So make sure to READ THE TAGS. Overall, I enjoyed this novel.

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The ML and MC didn't have romantic feelings towards each other but it was more like dependence and companionship relationship, mainly from the MLs side. The MC transmigrated into the novel he wrote and has to follow the systems instructions to play the role of the villain if he wants to go back hone. However, he feels bad for abusing the ML and goes undercover as a masked man and helps the ML. The ML falls for the masked man and finds out that the MC who keeps pushing him towards death is the same masked man.

The entire relationship between the two of them is basically the ML running after the MC and finally catching him and imprisoning him. He imprisons him until they both end up dying in the novel the MC wrote. Then the MC goes back to his original life in the real world and gets a job at a company. The company belongs to the MLs father. The ML retains his memories from the novel and recognizes the MC. He starts pursuing the MC again and they start living together like roommates. After some time passes, the MLs passionate love kinda dries up and is now more of a companionate relationship where he wants to stay with the MC forever even if the MC loves him or not. Anyways, the MC grows used to having the ML around him and taking care of him for two years and when suddenly the ML disappears, he feels like he can't function. He calls the ML to come back home. The ML confessed his love but the MC doesn't give a straight answer about whether or not he lives him back cuz the ML did a lot of stuff like imprisoning him and raping him in the novel but is rlly sweet to him in the real world. In the end they end up making out without the MCs answer. The ML and MC adopt a kid. Initially the MC didn't want the kid but he ends up loving him.

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Akci
Akci rated it
October 1, 2023
Status: Completed
I deduct 1 star for the story having confusing, messy last chapters like either paragraphs are missing, chapters are missing, or chapters swapped. Maybe it's because the raw website the translator translated from hides some content. Another 1 star is for not explaining many things the story has mentioned previously, like

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Xue Xian's life. How did he die? What is his relationship with Yan Gu, Yu Hong, Ziyang Shi, and Ziyang Pei?

How did Ziyang Pei cause Ziyang Shi to get the gu?
Where is Ziyang Shishi?

Is Shen Feixiao really a descendent of Xue Xian or is it just Shen Kaiyi's bluff?

Why did Yu Hing retire from the society decades ago and not accept anymore patients?

Is Qin Kaiyi's hair white when he's dragged back from the modern world into that golden cage bed?

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And many side characters just disappear.
And I feel like, what? It ended just like that?? The story in the first half is comedic. The pacing is good most of the time. I couldn't stop reading the first 70 chapters. The r*pe isn't any more disturbing than other novels of the same genre, What's really disturbing is the controlling, possessiveness, obsession, and insanity, which are the theme of this novel along with
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the dream paradox from the Zhangzhou butterfly Chinese literature.

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. The yandere has also been paved very early in the story so you know.

The character development romantically doesn't exist at all. It starts from one sided obsession and ends with "codependency."

Spoiler

Time skip 6 yrs at ch. 51, 7 yrs at ch. 62.


The MC is topped by many people: 12 yo ML crazed in MC's fragrance, the founder of Hehuan Sect, adult ML, a disciple of Hehuan Sect.

The r*pe with penetretion is at ch. 71, 78, 88

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Spoiler

Qin Kaiyi pitied child Shen Feixiao he wrote so he disguised himself, helped Shen Feixiao, and was gone to continue being the cruel Qin Shi to fulfil the plot from the System.


The kindest person to Shen Feixiao kept leaving him again and again caused Shen Feixiao to develop a heart demon. This heart demon with the belief that if he's strong, he could keep this person from leaving, caused Shen Feixiao to skyrocket to Nascent Soul, schemed, finally imprisoned Qin Kaiyi and kept raping him.

Finally Qin Kaiyi made up his mind and killed Shen Feixiao to complete his mission to go back to his modern world. It turned out Shen Feixiao is actually also from the modern world. Shen Feixiao had been in a coma from a car accident and dreamed as Shen Fei Xiao in this martial art world.

When Qin Kaiyi killed Shen Feixiao in the martial art world, Shen Feixiao woke up, found the modern day Qin Kaiyi, continued to harass Qin Kaiyi. Shen Feixiao promised not to force Qin Kaiyi, but manipulate Qin Kaiyi until he had no way out except living with Shen Feixiao.


Somehow, Shen Feixiao in the martial art world discovered the System and completed the mission to bring Qin Kaiyi back to the martial world,
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amikyun
amikyun rated it
May 20, 2023
Status: Completed
It's Actually good.. But argh.. Really deserved to be hated, I almost getting twisted by this kind of story.. When I want harvest the sweet.. I can't.. When I want to cry be bitter and sour.. I can't.. What kind unsatisfied desire is this.. I almost doubt the definition of love in a second, fortunately they got dark comedy that keep my sane and turn down the abuse
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Akri
Akri rated it
February 28, 2023
Status: Completed
I thought it would be pretty much the same as the "villians self saving system" but over all it is completely different.

The MC is s*upid to say the least you would think his brave, considerated and a good person but he really just wants to go home and does whatever he needs to do with conviction an not with a bottom line, I mean he "doesn't kill people" but then he did kill someone and that's it, he just skips what isn't convenient.

The ML on the other hand is completely... more>> insane he doesn't even like the MC he doesn't like him at all, when MC asks, he can't think of even one thing he likes about him wich is hilarious and sad, but overall is ridiculous even more so in the extras cuz he doesn't even have a reason to be the way he is, he's not traumatized he's just crazy and MC just decides to be with him. Like ok weirdos...

On the other hand it's pretty well written, the translations are great on the plot just goes well for the most part, it's a bit rushed at the end because well it doesn't make any sense at all but it's quite passable.

If you like BLS cuz the romance and love, the fluff or the s*xual tension between enemies, then this is NOT for you, this is pure NSFW without the smut and pretty superfluous plot, you'll be fine if you like kidnappings and worthless people who r*pe their "loved" ones. <<less
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eonnisia
eonnisia rated it
February 27, 2023
Status: c97
I LOVED IT. ZIYANG DESERVES MORE.. Anyways it’s worth it. Ofc there’s some spectrums ppl don’t like but if you read the tags you know what’s up. Imo it’s not even that bad, killing stalking is worse to me. I particularly enjoyed how Shen gave Shifu closure and let him think he avenged his disciple.. I loved Wei’s character too. I wish Kaiyi could’ve gotten down with atleast one other lead buuuuuuut other than that, I totally recommend.
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Read for fun
Read for fun rated it
December 16, 2022
Status: c97
This novel doesn't leave you satisfaction but with a feeling of nothingness after you get to know that ML AND MC ADAPTED TO THEIR LIVES.

AFTER ALL HAPPENED IT WOULD BE BEST IF ML AND MC PARTED THEIR WAYS AFTER COMING TO THE REAL WORLD AND DIED IN THE NOVEL WORLD.

the author didn't need to give this sort of HAPPY ENDING.
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Foreveralone
Foreveralone rated it
September 24, 2022
Status: c86
I've read quite a few novels with problematic tags, but this is honestly the first one I regret. Not to say the novel was bad! It was really good, if a fricked up story is what you're looking for. I know I was looking for one like that, but like I said, really wish there woulda been a tragedy genre included at the time of my reading. I was hoping for some redeeming, some acknowledgement of the F'd up situation, some healing, but I got nothing. No love, just obsession... more>> & dependence. <<less
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Zozo7400
Zozo7400 rated it
September 8, 2022
Status: Completed
Well, tbh it was alright. Maybe cause I have read novels like scumbag system and the villain has something to say, I was kinda disappointed sometimes because I couldn't get that interested in it. But anywho, I'm glad I finally completed it, in the end I was getting irritated and just desperately wanted it to end. After finally getting to the end, I feel kinda bitter sweet about it.
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celton
celton
August 22, 2022
Status: Completed
I really wish to tell the author that this is such an amazing work!! Im very satisfied how each characters stay consistent even with all the plot twists and dramatic turn of events.

I'm also glad the author was very straight-forward in making ML to be a very sick-minded charming man with a twisted love

Im very bad with words but I hope people give this novel a try!

... more>> (I wonder if theres a "dead dove dont eat" tag in this website. This novel probably needs one hehe.)

Also. Be a responsible reader!! Read the tags before clicking. Dont slander the author for writing the story YOU dont particularly like. <<less
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alice_animelover
alice_animelover rated it
June 2, 2022
Status: c1
This was an okay read.

It had great character building, but the MC was definitely a true idiot. A lot of the times I questioned if the story he supposedly wrote might have been a stolen work instead. For being the author, he seem to be unaware of a lot of stuff that exist or doesn't exist in the world he created for the ML. Although the ML's personality did start to change after he became bent for the MC, I also continued to be annoyed at the fact that the... more>> MC doesn't recognize his other characters' behavior well enough to avoid certain situations. There were A LOT of times where I end up screaming, "AREN'T YOU THE AUTHOR OF THIS WORLD?!??!" And, the MC continues to make s*upid decisions.

Putting aside the warning tags (they were not an issue for me at all), what I couldn't agree with is the relationship between the main couple. They have zero chemistry..... so I don't know how they "fell in love" with each other. The obsessiveness and possessiveness are the only thing holding the two together. In short, it didn't feel like a "Boys LOVE" for me.

I'll give the author some credit for having a good sense of humor for some of the scenes though.

Overall, I don't recommend this novel, but give it a read anyway if you want to. <<less
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probablyanna80
probablyanna80 rated it
April 5, 2022
Status: c97
My love for Xi Zixu knows no bounds. Where there's the novel named, "You've Got Mail: A Cautionary Tale" I feel like this one should be named, "You've Transmigrated: A Cautionary Tale". It is dark. I knew that going into it, but initially I was thinking to myself that it was a pretty standard transmigration story, then it got dark, then it got really dark. This is a story about obsession. It goes beyond love and hate which is mentioned in the story. It talks about the butterfly effect and... more>> truly shows that no good deed goes unpunished. All of that to say that it also provides a good amount of dark humor. It hits very similar beats to her other novel, The Perfect Destiny. There are some minor inconsistencies with the story that the translator points out, some I caught on my own while others I didn't. The last chapters are very trippy. Creative choices were made that were odd for those last chapters. Almost felt like she wanted two different endings to the story and stuck both on, but not in sequential order. With all that being said, I still enjoyed it and it engaged me emotionally. <<less
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Q3APo
Q3APo rated it
March 17, 2022
Status: Completed
Well, fit with the tags. This I yandere lover with a lost in fight shou. The s*upid choice MC made destroy the plot and he reap what he sow. Quite fun because I really find a dark novel of love. Story is good. But the pace inconsistent. A little bit jumpy.
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senior apprentice reader
wtf.. This will be my favorite novel if the end is not there... more>>
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what the f the male lead make the “ill make you used to me and then leave you so you can't live without me” and the hell the MC is a nut, how can he not live without him doesnt he remember that he is a novel writer that lives by himself alone for years.

imagine this you've been tortured and locked up and live like a human ona hole how can the MC still love him, there's only either he's a fool or he like how the MC abuse at the same time care for him

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but damn this story is good even if the MC is so possessive and the weak MC, can't even threatened the ML to kill himself if he still harassed him (in the modern world). <<less
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neuxxx
neuxxx rated it
February 15, 2022
Status: c94
Translation was great 😊

the novel was umm, I had a mixed feelings about the whole text and somehow it was good but the relationship of main couple? Was not giving a feel-good type of feeling. Overall, ML was clear and persistent with what he desired and had a goal of sort which is a good point cus I have no passion for anything anymore and it was nice reading someone had guts to do to what they wanted.
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